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Do you remember when… Chapter 6
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Tina’s breath caught in her throat as the penetrating look joined the question Bette had asked. Tina gently shook her head in reply.
Bette smiled at Tina’s coyness, finding the odd moment of timid ness an endearing quality that she had come to deeply love about this woman, she maintained eye contact as she placed a gentle kiss on each of Tina’s moist toes.
“Why don’t you turn around so I can wash your hair for you.”
“I could get used to being pampered like this…” Tina whispered as she manoeuvred herself around.
“Surely someone has done this for you before…?”
Tina was quiet for a moment, knowing that no one had ever treated her the way Bette had, “No…” came the quiet reply.
Bette sat momentarily still, the sadness evident in Tina’s voice, she kissed the side of Tina’s head, whispering in her ear, “I’m glad to be the first, and just so you know… I’m going to pamper you and love you and look after you like no one has ever done before…”
Tina turned her head, looking around into Bette’s heart warming eyes, the love emanating from deep within, she had absolutely no doubts whatsoever in her heart and mind that Bette meant every single word she uttered, “do you know babe, you have already made me feel like no one else exists in this world.”
Bette smiled, “that’s because there is no one else T, it’s just you and me babe, forever.”
“I love you Bette Porter.” Tina turned her head around further, allowing her lips to meet the sensual mouth of her lover.
“I love you too T…”
“Which parts do you love?”
“Every single bit of you…”
“Are you sure…?”
Bette looked puzzled, “Of course I’m sure, more than you realise.”
“That’s good babe…”
Bette sat quietly as Tina relaxed back into her arms, the room was quiet, sensual and relaxing. She slowly closed her eyes, as her mind tried to fathom Tina’s line of questioning, not quite sure where it had come from. Her ears were alerted to a bubbling noise, she opened her eyes, sitting still for a moment…, wondering…, dismissing the thought that past through her mind as she looked down at the relaxed woman in her arms, but noticing a small smirk on the peaceful face.
“T…?”
“Mmmm?”
“Did you just do what I think you did?”
“Do what baby?”
“I think you know what?”
“I don’t know what you’re talking about Bette, did I do what?” Tina was trying her hardest to keep her face straight, looking around at Bette, giving the most deadpan look she could muster.
“Tina, did you just fart in the bath?”
Tina gave an astonished look, “No I did not!”
Bette turned her head slightly, narrowing her eyes, “you are such a liar Tina Kennard…”
“Me, lying, what on earth…” Tina burst out laughing, knowing she had been busted, and not able to keep up the bravado of a straight face as the horror registered on Bette’s face.
Bette gave Tina a look of mock horror, inside she was dieing to burst out laughing, but she wanted to make Tina suffer for this, “I cannot believe you, I cook for you, light candles, massage your body, wash your hair, shave your legs, hold you in the bath and you just lay there and fart!”
Tina looked mortified at the words, not realising that it would have upset Bette, but her relaxed demeanour and the curry, well, “Babe, I’m sorry… but you know the curry was pretty spicy and I was all relaxed… and …”
Bette remained cool and calm, her face belying the internal hysteria that was bubbling on the surface as she interrupted Tina’s words. “Tina, do you know what one of the best things in life is?”
Tina was confused, not quite knowing where this conversation was headed, she shook her head, not sure of what answer to give.
“Revenge…” Bette looked pointedly at Tina before looking down at the calm water between them, a string of large bubbles bursting along the surface as she erupted into a fit of laughter.
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What a absolute delight to read this funny, sweet, hot and fantastic chapter. It had it all….the mention and promise of more about the jeans (I’m glad you listen to your readers LOL); great banter between Bette and Alice – I loved how they conspired against Tina; loving, tender and mischievous interaction between B&T; a tease off a writer and you know I’ve to comment on the shaving thing right???? LMAO…..when I read the sentence “Do you want me to shave you anywhere else” you were close to send me into cardiac arrest!!!!!! Was that for me?? LOL. Thank you for the best post ever!!! I hope the next post will continue with Alice teasing Tina, then send her home and on with the evening Bette has planned and please don’t forget about the candy thong LOL….
I really believe there is more room on the out side than on the inside. By the way we dont fart in our home,we fluff. plux we are not fat we are fluffy. love this goes to show us that they are humans and not perfect. thanks
you went since the romantic things until the funny on this chpater! Bette know how to pamper her woman and Tina know how to start a war fart! very good chapter
It is fantastic how you have Bette and Tina reminiscing their earlier times. We only know a few things that happend with them before their seventh year together. So their first years together are wide open for anyones interpretation and yours is just brilliant. This chapter was great and I can’t wait to see what happens next. Jo, you are an exceptional writer. Thank you!
