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Drowning 20
Tina looked at her friend, Dana, we can wait a few minutes. Talk a bit. I havent had a chance to talk to you alone since I got here. Dana let her smile grow wider, hoping it helped to convince Tina that she was really ok, Nah lets get to lunch. Maybe we can do dinner later, Alice will be out with Bette, remember?
Tina gave Dana a look that told her that she knew she wasnt ok, Sure, dinner will be great Dane. Lets go.
Dana walked up to Cara and lifted her up, Come on, lets go see your other Aunts. Her smile real for the moment, she always smiled with Cara, plus she was going to see Alice. She wasnt sure how long she would be able to that. One day soon, she would have to explain all of this to Alice, and then who knew what would happen. But for now, she was going to see Alice and that was all that mattered in Danas world.
Chapter 20
Alice and Julia were the first to arrive at the Planet. Alice scanned the room for a table large enough for all of them. She counted in her head, probably 6, maybe 8 if Tina actually called Bette. She couldnt imagine Robin showing, even if Tina did call, so maybe 7.
She found a round table in the corner and grabbed Julia by the arm, Come on, those people are trying for our table! They got to the table right before a large group had walked up to it. Alice jumped into a seat and shrugged her shoulders as she smiled at the group. She turned to Julia and started to snicker when she heard a few people mumbling under their breath about how rude it was racing for a table and with only two of them to sit at one of the few tables able to seat larger parties.
Julia shook her head and laughed, Its never boring with you, is it Alice? I thought the bigger one, with the really bad 80s hair was going to hip check you to get to the table first.
Alice laughed, What? Its a good table and its in the back so we can hold a conversation. Oh – and I totally couldve taken her if I needed to.
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(69 votes, average: 4.26 out of 5)
I’m totally agree with lights, Dana is a difficult character, maybe for that the writers in the show don’t try to do something better with her and let us that job. Anyway thanks for this.
Really good job, again :) I hope that hug means something progress in Dana’s and Alice’s relationship. And Julia really needs to tell Tina how she feels.
I fucking love this story, update soon… waiting for more kills me!
This story is one of my favorites. Love the interaction between all the characters and the way you portray the Alice/Dana relationship. REally curious to know what is going on with Dana. Look forward to your next post. Yeah, Drowning and Laws of Attraction rule my fan ficton world!!!
I love this story…great work..
Really enjoyed it. And I really really want to know what Dana’s problem is, but then I fear we might be in for some angst next chapter. Loved “Dana you might want to close your mouth a little”. So gay! I would love to see that scene.
So long and so satisfying. I really can’t tell where this is going to go. You aren’t telegraphing your ending. Bette and Tina could or could not get back together.
Thanks!
Great job. I love this story.
This is fast becoming a favorite. I can see a nice love triangle between Bette, Tina and Julia.
I love this story…
Thank you.
Update soon =D
lucia – great job – i am dying to know what dana’s secret is. hurry up and post
I am really enjoying this story. I like how easily you make dialogue transitions between each of the characters. I love how Alice knows Dana so well and is trying to understand her. Dana is the hardest character to write, but you do a fabulous job in trying to make the reader “see” that she truly is a complex character. I love this story and I hope that you post soon.
Everyone else had said what was in my mind! You’re doing a much better job with them than the show. Now I’m looking forward to dinner ; )