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Double Vision 9
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“Who’s five and feeling shy for a month??” came a loud voice, most likely coming from a mouth already filled with chips that had lost their will to crunch.
Bette and Estelle jumped and turned to see Alice enter the room. “Al! Hi”
“Hey” replied Alice as she flopped on to the seat next to Bette. She eyed Bette and Estelle curiously “Well if it isn’t the alpha twins”
Estelle gulped at the mention of twins, while Bette silently lifted a condescending eyebrow.
Alice continued to chew on her soggy chips “You two’ve been spending hellofalot more time together now. If I didn’t know better, I’d think you had a thing goin’ on here”
“Hah!” snorted Estelle, a bit too quickly.
Alice sat up, her eyed wide “You are!” she said accusingly.
“No, we’re not!” retorted Estelle “Did you not hear the disbelief in my snort just now?”
“Bette?” Alice swivelled her accusing eyes to Bette.
Oh shit. Bette was still thinking of a response. She was torn between two courses of action- one, she could deny it all; two- she could agree with what Alice was saying which, incidentally, would make it easier for her and Helena to be together among the gang.
Bette’s lack of response was response enough for Alice. “I knew it!!!” she exclaimed triumphantly “I knew there was something there, when we were at the pool the other day and…”
Estelle glared at Bette. Good going, woman!
“WAIDAMINNIT!”
Bette and Estelle stared at the crazed Alice, now standing still in a dramatic pose with her arms up, her eyes squeezed shut.
Alice un-froze herself and hurled out a pointing finger at Estelle “you have a tan!”
“Why… eermm… yes I do?” stammered Estelle, not knowing where this was going.
“But you didn’t have one last week! And then you had it again when we met up at Bette and Tina’s!”
“Sure I did?”
Jesus. Make it sound less like a question, won’t you, Estelle?
“And you took me to yoga!” Alice continued her accusing tirade
“Uh huh” squeaked Estelle
“But you hated it!”
“I did but… I wanted to do something nice for you?”
Bette rolled her eyes. Honestly it would be just so easy if…
“You know what?” spoke Estelle hastily. “You’re right. Bette and I do have a thing going on”
“Aha!!!! I knew it!!”
“Mm hmm” chittered Estelle nervously, hoping she’d distracted Alice enough from the twins topic
Bette nodded too, already looking forward to hours of public displays of affection with Helena. Who, by the way, has been gone for a very long time. Suddenly wanting to see Helena, Bette twisted round to look for signs of Helena outside… and completely missed the sceptical-but-still-devilish look on Alice’s face
“Kiss”
“What?” responded both Bette and Estelle, their eyes equally wide.
“Kiss” Alice folded her arms smugly. She was on the verge of finding something out, she just knew it, her Spidey senses were buzzing “You two would’ve obviously kissed by now. So no big deal, just kiss and prove that you’ve got something goin’ on”
Bloody hell!
Fuck!
(tbc)
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Vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv! Opps, gotta go read!
So, it’s been about 25 days, huh? *going to check* Yeah, I’m right! Well, I loved it, as always. Al is a bag of mixed nuts!! Maybe they can distract her to allow Helena to step in!! Or are you attempting to ramp up the drama? I understand how you feel V. Well, know that you are not alone. Thank you so much for sharing.
Uh-oh! What would be priceless right now is if Helena walks in to see Alice watching Estelle kissing Bette. Haha! Great chapter, vvitch. :)
Touche…
ouch Master V is back in town LOL Well babe it was worth the wait, you did pretty good. Now please don’t wait another 25 days ok??? PPS thx
Damn Alice is crazy and let see Estelle kissing Bette!!!!!!!!!!
I liked the way Alice ordered Bette and Estelle to kiss. I mean, how are they going to deal with that? HURMPH. Well, the tan could be explained away with a tanning bed, but an extra sister taking a phonecall wouldn’t! Good chapter. God knows you can write. :D
Ok, why does it have to be that short Vvitch ? Just why ? You do know we love your story, don’t you ? Anyway, You have no idea how much I’ve been missing this Double vision. And once again you just cracked me up with this new chapter, only this time it was Alice that made me LMAO ! The great thing about your story is that one can never tell where you’re are going to take this. I was so flabbergasted by Estelle’s confession… Alright, so I just can’t wait for your next chappie, please just throw us a bone as soon as you can ( lol ! ), this is getting really hilarious… Oh, and the whole chapter was great, Vvitch, comme toujours… Thank you !
oh alice…I love how you use that mouth of yours to produce that loud voice, especially when it’s full of chip shards.
Ok the next chapter needs to be like 10 pages!!!!! Is that a bit much? LOL I really am wondering if tey are going to kiss
hahahhahahahahahah COL!!! That was funny, I could actually picture Bette turning to look for Helena and having to swievelback with that wide eye expression. Ya know…the funny thing is..to get Alice off their case I can see Estelle doingit before Bette could react, BUT I can see someone else other than Helena seeing it and having a reaction…but I won’t do anymore guessing on your stories…you’ve yelled at me enough about that…where’s my eyeroll button?
oh no, what happenes if estelle might like it.then we’d have twins fighting over bette, lmao great chap
Too, too funny. Alice has got them by the ying yangs now…Now how is Helena going to sneek in for the kiss.
Touche because bit of this hit home in one wy or another I guess. Again, you bring us a brilliant piece of writing…if there was an option to give it 10 stars then it’d still get 11 :)