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    Driving – Chapter 26

     

    If
    you come up here just a little more theres a spot where you can see the other
    side of the valley too.  Bette stopped
    walking but she kept pointing up the trail. 
    She was waiting for Tina to move towards her.

    Tina
    didnt move, she just looked at her.

    I
    like the view here.

    Bette
    looked at her face.  Right. 

    Bette
    walked back down to where Tina was standing. 
    They were on the side of a mountain, just off the trail, looking at the
    view that Tina had seen first with her mother just last weekend.  She had asked Bette to come on this hike to
    share it with her.  Without turning,
    Tina asked, So what do you think?

    Its
    beautiful, T.

    Tina
    was hoping to recapture the feeling that shed had upon looking out over this
    vast valley.  It had been a pivotal
    moment for Tina.  A moment when she felt
    her personal pain was diminished and became endurable.  The world was going on and would go on no
    matter what happened between she and Bette. 
    She wanted Bette to feel that too, but that wasnt happening. As
    disappointment began to seep in, she realized that maybe she had hoped for too
    much.  It was a place where she had moved
    forward herself, but maybe not one where they would move forward together.

    Lets
    catch up with the others, Im hungry, Tina said abruptly.

    Uh,
    ok.  The llamas have the lunch,
    right?  Bette asked, but Tina didnt
    answer.

     

    A
    short while later they had reached the summit, taken their box lunches and
    found a private spot on a grassy knoll on which to eat.   Bette opened her box.

    This
    looks good, she said gleefully.  Mmm
    this brownie looks amazing.

    Tina
    looked at her with a combination of amusement and annoyance.

    You
    have eaten them before.

    Bette
    looked at her, a little surprised by her tone.

    I
    know, but after the hike up here, Im starving and I didnt know what to expect
    from our four legged friends over there, she said, motioning towards the llamas
    that carried the lunches up the mountain for the hikers.  She looked again at them.  Theyre cute.

    Tina
    lay her lunch aside and began to untie her shoes.  She took them off and the socks too.  She pressed her feet into the cool grass.

    Giving
    your feet some air?  Bette asked.

    Yeah,
    theyre still sore from my walk yesterday. 
    Doing that in sandals wasnt a good idea.

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    Comments

    1. I was so happy to see that you had posted!! I have missed this story very much. Writers block is a bugger, isn’t it?!!! You have past over to the other side though, because both these chapters were wonderful. thank you!!

    2. Hello Massmom, what a thrill to see you up again. I enjoyed these back-to-back chapters. I will catch the next chapter wen you bring it to us. Excellent job.

    3. Hey Massmom!

      Good to see your name again. Can I personally nominate this story for a fan fiction award? You were sorely overlooked the last time!

      This part caused my stomach to drop:

      Tina sighed, “Don’t promise anything to me now.”

      “Why?”

      “Because I’m not ready to believe you.”

      But the chocolate kisses returned me to gastronomic balance!

      Thanks so much for breaking through the block! Your fans will wait for quality writing.

    4. Wow the innocence on the surface and then deep anxiety in the undercurrent you play them well as you move through these sweet well written stories. Thanks so much for the holiday light show.

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