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Do You Remember When… Chapter 17
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“You have amazing legs…”
“Thank you…, I see you have…a uh…, an amazing cleavage…” Bette stuttered.
The woman looked down, drawing her coat tighter across the flesh that this woman had been drawn to…, but then finding the woman’s eyes intensely boring into her own, she pulled the lapels of her coat wider, inviting the woman’s gaze further…
“I like your coat…” Bette said, “I have one similar to that…”
“I find it…, useful…”
“How so…?”
“It’s comfortable…and just so easy to take off…”
Bette laughed at the statement…, her eyes took in this woman who was so blatantly flirting with her, and it was working, she was feeling hot under the collar, to say the least…
“So…, do you come here often?” Bette asked.
“Only when I want a woman…”
Bette visibly gulped…, “and do you see a woman that you want?”
“Oh yes… I saw her as soon as I came into the bar…”
Bette looked around, scanning the crowd for anyone that this woman may have wanted to be the focus of her attention, she didn’t know how long she had been here, she may have been working the room for hours for all she knew.
“I’m sitting next to her…” the woman answered to the looks that Bette was giving the room.
“Me…?”
“Oh yes you…, its you that I want…”
“Oh I’m sorry, I have a partner…”
“So where is this partner…?”
“I’m waiting for her…”
“Those legs seem to go on forever…” the woman said, changing the subject, as her hand slipped across Bette’s knee, moving upward underneath her coat…
“Fuck…”
“What was that?” the woman said.
“Nothing…” Bette said as she placed her hand on top of the woman’s, stopping the ascent under her coat.
“So smooth…, so soft…”
“Stop…”
“Why…?”
“Because…”
“Your legs look amazing with those high heels…”
Bette relaxed slightly, albeit remaining flustered at the sexual tension surrounding her, “thank you…”
“Jimmy Choo’s I believe…?”
“Yeah…, last season…”
“But still…, you would never know, very sexy…”
The woman crossed her own legs, pulling her coat slightly apart to reveal a creamy bare leg up to her thigh, she straightened it slightly, showing off her own heels, “these are my girlfriends…, she loves to buy expensive shoes…”
“Christian Louboutin’s?”
“Very good, you do know your heels…, uh…, sorry I didn’t catch your name?”
”Bette…”
“Well, hello Bette…” the woman extended her hand, clasping tightly as Bette’s fingers entwined with her own…
“And your name?”
“Mine…, I don’t like to give out my name, but I will tell you a secret…” the woman leaned forward, her lips close to Bette’s ear, her voice was low and raspy, “I’m not wearing anything underneath this coat…”
Bette took an intake of breath, it caught in her throat as her head bolted back, her eyes met those of the woman next to her…, “nothing?”
The woman shook her head, “nothing at all…”, she pulled her coat apart a little further, baring her cleavage further, confirming to Bette that she was indeed telling her the truth.
“Fuck…”
“And tell me…, what are you wearing, besides that coat and those very stylish Jimmy Choo’s?”
“Me?”
“Yes you…, tell me Bette…, what are you wearing underneath that coat…?”
Bette gave a big swallow before her throat croaked the reply…, “nothing…”
The woman smiled, a big smile, “show me…” she whispered.
Bette pulled the coat slightly apart, leaning closer to allow the woman to see, revealing that she too had nothing on under her coat…
The woman slid her hand along Bette’s leg, sliding it under the coat, inching her way higher up her leg…
“Fuck…”
“What’s the matter?” the woman quietly said.
“I can’t do this…”
“Do what…?”
“This…”
“Why?”
“Because I need you…, now…” Bette said desperately.
The woman slid off her seat and held her hand out…, beckoning Bette…
Their hands met and their eyes locked, “I love you…”
“I love you too T…, but please can we go home…, now…”
“Absolutely…”
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Yay!!! You’re back…sure missed you and B&T! I love ANY story you write with those two. Don’t keep us hanging for too long! Just love these hot stories and the touching ones too!
That was sizzling hot. I have no other words.
Wow–such heat! Keep it up!
That is an awesome game that they were playing. Even though I knew that it was Bette and Tina, I still kept telling myself that Bette would not do that with another woman. Those two seem to come up with a number of ways to keep their love strong and viable. Welcome back, you have been missed.
Hey Jo! Wow…your other chapter is in the works, but it isn’t done yet (hanging head in shame). This, however, was amazing and likely just the inspiration I needed to complete mine! Thanks for the break from life Mate! XX
Smoldering HOT!!! ***Whew….cold shower…NOW!!!***LOL!
i like it when those two playing dirty games…so sexy
The “Bomb” story from the “Bomb” author is baaaaaaaaaaaaaack!!! And OMFG what a chapter!!!… It’s all there: Bette, Tina, the cold-shower-award-winning sex and of course the Levis!… Can you give me the address of that bar by the way? Some interesting encounters there!… Thanks Jo, please don’t ever put that story to rest!
Nnnnn… gaaaa… ohhh…. awwww… *thud* no words… just… *sigh* pure bliss…
ditto what anker said…….
Naughty, naughty girls. Must be winter in LA to need coats. I’m sure they are keeping warm no matter the season. Avons-nous des secateurs aux Etas-Unis?
Oooooooooo
Fuuuucking God!!!!! My Bomb is definitely back…Yehaaaa!!!
Just taking the breath away. It is so endearing to keep the seduction in a relationship. Thanks.
Myyyyyyy
Jo….HOT, very HOT!! I love this series. Please post again soon!
Ditto to what anker mumbled!
OMFG!!!! That was VERY HOT!!!! Thanks JO I am so loving this story. PPVS
Hot and playful. I love it!
Gotta love when they pretend to be strangers. It makes one-offs sound so appealing.
wow………….
Good that was hot! And unexpected to say the least…
he he he I think Anker said it all!!!
wow and that was not an ideal date?
Hey Jo, Thank you for a wonderful, hot ans sweaty return to the site. Absolutely amazing to see the heat that you can generate between Bette and Tina. It is so brillliant to see these gals as they were; full of lust and desire for each other. The bedroom scene was erotic and sensual while the bar scence was full of teasing and wantoness. Loved it. Please continue and show many of the other writers how it is done. You have such a descriptve flair. The images just jump off the screen and into the imagination to be replayed and savored later. Mmmm, just thinking about the gals in those coats. Awesome!!! Much gratitude and appreciation for your welcome return. Mnay thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
I…Errr…ahum….thud…thud…thud…I was brought in heaven…I haven’t breathe ever since i started reading this…thud..thud..thudbeautiful….
… Why did I think reading this while I’m supposed to be writing a paper was a good idea… and now I have to concentrate on research?! ARG. Jesus. Brilliant, Mate. Kettle x
B&T are hot and sexy and funny!