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Don’t Say Good Bye~ Chapter 7
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~1 Year Later~
~Bette- 28; Jake- 27; Tina- 24~
“Miss Porter there is a gentleman here to see you.”
“Can you have him make an appointment please?”
“I would Miss Porter but he said that it’s not every day a heisman trophy winner comes into a gallery.”
“What?”
“Let me talk to her,” he says to the assistant. She holds the intercom button for him to speak. “Liz get your pretty butt out here so I can see you.” She hears a man’s voice on the intercom. She jumps out of her seat and goes out to see her friend that she has so missed.
“Oh my god Jake how are you?” She gives him a big hug and he picks her up and spins her around, then puts her back down. “I’ve missed you so much.”
“I’ve missed you too Liz. And I’m doing really good.”
“I can see that, wow look at you all buff and handsome looking.”
“Well thank you, and you are looking just as beautiful the last time I saw you, actually more beautiful.”
“Thanks Jake.”
“And wow, this place looks great, how long have you been back?”
“I little over a year.”
“That long and you never called?”
“I thought you were living in Texas?”
“I am, but you still could have called.”
“I know, I know, it’s just been really hectic when I came back with the moving, getting my gallery started, life has just kind of gotten…”
“In the way.” He was still finishing her sentences.
“Exactly” She looks at her watch.
“Do you have to be some where?”
“Oh no, I was thinking that it was my lunch break and I was wondering if you want to go some where so we can talk more. Do you have time?”
“I do and I do”
“Great let me just grab my stuff so we can go.”
“Okay.”
“Let me introduce you to my assistants really quick.”
“That’s funny”
“What?”
“Who would have imagined eight years later we would have assistants now.”
“That is funny”
Steve, Bette’s assistant, hears some commotion in the gallery and he goes to see what was going on. He saw the whole interaction between the two of them. He talks to Ann, her other assistant, “Who’s boss talking to? I thought she was gay?”
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they kiss! yes they kissed! i have been waiting for this kiss so long! wonderful chapter!
I so love this story and where you are taking it. Please Post Soon Thank you
Wow…I felt like I was in a time warp…but I loved it. Eric has to go…hope he causes NO trouble. Let Bette & Tina …Chrissy & Liz…shoot they could be Yogi and Boo Boo for all I care…lol..get them together soon please…how will their families feel about this merger? Please post soon. Love your writing.
omg..this story just gets better and better
I like the way you’ve taken parts of the show and made them your own. It was a treat to see two posts in one day. I like this story a lot.
*Purring* Rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr…..! Waow!!! Thanks so much for this long awaited reunion/chapter. The chapters building up to it were a hell of a tease, but god was it worth it!!! Niiiice! You made it perfect, and it was puuure delight! My deepest thanks for this!
Im liking, Im liking already!Now once Eric is gone, we can start some real progressioncosh tibette are just truckin amazingI dont know what ilene is doin * roll eyes*
OMG, that was the most anticipated kiss ever. Talk about it taking time. Poor Eric, but, bye bye you gotta go.
Tina needs to dump Eric and get to lovin’ Bette. The timing threw me off a bit, but this chapter made up for all that and then some. Post soon.
After all these years both have finally allowed those desires and very strong feelings to boil up to the surface. The fire that has been inside of them finally was ignited. I can’t wait to see those fireworks leave the ground and explode all around them.
Ahh love this, they kiss is hot and sweet and they are so cute. Good that Tina gonna dump eric and can’t wait she and Bette get together again. OK post soon please, thanks!
I sat and read all the chapters and I really like this story. You have done a wonderful job. Keep up the good work.
Love this story!!! Can’t wait for your next post… SOOON I hope!Thank you!!!
Hi Raspberry I had been late in reading your stories,hope to you will come back very very soon!
I love the way the connection is going, please post again soon, glad Tina(Chrissy) is going to get rid of Eric. Love another chapter soon.
It’s great how you have weaved parts of the show inot your story and made it completely your own. I’m loving this B&T beginning. Thanks for posting twice in one night, what a treat :).
Hey Rasp, Am new to writing and deffo lovin’ this story. Okay, first timing had me thrown as suddenly 7 years had past. Trivial matter though as the story progessed sweetly. Jake and Bette together was a delight especially when Steve couldn’t contain his glee at meeting the “Jake Kennard”. Then to have all the ususal suspects there as Alice and Eric made their appearances. Good to see that Alice is the same wacky but caring character while Eric is as ineffectual and inoffensive as before. And the main event, Bette and Tina’s reunion was perfect. The love and desire was palable as well as the fear of losing yourself. It is wonderful to see haow it all began with a twist. Thank you for this pleasure. Your Loyal Fan.
Nice double-treat for me this morning! *does a happy dance*
2 updates great!!!!!!!!!!!! eric dose not stand a chance poof be gone longer
AND you’re a real tease, aren’t you? lol, PPS
things are getting good. great story.
Really like this story.
Yezzzzzzzz I totally love this story! ;) ;) Please post soon? *puppydogface*
FINALLY ITS HERE!!!!!! im glad they reconnected man its a small world pooor eric… well not really
Wow! Finally they run into each other!!! It was sad that they lost contact all these years but that’s how life works. So, what would Mrs. Kennard and Jake say about them? Dying to see their reaction…….
they had met, hurray….so great to see that their feelings were still there
They had wasted a long time and in ten minutes they are in a hot,flaming kiss. Wow. Get rid of Eric,fast. faster than fast. They need to be together. thanks
Eric needs to go. I hope it doesn’t turn out to be a B&T&eric triangle. I don’t think i can take it. B&T are soo smitten with eachother. So funny how they haven’t seen eachother in years, yet they still recognized eachother. wished eric wasn’t in the pic. 6 whole years later,,yep it’s time for a relationship liz and chrissy. Post soon.
Love this story…looking forward to more.
I really enjoy your stories. Please write back soon!