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Double Vision 8
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“What??” Helena finally responded, startled.
“What?” Bette blinked.
“I didn’t say that!”
“Sure you did. ‘Not bloody likely’ were your exact words”
“I so didn’t!!” her mind still filled with Bette, Helena didn’t quite remember having a twin, much less asking her to pretend to be ‘Helena’.
Oh wait. That’d be Estelle. Bette tried to transmit the thought to the increasingly confused Helena.
Still trying to make sense of the situation (honestly, this was too much at 1pm in the ‘morning’ without her caffiene shots), Shane asked “So… you two are getting together?”
“Yes!” exclaimed Helena, still thinking she needed to convince Bette she didn’t say the alleged ‘not bloody likely’
“No!” Bette’s response was, unfortunately, simultaneous and much louder than Helena’s yes.
“No???” Helena nearly fainted. Bette was taking it back?
“I mean…” faltered Bette. Hell, she was still trying to not ruin the Peabody Twins masquerade
“Ok. I’m going to sit now” said an exasperated Shane, pulling up a chair and looked pointedly at the empty two seats in front of her. She waited until the two women were seated. “Let’s try this again, shall we?”
No response. The other two were looking a little lost.
“Ok” sighed Shane. Apparently, she needed to keep this really simple. “I saw you two almost flirting the other day by the pool. I asked you, Helena, yesterday…” Shane emphasised the word, hoping to jog Helena’s seemingly poor memory “…if you were hoping to get Bette. And you said no. And now, I see y…”
“Ohhhh” Helena got it at last. If Shane heard that yesterday, then it wasn’t her, she was in Washington DC. So that would’ve been Estelle who’d obviously say…
Bette waited a beat, watching Helena catch up.
“Ohhhh!”…and that’s why Bette just said no to ‘us’! She’s trying to cover up for Estelle and me being so different…
Bette smiled, seeing Helena’s expression change as each thought dawned on her, finally breaking the daze she seemed to be in. It was the cutest thing. She teased affectionately “Glad you decided to join us, Helena”
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Ok, I have to admit – I’m lost like a muddafuhhhhhka! Since the start of this story, I recall Helena wanting Bette & Estelle teasing Helena about it; but I don’t remember reading that Bette wanted Helena. So since the last chapter, when did they get to the point that they’re professing their need for one another? Last I read, they kept missing each other – figuratively speaking of course. See, it’s so long between chapters that the mind becomes foggy as hell. I’m going to have to go back and RE-read at least the last to chapters cause I feel like I’m missing a lot!!
oh dear sweetheart V you keep us hanging every time. Ok who is it now? You know what I just stop guessing and decide to go with the flow LOL. Again you wrote us a masterpiece of a chapter and please now you’re busy days are over keep those updates coming thanks.
Jesus, this was really good. Shane confused as hell, Helena stumbled over her words and Bette, well Bette was just as great as always. vvitch you did it again!
Who’d have ever thought those two would have a hard time explaining things. Too cute. I’m thinking its Alice.
I’m thinking it Alice. If its Alice everyone will know Loving this. thanks
Ahh they are so cute and sweet, good that they tell each other how they feel and now they are together. Oh who interrupt they now, I think Alice or Tina. OK post soon please, thanks!
Master V. I think its Alice and I agree with bettyvhall, everyone will now know. So why hide it. Will we see Tina hooking up with Estelle???
Hey V! *jumping up and down and waving back* Congrats again, I am glad I did not have to resort to drastic measures to get this one out of you. But, please know that I do have a full arsenal at my disposal. Back to the story: it sounds like Al or Kit. I agree, if it is Al…well we know the girl can’t hold water. I am waiting to here about the RSH_JOB_PLN. This code can only be broken via PM in the AM ;0). Out…
Geez, I had not realized Helena was such a Scrabble freak ! LOL ! Ok, so let me please start with a tiny little criticism : This chapter was FAR TOO SHORT ! LOL ! But as you may haved guessed, I have totally loved it. Your style is inimitable, Vvitch : sharp yet sweet, vivid and intense yet amusing and light, but most of all, so pleasant. That was just delicious,… delightful,… charming ! Oh, well, whatever, I’m sure I’ll never find the appropriate word anyway ( and my impression of your Helena is sooo bad ), so I just wanted to say thanks for sharing this great chapter with us. I won’t be around for a couple of weeks, but I sure hope I’ll be able to read your next chapter when I come back.
Ok probably becoz I read chapters here and there, maybe that is why Im so baffled. Let me clear this up, Helena has a sister yes, who looks exactly like her right? This is the only part I seem to baffled about, coz I keep thinkin Helena is estelle, and she is going back and forth .. you know what let me just go read from the beginning eh? lol!
ok its tina…again or maybe kit?… i dunno i lost track who doesnt know… oh well i guess that just mean i get to go back and read… maybe if you updated more often like you did this time i would know LOL. Im still lovin it though
me again, sorry! just realised something! snQQPy? are you QUITE sure you read the last chapter? when they were in DC? oh and Niki! sorry I havent got back to you on the PMs in the AM! you crazy girl, it took me ages to figure out the RSH_JOB_PLN!!
WELL! i see a few people are confused, albeit on different things! :D right let’s see if I can help. Keisha: hi! yup, Helena and Estelle are twins :) Glad to have you reading and commenting this btw! Mysti: Kit doesn’t know. Tina does, alright? and you DO know i’m trying to write often so cut me some slack will you? Thanks! :) snQQpy: you’re right, I did go thru Bette wanting Helena very quickly. in the last 2 chapters I think, when i wrote her inner thoughts bits. But I tried to allude to Bette’s interest in Helena in the previous ones as well- maybe it didn’t come across very well? Thanks for scrutinising this though! Ar, BeL, Jo, coop, bettyvhall, ut, Squirl, Niki- didn’t want to leave out you guys and so thought I’d thank you while I’m here :D laters!
Had me laughing out loud at my desk here–the sighs in a pink cloud! This is great, so keep it up!
hey hey I needed something light-hearted like this! Bette and Helena are so cute!! Caused my brain and heart “teehee” warming me up from the inside…maybe not quite at the level of Bette’s euphoria, but I gots no Helena here! All right, feel free to play with my emotions next chappy…don’t take TOO much time, ey? ;]
Hey Darling! Sorry it took so long for me to post a comment…This was yet again another great chapter. I love that Bette doesn’t want to hide things. I have to admit though…I want Tina to suffer…so I guess I’ll have to do it in my fic…Keep up that great work and don’t worry everyone loves this! hehehe laters
10 stars here babes. This was masterfully written! I know I keep saying it over and over again but I really like your style…and the CLIFFHANGERS! You’ve got to stop doing that! LOL Ok, no, DON’T STOP…I love them really…love the sighs in a pink haze…great descriptions and it’s so romantic the way these two are falling in love…sigh…thanks and PPS ok!!!
ohh, my vicky, you and all these cliffhangers!!! If only you gave us a little more before letting us wonder each time :D But the end arrive always too soon, as your writing is so nice and funny. I would have really liked to read about shane and estelle though! And for the ritual guess, this time I bet on Estelle herself!