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Don’t Go (5)
“Dana?” she called, walking through the hallway. She knew this wasn’t going to be easy, Dana obviously didn’t want to talk to her. Lara had called and called, but never gotten any back. At first this just hurt, but soon it became extremely worrying. Lara had spent plenty of sleepless nights going through various scenarios of Dana’s death until she’d finally decided to come back.
“Over here!” Lara took another apprehensive breath before following the voice into the kitchen. Dana was sitting in a chair, her head resting facedown in her arms on the countertop. This gave Lara a clear view of Dana’s bare head. That, coupled with the extreme weight loss, was an extremely new and unnerving sight for Lara. She swallowed a shuddering breath.
“Hey. Is something wrong?” Lara asked hesitantly.
“No. Everything’s peachy. What are you doing here Lara?” Dana grumbled, adjusting her head so that she could see Lara.
“I was worried. I called and left so many messages. I was so scared…”
“Well I was kind of busy, sorry I wasn’t there to console you. Maybe you should’ve thought of that before you decided to leave me for Paris,” Dana snapped, glad to see Lara grimacing at her words.
“You told me to leave!” Lara cried defensively. Dana scoffed. She pushed back her chair and stood up.
“You know what, you’re right. I did tell you to leave. I didn’t tell you to come back, though, so why are you here?”
“I’m here to tell you I’m sorry! I shouldn’t have left. I just didn’t know what to do, I was so scared. You were telling me to leave, and we were getting into so many fights… I just panicked,” Lara responded softly, moving closer to Dana, clasping her hands.
“I know. But that doesn’t mean you can expect me to forgive you the second you say sorry. I needed you, but you abandoned me.”
“I didn’t just leave you all alone. You still had your family and Alice to take care of you.”
“That’s still not what you’re supposed to do to your girlfriend,” Dana sighed, turning away from Lara. “Especially when that girlfriend could die.”
“You’re right. I’ve been terrible. But, do you think I can still fix this?” Lara asked softly.
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(37 votes, average: 3.32 out of 5)
Yay for Dana growing a pair and telling Lara like it is, and also kudos to Alice, her friends were pretty shitty from what we seen on the show, she totally needed them and they all acted like she was an annoying burden on them! Except Helena whom I heart. Great post, can’t wait to see where this goes.
GO AL. I LOVED THE OUTBURST FROM ALICE. IT WAS GREAT. WAY TO GO DANE TELLING THE RED HEAD OFF.I love this story. Keep itup
woah great update here….Oh Dana blushes wt a nice way to get woken up eh…i think Al is just in shock she will be okay soon she just needs to deak with it head on. shes only dealt with trying not to be in love with Dana. Aw shane feels bad but its not just her that neglected Al.PPS x
tunafish, I hope you feel much better by now. Well said in your shoutout. Glad that D gave it straight to Lara. I hope A would not give up so soon. There would be so many issues to sort out. Thank you very much tunafish.
if Dana wants to get back together? Alice you let her work for it…Great update can’t wait for the next one..
Wow! Ok so ijust read alllll of this and damnY, i was really missing out on something great. Poor Al, i always got the same feeling that she kind of got the shaft around her “friends”….shes always there and genuine but when she needs them they kind of turn a blind eye. Im glad to see Dana where she neds to be and im hoping that this talk can turn into something good, the way it should have been. Excellent job…cant wait to see whats next. Thanks so much
Sorry to hear you had a rough night. I hope things are going better for you now. And school is the important thing — we’ll be here to read when you get time to post. I like how you handled the morning after. The reactions of both women seemed very realistic. Dana was a bit harsh with Lara, but, I can understand where the anger was coming from. Hopefully she can mend fences a bit once she is feeling better. Not that I want them back together, but, I don’t want Dana to feel guilty for how she acted. The Alice/Shane interaction was also written well. I wish Alice had told her friends off on the show for abandoning her. Thanks so much, tunafish! Can’t wait to see what happens next.