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Alice and Dana became more than Shane’s friends at that point. She had known them as two individuals and then as a couple. She had seen the change in both of them when they finally found that elusive love that helps a person’s life become complete. Both Alice and Dana had subtle changes in their personalities, changes that showed a greater comfort in their own skin. How could they not be more comfortable? They had someone who loved them completely for who they were. Shane wasn’t ready to watch her definition of happiness change again. At least not if there was anything she could do to help them.
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Alice and Dana were stopped in front of Alice’s room when Dana felt an arm on her shoulder. Startled, she turned around to see Shane.
“Dane, chill. It’s just me.”
“Yeah, I know. I’m just jumpy. That’s all.”
“Right, makes sense. Listen guys, come in here.” Shane said, taking them across the hall to Dana’s room.
“Is this your room, Shane? I didn’t know you were here.”
“Actually, it’s my room.” Dana softly answered, waiting for the eruption from Alice that she didn’t listen and hadn’t given Alice the space she had agreed to give.
To Dana’s surprise, all that Alice said was “oh.”
“So Shane, why here and not my room?” Alice asked once they were inside the room.
“Well, to be honest, I’m just playing a hunch.”
“A hunch, huh?” Alice asked. “What sort of hunch?”
“Yeah, Shane, you didn’t mention a hunch this morning. What hunch?”
“Let’s just see if it works. Give it some time and I’ll explain.” She replied, plopping down on the couch. “So, how did the argument go? Dane, I’m glad to see you’re still in one piece.”
“Cute Shane, it isn’t like I was going to hurt her.” Alice retorted.
“You never know Al, never know.” She said, chuckling to herself.
Before Alice could reply there was a loud noise coming from across the hall and then shouting.
“What the hell is that?” Alice asked running towards the door, Dana and Shane right behind.
She threw open the door her hotel room door open, inside it looked like two men were struggling with a woman. Shane stopped her as she went to run across the hall.
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I do! I do! Gold star to me! Great update. Worth the wait. ;-D Love Shane’s description of the framily. So accurate. Glad the stalker was caught — I hope that is the end of her. I understand Alice needing time, but, I hope she and Dana talk soon. Thanks so much for continuing this, lucia!!
Hooray! I can’t believe my eyes when I saw the post. A big THANK YOU to you and Capesquad. I thought I would never have the opportunity to tell you that I love Cara and that Julia was a great character added. I read the story at least 3 times always thinking that I might have missed some clues to why D was so apprehensive telling A the truth to begin with. They would have avoided all the unnecessary tears and heartaches. Then again we would not have this fantastic story. I believe this has to be one of the best crazy fan story. I second what MaGoose said. Furthermore, I think the separation is called for. D must do some soul searching. What if there was another temptation and another crazy fan. I am sure Yoda would be there for her in A’s absence. Conveniently, T would be there to talk things over with A. Perfect scenerio. Thank you again Lucia. You have no idea how happy I am right now.
You just made my week. I love this story, so glad you’re continuing with it!
lucia – of course i remember this. when this first came out i was obsessed. i printed out the first chapters and would read them over and over again. i was obsessed. i had given up hope, but i am so glad you are continuing. this was a great chapter i am excited to see what lies ahead. i don’t mind how you wrapped up the stalker, to me this was always more of a love story that a mystery. can’t wait for more and thank you so much.
Cid!! so obviously i was happy to see you posted an update. (did you feel YOU had a stalker?) i found this way too late last night (this morning) and read it anyway- couldn’t help myself. Loved it then, loved it better sober! : )i liked how you handled the ‘disposal’ of the stalker- she’s always been outside the picture- try asshe might- she doesn’t even get the satisfaction of a dramatic confrontation. Alice needs to think about Dana without having to worry about her at the same time clouding the issues. I look forwardto hearing both her AND Tina vent… i look forward to all of it! Thank you for this.
i remember!!!! nice to see you back this is a great story and im glad your continuing with it. :) pps
i’ll admit, i was at first enticed by the gold star prize *grin* just kidding, i’ve been in and out of your stories, so this might be my first comment. this was really good…i love dalice/alna and so on in your take on things. workin’ through the insecurities and all. and friendships saving the day, great:) pps
i remember this story and I have missed it so much could’nt believe my eyes when I see the post but this was great as always and I can’t wait for the next post please be soon I love it