OMG, I laught so hard that I split a gut. This was probably the funniest chapter that I have read and there are some really goood ones out there. You can write sexy, hot, steamy, painful and now hilarious chapters so well. You are a master writer. Thanks for allowing me to laugh out loud.
excellant, i was actually laughing out loud
So who needs a Jacuzzi? You know that when you’re comfortable farting around each other, it’s love. At least nobody got the dreaded “Dutch Oven”.
ROFLMAO!!! Ouch, my side is hurting!!! :D
you are just brilliant! Thank you for the laughter.
Good chapter. They are so cute and freaking funny love them, and I agree with zabo. Ok post soon please, thanks!
I agree with Zabo. Jo, I was laughing out loud at this chapter, nicely done indeed!
Excellent chapter….LOL…A really lovely build up to a romantic evening…Dinner,relaxing bath….pampering…and then you end it with the ultimate…A FART!….well hun your writing talent…and your imagination have reached a new level!..lol..But i loved it..how could you not love it! you make these two perfect!…and now with that outta the way…lol…well makes ya wonder whats next???…Nice one!
LOL…hey i get to be first AGAIN!…well people will think im being tipped off!….or that i never leave this screen!!…
wonderful chappy…the realness of the situation was priceless
You know, the second that Bette’s first curry for Tina was mentioned, I started thinking 1 of three things: 1.) Tina farted in the bath, 2.) Tina got diarrhea, or 3.) it was bad and Tina got sick and puked everywhere. When I was in college I figured out that some of the hottest women can produce some of the worst gas in the world, both orally and anally. I mean, I was pretty gassy before I went on acid reflux meds, but these hot girls could damn near put me in my place. One of them had an equally gassy boyfriend (now husband). Anyway, you’ve probably guessed that I can appreciate it when someone writes one or both of these hot women doing something as vile as farting. I guarantee that 30 years from now I will still find this funny.
OMG.. LOL.. this is so good and reminding us that even pretty women like Bette and Tina do fart as well ;)
he-he-he but only after wow
well i was with Lamentamini on this one… i thought she was going to throw up in the tub… what a chapter… loved it… please continue
Jobage, That was awesome. I enjoyed and revelled in Bette’s care and attention in providing her paramour with a meal created from love. The gentle teasing and ribbing by and of Alice was priceless. As was Tina’s reluctance in sharing her first meal prepared by Bette. I did have thoughts of food poisoning/ fire trucks/ fire breathing Tina however nowhere was the idea of the first bottom burps in the bath no less. It was endearing and hilarious. Pay back was a delight too. Now just what will Alice do with these revelations; keep them for another day when she needs collateral or open her big mouth and spread them around the group. You decide because I know which one my money is on and it ain’t saving for a rainy day. Wonderfulfuly realized and written as this detoured from the predictable route. More please. Thank you so much for this light hearted and entertainment segue of the gals’ lives. Your Loyal Fan.
LOL@lament’s comments! LMAO off this chapter Jo! That was priceless! You know it usually takes a while before a partner hears their partner farts or does a number 2! lol Now they officially bonded!
…Well, I guess you know you’re really comfortable with a lover when you can fart in the bath together!
aaww that was such a cute chapter!!! =) love your story! can’t wait to read more!!!! =)
I’ve always said if you can’t/won’t fart in front of your partner, the relationship won’t last. Hilarious chapter.
LOL. I wa expecting a fart but was thinking it was going to be in Bette’s face.
LOL! :)) Awesome as always, Jo! Thanks!
LOL…….r we gonna read what Bette’s reaction and behaviour both b4 and after getting her pressie is like????? I can hear all the comments from Al towards Tina….lol….was great continue..please AND MORE OFTEN IF POSSIBLE!!!!
hey honey — well who would have thought that you needed to share their first fart with one another. somehow i cannot imagine it of either women. it was done so sweetly and as brilliantly as always – your talent is breath-taking and you will always be my favourite writer on the site. shouldn’t there have been some clams in that curry ??
ROTFLMFAO–that was brilliant and unexpected. Such a wonderful story once again…always worth the wait. The banter, Alice’s comments always, and the obvious love between B & T–you are truly gifted in the way you express it all!
bette in the kitchen made me fall out of my chair great