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Drowning 26
“Sure. I’m just saying I’m here if you want to talk. Listen I’m going to the Club to meet Dana. Call me if you need anything.” Alice got up and kissed Cara and walked over to Julia, “And Julia, thanks for everything. I really appreciate the help. This thing has me pretty freaked out.”
“Anytime Al.”
“If you need anything, just give me a hollah!” Alice said as she walked out the door.
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Bette and Tina were sitting on the beach. They were sitting close enough to feel the other but not close enough to touch. Body language really does speak volumes. Tina was sitting with her knees pulled to her chest, her arms wrapped around her legs, her body tight and guarded. Neither had spoken since sitting down. It was like they both knew that whatever the outcome of the conversation, their lives would never be the same.
Tina watched a wave crash onto the beach, her eyes following the spray, then the foam, then swirling water as it receded back into the ocean just in time for another wave to come rolling in, “Bette?”
“Yes.”
“Did you ever notice how our lives are like the waves here?” Tina asked, her eyes still on the water.
Bette looked over at Tina with a confused look, “I’m not sure that I ever did. What do you mean?” Bette was hesitant to start the conversation, but wasn’t expecting it to start with this.
“It’s repetitive. The waves come in full force and crash onto the shore, making these small changes to the land forever each time, then gently roll back out to the ocean, only to do it again.” Tina glanced up from the water long enough to see if she had Bette’s attention. Bette gave Tina a soft smile. “It’s a lot like you and me. Every time. It comes on full force, and leaves a mark and changes us forever, and then gently goes away, only to come on full force again.”
“I hadn’t thought of that. Can I ask you something?” Bette asked.
“Of course.”
Bette lowered her head, staring at the sand and spoke in a frail voice. “Is that a good thing? I mean that we are like the ocean here, is that good?”
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(66 votes, average: 4.20 out of 5)
Great update. Why is that every Danish update had Dana in danger and Alice leaving?
Lucia. I wish Showtime gave Tibette the depth and exploration you do– i might CARE about their relationship, as i do here. I hate this– you’ve got me rooting for Julia, AND Bette. i’ll be sad either way. :/ so good for you. as for your dana and alice- you have a great ear for them. i love this story. post soon!
“And for the moment, all was right in the world.” But only for a moment, right? :-)
I don’t think it matters if you are writing Dana and Alice or Bette and Tina, or someone else all together…please just keep writing. Your story telling strikes a chord with me. Inventive, fresh and highly entertaining.
what did dana do to have all this start in the first place she will need to come clean with alice before it is to late and she finds out by someone else I love the story please post soon
I am totally thinking of 101 things Dana’s secret can be and i am comin up with all kinds of nonsence so pls pls update soon and tell all…the suspence is great tho. I am also sooo rooting for T and julia.
a part of the truth? damn girl better you post soon :P Thanks for don’t let us with a unfinished story like other authors :(
God (Cid here), give Bette and Tina a future please. I dunt want Robin to get hurt, but I will die if Bette and Tina miss each other finally.
lucia – i grew up on neil diamond with my dad playing his cds on repeat. i love the song choices. i am so glad that dana and alice are finding their way back to one another after all this time… but still anxious for what lies ahead. great job. post soon.
So glad you’ve updated! Not really a B&T fan, but I loved their interaction. Now, how long will it take for Dana to spill THIS secret? Next post? Keep it up!
Everytime I think I’ve learned what’s going on with Dana you through in a new twist, can’t wait for the next reveal. Good Job.
Cid, you have officially joined the Evil Danish Teasers Club lol. Now what can I do to make you tell us about the secret Dana is holding? But the chapter was worth the wait, I actually felt for Bette and Tina though I’m still rooting for Julia. Cmon, tell me what you want so you can post the next chapter.