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Do you remember when… Chapter 4
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"T, don’t go… please, we can talk about it…"
"I can’t… please, its best I leave now."
Bette watched as Tina gathered her belongings, a surge of desperation washing over her, she didn’t want her to leave, not like this, "Tina, please… I just… think it’s too soon, I want you to be sure about us…"
Tina gave a small laugh, if only Bette realised, "I’ve never been surer of anything in my life Bette, look… its okay, I understand, I’m just really sorry I pushed you, I didn’t mean to, I…"
"T, stay… let’s talk…"
Tina turned and looked into her eyes, she stepped in front of the woman who had systematically turned her world upside down, the woman she was falling in love with, the woman she wanted like nothing on this earth, the woman she would have to wait for…, she gave an inner smile, ‘she’ would have to wait for ‘Bette’, which was pretty ironic considering their background, Tina never having slept with a woman before and Bette being the Lesbian Goddess of WeHo… wanting to wait for them to be intimate. Tina brought her hand to Bette’s cheek, looking deep into her eyes; she swallowed as she saw the elements of sadness reflecting back at her.
"Thank you for an amazing day Bette, is it okay if I call you tomorrow?"
"T…"
Tina leaned forward, placing a gentle, delicate kiss on Bette’s lips, before turning and walking to the front door.
"Tina…"
Tina turned, she gave a small smile before quietly replying, "Goodnight Bette…"
The click of the door shutting brought Bette back to reality, she had watched as Tina walked away, her heart was pounding, she couldn’t leave it like this, she couldn’t just let her go, her mind passing over how they got to this point, Tina wanted them to go further than their kissing, she had watched her undress, she had seen her standing in nothing but her thong, Tina wanted her and she had turned her away.
Tina reached for her cell and called a cab; she sat on steps outside of Bette’s house and took several deep breaths, to calm her racing heart, to calm her surfacing emotions. She managed one out of two…, the tears began their escape, slowly at first, but soon gained momentum as her mind recalled their day together, a rollercoaster of a day, a day she would never forget, their first proper kiss…
Bette walked toward the window seeing Tina sat in the steps outside her home, her cell phone in her hand, absentmindedly twisting and turning the phone, she watched as Tina brought her hand to her cheek wiping, her mouth went dry as she realised Tina was crying, she never meant for this to happen, she just wanted them to wait…, but wait for what…, some higher force to tell her that Tina was ‘the one’, or was there going to be some omnipotent supreme being to suddenly appear and tell her when the time was right, or to ask her exactly what she did want, and what did she want, did she want Tina…. Absolutely… How much did she want her… More than she had ever wanted anything in her entire life.
Bette quietly opened the front door, stepping onto the decking leading to the steps where Tina sat; she painted a lonely figure in the darkness, the light from the house and street lights giving an almost serene aura around her.
Tina looked around, their eyes meeting, Bette reached for the cell in Tina’s hand, the unfaltering look between them was intense, the emotion silently flowed between them, Bette glanced to the cell, her fingers quickly finding the menu for dialled calls, she hit redial but their eyes maintained the piercing look, she brought the cell to her ear.
"Yeah hi, could you cancel the cab for Tina Kennard please? Great, thanks…"
The all consuming look between them required no words, there was emotion, there was passion, there was desire, there was… love…
"Bette…"
Bette brought her finger to Tina’s lips, pressing slightly to silence the words, the questions…
Bette reached for Tina’s hand, gently pulling her up, guiding her back to the house… The sound of the door clicked behind them, the gentle noise seeming so loud within the quiet house.
"Just one thing T…"
"Yeah?"
"I still want to wine you, dine you and romance you…"
Tina smiled, "I’ll look forward to it…"
Bette brought Tina’s hand to her mouth, placing a gentle kiss on the back.
"T…"
"Yeah?"
"I love you …"
"I love you too Bette…"
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Breathless!!! Fucking amazing.
Damn Jo! My heart was racing along with theirs! How do you it everytime?How? I need a shower and all they did was fucking kiss!!! Damn!
A 10+ on the Richter Scale! *Thud* No One writes passion and romance and lust and desire like you do. Jo, you’re simply amazing. I agree with judith, I am breathless. Your stories should come with a health warning that oxygen canisters are needed while reading and for recovery afterwards. I know you must place yourself w/i your characters minds and hearts. That ‘s the only way your story could be so realistic. It’s as if I am participating in their actions not just observing. And you write in a way that is respectful to your characters and your readers. I am in awe of your talent in expressing so clearly what emotions your characters are experiencing. You write a love story that we all wished we had.
Ohh, isn’t love the best.. :-)
i think my jaw hit the floor and my mouth went dry readin your story jo and it was fuckin amazing absolutly outta this worldfuckk i am work how am i supposed to concentrate on spreadsheets when i am dreamin and fatasizin abt b and t having hot as fuck makeout sessionouch
No one captures it quite like you do …Every emotion that you can possibly imagine in this situation is right here…this chapter is so full of intense passion,…I had goosbumps! as always you come up with amazing chapters…then consistently top them!…Never surprised hun…But in complete awe at your talent…BTW the ending…Well!!this leaves it wide open for part 3…..lol…cant wait!……….
