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    Do you remember when… Chapter 5

    Tina extended her tongue, she was so close, and yet not close enough, she gently touched the surface of Bette’s nipple, the merest of touches and yet the sensation bolted through Bette’s body, she circled the areola, delicately flicking her tongue from side to side without coming into direct contact with the nipple, Bette was on sensory overload as she watched, her mouth drying, the deep moans escaping her from her throat as her back arched, her head sinking into the pillows as her eyes slid shut.

    And then she felt it, her eyes bolted open and looked downward just as Tina covered her entire nipple with her soft lips, she sucked on it softly, her tongue gently flicking its surface, to once again suck gently, and then, it was her complete undoing as she watched Tina devour her nipple with complete unbridled passion, the intensity of which very nearly tipped her over the edge into oblivion.

    Tina began the frantic consumption of Bette’s breasts, the sensation of having this woman’s nipples in her mouth, feeling the sensation of the softening skin hardening under her tongue was like nothing she had ever experienced, coupled with the writhing body beneath, it was the most erotic act she had ever taken part in, and she had no doubts in her mind that this just the beginning.

    Bette’s head was moving from side to side, the intimate pain invaded her body as Tina’s ravaging continued, her fingers entwined in Tina’s hair, guiding her face toward her own, she needed her, she needed to kiss her, she needed her to touch her, desperately needed her, this woman was a master, a master in the art of touch, and she had never felt anything like it in her life.

    Tina felt the insistent hands in her hair, the hands guiding her mouth upwards, her eyes taking in the state Bette was in, the hooded eyes, the parted lips, the ragged breathing.

    "T… god… I need you T…"

    Tina eyes showed an element of surprise at the insistent words, her mouth became dry as the understanding of what Bette needed sank in, she swallowed the lump in throat, closing her eyes momentarily, her fingers hovering on Bette’s stomach.

    "Bette… I…"

    Comments

    1. Absolutly the ultimate as Sensual,Passionate love stories go…this can not help but take your breath away…Not to mention making me speechless in places….God i love this story!……the absolute perfect end to your 3 part!….Thanks mate…Privilage to read it..

    2. Wow…I had to get up and walk away from my computer for a minute. I could have sworn I had the a/c on but it is really hot in here. I really enjoyed this story. I hope you post again soon.

    3. JB, my heart feels swollen from the love exuded in your words. Nobody describes B&T’s ‘holy connection’ the way you do – absolute perfection JB!

    4. Girl..I don’t know how you do it! That was hot and I’m not just saying that because I’m pregnant and insatiable either. Nobody can’t write them like you.

    5. Tina has said that Bette should come with a health warning attached to her. The same goes for your stories. No one writes B & T passion in the detailed , totally erotic way that you do. Jo, at some of the theme and amusement parks there’s a warning posted that states if you have a heart condition don’t get on this ride. So it is w/your stories. You should post the warning in the author’s notes/comments section. Just outstanding!

    6. I’m worn out and all I did was read! I really liked how Bette let Tina do her thing before taking her. It created an even bigger trust. Verrrrrry nice, Jo. ;)

    7. That was utterly breath taking or I should say breathless. All this time I assumed that Bette took that first step to making love to Tina the initial encounter. This is the first time that you see Tina actually making the first move and taking her first physical trip of Bette’s winding, curvy body. I too had to stop take a walkabout and then return to the computer screen. This definitely was a massive sensory overload not just for Tina and Bette but for the reader also. I do hope that you will continue with the Remember When series.

    8. Madame Jobadge…that chapter has got to be a benchmark for emotional and physical B&T unions. There’s a subtle yet intense orchestration of the physical and emotional elements and they seem to be of equal and very powerful force. This is not an easy feat to accomplish by any stretch, and certainly not easy to do so this well. The words and they way they’re put together seize the reader and don’t let go until the end…. Or maybe I shoulda just said “wow”.

    9. WOW holy freaking cow, this is unfuckingbelievable amazing. Love this story and hope you will continue soon or sequal a new one for us please. Thanks for a hot and sexy chapter, loving it!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    10. JoB, That was astounding. You generate the essence of romance and love in every chapter that you craft. Every addition has been eloquent and erotic; sensual and sexy; teasing and tantalizing; mind-blowing and magical. I am completely enchanted by your Bette and Tina. The instant connection is marvelous and inspirational. The depth of their feelings and trust give me hope that there truly is a soul mate out there. Your wonderful words create a sense of being there as an observer and being part of this remarkable adventure that these gals have embarked on. The road may be rocky and treacherous at times but together they will overcome all obstacles. You have given this drama a heartwarming and majestic soul. Thank you so, so, so much. Your Loyal Fan.

    11. Excellent as usual Jo! You done did it again! You are undoubtedly one of the best writers on the site! Your masterful at creating these scenes so full of sensuality, eroticism, sexiness,romance, and sweetness. It leaves this reader breathless and amazed at your ability! Post soon!

    12. I thought I should leave a real comment too…..and let me start by saying that you really did them justice Jo!!! I love how you let Tina explore Bettes body, let Tina really see/feel a womans body for the first time, so amazing. I loved ever bit of the post and I want more :o))

    13. Jo … I’ve have been following your stories … waiting for this one in particular … I knew you would do the thoughts we had justice. Congrats on a job WELL DONE! Ditto to all the other comments left with this story. I too was left breathless! You certainly have a gift when it comes to the descriptive erotic. Cheers M

    14. Jo, that was absolutely amazing. It was veru detailed, sensual, erotic…gosh I don’t think I’ll ever find the words. Thank you!!!! BTW, I love your stories. Please keep them coming.

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