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    Double Vision 15

    Story written on February 13, 2007 by vvitch.
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    Number of Comments: 11
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=64491
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    You came

     

    “You wouldn’t!”

     

                “I so would”

     

    “No!” gasped Dana “it was horrible!”

     

                “I know” grinned Alice triumphantly “Now tell us what you noticed, Dana”

     

    “Us?” asked Dana looking around in confusion. “Who’s ‘us’? There’s no one else here”

     

    “Sheesh. Do I have to fill you in on everything?!” exasperated, Alice tugged on Dana’s sleeve “C’mere, look over there”

     

    Dana looked “Don’t see anything”

     

    “Of course you won’t see anything, but over there, Dana…” Alice pointed again, and looka that- she’s pointing at you. Yes, you! “Over there, are people reading what we’re doing.. ever see the movie The Truman Show? Kinda like that, but reading, and I’m way hotter than Jim Carrey any day”

     

    “Wow” blinked Dana “How many people are we talking about?”

     

    “Usually about five hundred, sometimes less. It depends on how often VVhat’s-her-name gets off her ass to write this” finished Alice nonchalantly “So, what did you notice, Dana? Enlighten me… and them”

     

    “Oh, yeah, that” Dana sat back in her seat “I noticed that we went to the fancy restaurant for dinner, we sat there, we talked, but… we didn’t actually eat anything”

     

     

    ~~~

     

    (Same evening, Bette’s place)

     

    Not very surprisingly, it is Bette who is at Bette’s place. Quite surprisingly- given their hip attachment- Helena wasn’t there. Yet. For now, just Bette. Got it? Yeah? Alright.

     

    And Bette was doing some unpacking… or packing, I can’t really tell from my vantage point. In my defence, I am sitting at a desk (actually on my bed, but I wanted to seem scholarly) at a house across quite a few pints of ocean. Either way, the box she is packing/unpacking into/from looks to be marked something like ‘work’ (or it could be ‘Christmas lights’- it is a bit fuzzy as I am short-sighted… or long-sighted, whichever works), and presumably, it is something to do with work, like paperclips.

     

    “Ahem” came a tentative voice, startling you, me, and Bette.

     

    Bette looked up, a glorious smile touching her lips, eyes, face, everything. We all know how Bette smiles. You know that smile, the one that makes you blush and nudge the next woman smugly saying ‘she’s smiling at me, y’know’ only to find that she herself is nudging the woman next to her.

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    1. Fan’bloody’tastic V! Aaaaaah i love it!!! You are just too funny and yeah like Pands said, crazy too! Don’t know why you didn’t like this chapter, because it really is very well written and definitly upto standard, can’t wait for the next one! Thanks!

    3. Absolutely crazy!!! I loved it. Who is it? I have no idea..but I do hope the artist formerly known as V knows, clearly distinguishes here from there and makes sure not to get caught in any darkened alleys by Bette….hehehe

    5. This is absolutely hilarious- your best so far I think! It was effortless and I empathise with your characters for a number of reasons which I daren’t say here. Brilliant! I see you’ve poste again so I’m off to read that. Thanks.

    6. You!! I love the playful wordiness! I also had coffee not too long ago, which is known to activate a certain bodily function, and laughing does NOT help. Yet, I was only on page one and I refuse to leave until I get to the end…oh, the internal damage you have caused! :scrams:

    8. Vvitchy you are too funny…and suddenly i’m worried about WHO Estelle’s companion is!! It better not be anyone I KNOW!! ANywho… You’re crazy just thought i’d let you know that and this is another great chapter thanks!

    9. Master V, I love it !! … And what’s with the comment about moodswings ?? Don’t care because you write so well and life is NOT always funny. Keep up you fantastic job aaaand… PPS

    10. Well this chapter was quite different from the previous ones, liked the humour however and I have no clue who Estelle’s companion is….so please post soon.

    11. Well, I do like this silly side of Bette too !! I have two words for you, Master V : Frigging hilarious ! And did I mention you definitely have a way with words ?… Because some of those girls’ lines sounded like poetry to me. Loved this chapter. Off to read the latest ones…

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