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Drowning 26
“Yes, Lori still lives in the same house. We’ll be there in a few minutes. Will we actually talk after Lori?”
“We will, I promise. I just, I’m not ready yet. Is that ok?” Tina replied, stealing a quick glance at Bette.
Bette hesitantly put her hand on Tina’s, “That’s fine, T. As long as we talk.”
They sat the rest of the way to Lori’s in silence. Each lost to their thoughts, memories and fears. When they pulled up to Lori’s driveway Bette looked over at Tina, “Are you ready?”
“Yeah, lets go.” Tina said, getting out of the car.
After Lori got over the initial shock of seeing Tina again and seeing her with Bette, they told her what was going on with Dana. They explained that Dana had been remiss in going to the police or anyone for that matter because she was scared of this all becoming public. It was the best they could come up with. Lori listened and asked questions. An hour later, they left with Lori’s word that she would do all that she could in figuring out who the letter writer was and would make sure that there was extra patrol cars where Dana would be. They thanked her and left.
As they got into the car, a heavy silence once again fell amongst the pair. They drove in silence heading no where in particular. After a few minutes of palpable discomfort, Tina finally broke the silence, “Bette, can we go to that place off of the PCH, you know where I mean, right?”
Bette smiled a smile full of pain and love, “You mean where we went after dinner that last night before you left? The little alcove on the beach?”
“Yes, is that ok?”
“That’s good. That’s perfect actually.” Bette answered, getting herself into the turning lane, waiting for the light.
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Julia and Alice spent the afternoon making calls and taking turns with Cara. After they finished they headed back to Julia’s apartment.
“Alice, you know that you don’t have to leave for DC tomorrow. We can find some other assignment or you can take some time off. Really, it’s ok.”
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(66 votes, average: 4.20 out of 5)
Great update. Why is that every Danish update had Dana in danger and Alice leaving?
Lucia. I wish Showtime gave Tibette the depth and exploration you do– i might CARE about their relationship, as i do here. I hate this– you’ve got me rooting for Julia, AND Bette. i’ll be sad either way. :/ so good for you. as for your dana and alice- you have a great ear for them. i love this story. post soon!
“And for the moment, all was right in the world.” But only for a moment, right? :-)
I don’t think it matters if you are writing Dana and Alice or Bette and Tina, or someone else all together…please just keep writing. Your story telling strikes a chord with me. Inventive, fresh and highly entertaining.
what did dana do to have all this start in the first place she will need to come clean with alice before it is to late and she finds out by someone else I love the story please post soon
I am totally thinking of 101 things Dana’s secret can be and i am comin up with all kinds of nonsence so pls pls update soon and tell all…the suspence is great tho. I am also sooo rooting for T and julia.
a part of the truth? damn girl better you post soon :P Thanks for don’t let us with a unfinished story like other authors :(
God (Cid here), give Bette and Tina a future please. I dunt want Robin to get hurt, but I will die if Bette and Tina miss each other finally.
lucia – i grew up on neil diamond with my dad playing his cds on repeat. i love the song choices. i am so glad that dana and alice are finding their way back to one another after all this time… but still anxious for what lies ahead. great job. post soon.
So glad you’ve updated! Not really a B&T fan, but I loved their interaction. Now, how long will it take for Dana to spill THIS secret? Next post? Keep it up!
Everytime I think I’ve learned what’s going on with Dana you through in a new twist, can’t wait for the next reveal. Good Job.
Cid, you have officially joined the Evil Danish Teasers Club lol. Now what can I do to make you tell us about the secret Dana is holding? But the chapter was worth the wait, I actually felt for Bette and Tina though I’m still rooting for Julia. Cmon, tell me what you want so you can post the next chapter.