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Driving — Chapter 31 – Finale
** Saturday **
“Wow, look at this,” Tina said as she stepped onto
the balcony.
Bette had ordered breakfast from room service and
had asked that it be set up on the balcony.
The morning air was warm but the sun hadn’t reached them yet. Tina shivered in her sleeveless top.
“Nice, huh?”
Bette beamed.
“Very, but I need a shirt.”
Tina stepped back into the room and grabbed a long
sleeve shirt of Bette’s that lay nearby.
Bette looked up and smiled to see her shirt on Tina. She said nothing though, she just enjoyed the
return of familiar assumption between them.
She poured Tina a cup of coffee. Their eyes met and they smiled at each
other. Tina’s cheeks washed over in
pink. Bette felt it too. Much intimacy had passed between them the
night before and yet here, in the day light, face to face there was something
different and intense in the air between them.
“So,” Bette surveyed the table. “Let’s eat.
I’m starving.”
“I guess so.
Looks like you ordered one of everything.”
“Are you complaining?”
“No, in fact I compliment your ordering
skills. Not everyone can do good room
service.”
Bette smiled and helped herself to some food.
Tina gazed at Bette for a moment. She looked so soft this morning. Soft around her eyes and lips. Soft curls in her hair. She thought about kissing the softness of Bette’s
cheeks.
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(53 votes, average: 3.68 out of 5)
So sweet. Thank you so much for the happy ending. We all need it badly. I really love this story. Hope you could bring us more.
Thamks for sharing a great story. It’s truly needed this season.
They both took the right folk in the road,It just 15 minutes to doom times so I wish us all luck thanks
This story was wonderful from beginning to end. I really enjoyed how real you made it…leaving us never knowing for sure if they could move on together from all their pain. But, you did it…and you did it with grace and style. Thanks…and now that the whole story has been posted, I am going to go back and read it from the beginning again! :-)
Thank you for this story. It was very well done and I enjoyed every chapter.
Yea!.. a happy ending – thanks for that. And thanks also for coming back and finishing the story, I’m sure it was hard without having much inspiration this year. Well done on the whole story.
wonderful story and a happy ending, what else can we ask for? a new story perhaps? thanks
Thanks! I loved the story.
While I am sorry that this is ending I loved the ending. The uncertainty of them both amazes me. You have done such a great job with this story. Thanks
This is wonderful and sweet ending and love it, happy for them. Thanks for sharing this wonderful story to us!!!
this story is a classic. i just had to read all 31 chapters in one sitting. thank you massmom!
In the spotlight, everyone was talking about the story titled “Driving,” and I just had to check it out. Didn’t remember it from the past. And I read the complete story without stopping and loved every minute of it. Wish there was a sequel to it. Thanks for sharing this story with us.
Like many, I just read this in one sitting. Really great. Thank you.