Damn I need a cigarette after that. I think I know what azmama’s talking about. You make it easy to step into the characters’ shoes. That’s when a story becomes 3D. I’ve noticed when I read your stories that it can take me over an hour to finisha chapter. Not so much because it’s long or I’m a slow reader but rather so much is happening that I find myself going over certain things multiple times to make sure I didn’t miss anything. One more thing. If I had been in Tina’s shoes and watched Bette take off her bra, I wouldn’t let out a subtle whimper. I would’ve probably fallen right through the door and landed on the floor in a gooey puddle of love. I’m still waiting for Tina to find the bathroom. I’m sure her bladder is hurting right about now. =p
That was beautiful, your writing is intoxicating!!
Wow……
so my little devonian shellfish – another genius chapter from you. i keep telling you that you are by a large distance the best writer on the site and everytime i say that you get all shy on me so – going to say it again – you are the best writer on the site. though i think he devouring of Bette Porter might be easier for you given your devotion to JB. frankly i am going to email the administrators and complain that this isn’t an nc17 cos it should be. i am in awe of you and i love you deeply — even if you are a clam
just thought of something else == while i write this season 3 has just started on UK television – – give me your version of bette and tina everytime cos you are more talented than the hacks that cobbled together s3.
OMFG, that was so real, erotic, sensual and any other word that can be used to descripe this chapter. Even though they never consummated their love in this chapter you could feel the tension, want and need of both woman. I am amazed that both women could hold themselves apart from another for as long as they did. I loved your description of Bette as the Super Hot Sex on Legs. It sounds like a very delectable desert. You now have earned not only the Cold Shower Award but also the Most Erotic Sensual Award.
Way much better than a NC-17. So much love and passion…Gosh, you describe so well what everybody is looking for. So so good. Couldn’t do anything than just read. This is trully amazing. The writing is amazing ! I felt like i was spying on them in their living room. It was amazing, really really amazing !!! Thank you so much !!! Fantastic !!
man that was geat and all they did was kiss
absolutely marvelous. Your writing is so good, there are no words!
Jobadge you have outdone yourself this time. This is a wonderful story and this is exactly what we all want to see, well, at least all of us TiBetter’s, “our girls” in love and loving each other. Thanks for your story.
Damn! These girls know how to make out. So glad Bette came to her senses. What was wrong with her, anyway? Well Jo, you’ve left me high and dry. All I’ve got is the couch.
A wonderful beginning…..love this
You know in my state I don’t need much to get myself going…Damn, girl, are you trying to kill me? You and Ally…I love England!!! Great chapter and I definitely can’t wait for the next one.
so exciting chapter! this increased the temperature and it was the first proper kiss! excellent girl!
God, when I asked last time for an other jewel to add in this marvellously beautiful necklace of yours, how could I have dream for a lovelier update ? You’re amazing, simply that, and I adore the way you depict with such a talent, deepness and sensitivity each step of this forever love story. What a wonderful tribute to this magical L word – the most powerful feeling ever. Thank you SO much for given us such an unforgettable gift ! They’re truly chapters to remember… And I cannot wait for the next !! ^_^
JB You are fucking amazing!!!! You say so much that needs to be said about something that (to some) seems so small. Excellent! Three hours and eighteen minutes – where did you come up with that time exactly JB?
All I can say is “OH MY GOD!!!!!!!” That was absolutley incredible!!!!!!!!!!!!! And you are absolutely incredible. Thank you for a WONDERFUAL chapter.
i knew it was a reason for me to stay up all night and read your story at 3 am..it was perfect
Wow! Double wow!!
WOW what a kissing marathon, but still no NC-17 Jo LOL!!! I don’t know what to say this time….other than you’re simply the best on this side and in general!!!!!! Your humble mate
Wow!! I’m at a loss for words! Just awesome! Such talent! Thanks jo!
Wow…I read this story at 3 o’clock and was gonna comment on it when a friend came by for me to go to the store for a minute and here it is freakin 1:14 a.m….anyway love the story love B&T beginnings please post soon.
Its so nice to see the return of the S.H.S.L. in just the right place. Thanks for the awesome memory.
THUD… that’s it, just… THUD…
Wow and that was just kissing!! Your chapters leave me breathless. You write like no other. The show could use your talent!! Please hurry soon with an update on what happens after the “I Love Yous”.
This is swesome and hot, love it. Cant wait to see more, post soon please, Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!
Jobage, Your write the intense, imaginative and romantic chapters. The love just flows from each and every thought and word spoken by Bette and Tina. Their sudden connection has both terrified and engaged and entraped both of their hearts. The level of detail is magnificent as I can picture every scene and feel every breath, every loving touch, every amorous moan, every anticipated lick and suck. I adore the way in which you had Bette being the one trying to cool things down as Tina’s ador was taking them past the point of no return. Bette was so brilliant is trying to soothe Tina and explain her rationale for stopping this act. Tina’s vision of Bette’d unexpected strip tease was a joy. I could feel my heart start to pump faster and as my breathe swallowed as this scene played out. Bette’s reaction was glorious as she tried to reassure Tina that all was well. I was on the stairs as Tina recoiled from Bette’s rebuttal and jumped for joy as Bette captured Tina once more and took her into the house. This is so much desire and passion in this magical melodrama. Please let the night continue and our gals get all hot and sweaty in each others arms. Brava!! For an awesome adventure. Your Loyal Fan.
Oh my god! I love the depth of your writing. The detail is amazing. Thank you for sharing this story.