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Don’t Go (6)
“She doesn’t does she? Always with Carmen. You know you can always just call her if you want to hang out,” Alice said, happily noting Dana’s mood change.
“Yeah, they’re really going steady, huh?”
“Well.. I don’t know if I’d call it steady. Yeah, actually, I don’t know how to describe it at all. They’re weirdos,” Alice proclaimed.
“See, why don’t I know that? What’s so weird about them?” Dana questioned, frowning.
“I don’t know. They’re just… unstable. I think they love each other, though.”
Dana looked up. “They’re unstable? After that long? I don’t think that’s a good sign.”
“Yeah, well… I wouldn’t know. I haven’t had a relationship that’s lasted that long… in… well. Let’s just say, a long time,” Alice sighed.
“True,” Dana added.
“Thanks, Dane. That made me feel much better,” Alice said flatly, glaring. She kneaded Dana’s legs harder.
Dana smiled wryly. “Anytime. So what, you think they’re soul mates?”
“Ugh, why do you keep throwing that word around?” Alice asked, scrunching her nose.
“What? You don’t believe in soul mates?”
“I guess. It just sounds really cheesy.” Alice shrugged.
“Whatever, Al. I believe in it,” Dana said, nodding her head as if that closed the matter.
“I gathered.”
“So… do you think you’ve found yours, then?” Dana asked cautiously.
Alice grinned. “Oh, yeaahh. Gabby Deveaux.”
“Come on! Answer me, seriously,” Dana pleaded.
“Jesus, Dana. So many questions today!” Alice scowled.
“You told me sulky Dana was no fun! Answer curious Dana!”
“If I’d found my soul mate wouldn’t I be with them?” Alice yelled, abruptly throwing Dana’s legs off and standing up.
Dana sat up. “Okay, okay! Sorry!”
“Shit, I’m such a train wreck today,” Alice muttered, running a hand through her hair.
“What do you mean?” Dana asked warily.
“Nothing, nothing. I’m sorry I yelled at you,” Alice sighed.
“It’s alright,” Dana replied, standing up. She grabbed Alice’s hands and laced their fingers. “Are you still mad?”
Alice smiled. “No. Just slightly confused.”
“About what?”
“Your sudden interest in soul mates.”
“Ah, I don’t know. It just had a lot to do with, you know, Lara and me. The breaking up stuff,” Dana said, swinging their hands.
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(36 votes, average: 3.83 out of 5)
Aww dana you should have just kissed her against that wall! I don’t know whether I am romantic or just a perv… Anyway exciting post, I could feel the tension, hope it keeps up in the next. I’m still surprised and amazed how danish is kept alive and so well on here, makes me smile. PPS.
Woah the best chapter you’ve written so far, omg drama drama drama.Alice is upset because she feels that Dana never realli loved her in the 1st place. And Danas upset because she wants Alice back…oh please ladies make up with one another after all that youve been through dont let that be the final say on the matter of being soul matesGreat update PPSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
tunafish, excellent writing with the dialogue. It seemed so real as I could picture them talking. I am glad that D at least started to express her feelings. I can understand A’s resistance to the idea of getting back together. I hope Dana would not give up so easily either even though it would be a long road ahead. I love this story and this is an wonderful chapter. Thank you very much!!
Good job I like what Alice said nothing but the truth…But please don’t let Dana give up…Dana just need to work for it for once…
Great chapter. I loved all the dialog. So sweet of Alice to offer to run with Dana. It’s great that the two are communicating so openly and honestly with each other. The conversation at the end was angsty, but, long overdue — even if it did end with Alice running out. I think getting all that out will give them something to build on. They can’t stay mad at each other for long. Thanks, tunafish!
That was a really good chapter. I love to see that change of perspective. Dana chasing Alice and her walking away. Thanks for a great update
Love Love Love the update. Glad that Dana is being open on her mistake to break up with Alice. I always wanted Dana to be open…hee…..Thanks..pps….