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    Double Vision 15

    Story written on February 13, 2007 by vvitch.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=64491
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    You came

    “No! Are you sure you know you’re saying something”

     

                “Quite sure”

     

    “And you know what you’re saying?”

     

     “Why, I believe so. Despite it taking great skill to utter some words and know what is coming forth from your mouth, I do it amazingly well. Sometimes simultaneously too”

     

    “Is humour your last line of defence when you’re nervous?” Helena started trailing her fingers lightly up Bette’s arm

     

    “I’m impressed. Not many people see that” Bette glanced down at the caressing fingers, leaving little goose bumps in its wake

     

    “Why is that? Because you veil it so heavily with sarcasm?”

     

                “Because I’m rarely nervous”

     

    “Hmm” Helena murmured, her eyes raking over the slender arch of Bette’s neck. Her hand soon rose to replace the gaze, unable to contain herself. “Am I making you nervous?”

     

    “A little” Bette felt her breath hitch, and decided it was time to lead this dance. She reached Helena’s wandering hand and drawing it to her lips, she pulled the index finger into her mouth. Sucked delicately and released it. “You see, I can multi-task too. Having said those words to you, I’m wondering how long I can prolong jesting about what I’ve said- just so that the meaning inherent in my words do not scare you… or unsettle you…. or hurt you…” Bette punctuated each pause by moving inch by inch, closer to Helena

     

    Helena remained silent, her pace quickening, her eyes not breaking their hold on Bette’s

     

    “I’m also watching your eyes dance at my attempt at humour, cloud over with a smattering of doubt, then, right there, is the briefest, most fleeting look of imploration that tugs at my heart, and then I see your eyes finally settle at being… ready. Are you?”

     

    “Am I ready for what?”

     

    “Ready to take a little plunge with me, and see what becomes of it”

     

    Helena smiled “Already there, Darling. And that’s not what you were really asking”

     

    Bette paused “I know, and you have only yourself to blame- the close proximity is making it extremely difficult for me not to waffle. What I meant earlier, before you mercilessly strove to make me lose my train of thought by your amorous advances…”

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    1. Fan’bloody’tastic V! Aaaaaah i love it!!! You are just too funny and yeah like Pands said, crazy too! Don’t know why you didn’t like this chapter, because it really is very well written and definitly upto standard, can’t wait for the next one! Thanks!

    3. Absolutely crazy!!! I loved it. Who is it? I have no idea..but I do hope the artist formerly known as V knows, clearly distinguishes here from there and makes sure not to get caught in any darkened alleys by Bette….hehehe

    5. This is absolutely hilarious- your best so far I think! It was effortless and I empathise with your characters for a number of reasons which I daren’t say here. Brilliant! I see you’ve poste again so I’m off to read that. Thanks.

    6. You!! I love the playful wordiness! I also had coffee not too long ago, which is known to activate a certain bodily function, and laughing does NOT help. Yet, I was only on page one and I refuse to leave until I get to the end…oh, the internal damage you have caused! :scrams:

    8. Vvitchy you are too funny…and suddenly i’m worried about WHO Estelle’s companion is!! It better not be anyone I KNOW!! ANywho… You’re crazy just thought i’d let you know that and this is another great chapter thanks!

    9. Master V, I love it !! … And what’s with the comment about moodswings ?? Don’t care because you write so well and life is NOT always funny. Keep up you fantastic job aaaand… PPS

    10. Well this chapter was quite different from the previous ones, liked the humour however and I have no clue who Estelle’s companion is….so please post soon.

    11. Well, I do like this silly side of Bette too !! I have two words for you, Master V : Frigging hilarious ! And did I mention you definitely have a way with words ?… Because some of those girls’ lines sounded like poetry to me. Loved this chapter. Off to read the latest ones…

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