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Duped
“What an idiot,” Bette murmured to herself.
A young woman’s eyes were following Bette. A blonde. An apparently well-meaning blonde who was attracted to what she saw and decided to intervene.
As Bette walked past her, the blonde grabbed Bette’s arm.
“Hey, Gorgeous! Was that man bothering you? Can I help?”
Bette looked down to the hand squeezing arm, then back up to the cute face.
“And you are?” Bette asked.
“Alice Pieszecki, at your service,” the woman smiled brightly. “High-ranking partner in this fine establishment. A fine looking lady like you shouldn’t be alone. Let me buy you a drink.” She lifted her hand towards the nearby bar in the corner of the room.
“Well, I don’t … ” Bette said, looking around.
“C’mon! Walk with me,” Alice coaxed, tightening her grip around the woman’s arm.
Bette walked with her until they reached the bar and seated themselves.
“What’ll you have, Beautiful?” Alice inquired, looking into Bette’s eyes as the bartender approached.
“What do you suggest?” Bette asked, looking around at the myriad patrons nursing their drinks, fumbling with their chips, and flirting with the inhabitants of the next barstool over.
Alice stroked her hand against Bette’s thigh.
Bette took Alice’s hand and placed it into the blonde’s lap.
“Hands to yourself,” Bette cautioned, staring into Alice’s eyes.
“What can I get you tonight, Ms. Pieszecki?” the barkeep asked, placing two cocktail napkins in front of the women.
“I’ll have a Lucky Strike, Joe,” Alice smiled.
“Of course. And your friend?” Joe asked, tapping the bar.
“I’ll have a…”
“Give her a Desert Sunrise, Joe,” Alice suggested, dipping her fingers into a bowl of nuts.
Alice threw a fist full of cashews into her mouth.
Bette watched her as she carefully chewed.
“Is that wishful thinking, Ms. Pieszecki?” Bette asked. “Think you’ll see me as the sun comes up?”
“Maybe. If you’re lucky,” Alice said, chomping her mouth and holding out a nut to Bette’s lips.
“No thanks,” Bette said, tightening her lips and moving her head. “I never eat on an empty stomach.”
“Heh! Cute!” Alice smacked her lips and put the drink to her mouth that Joe had placed in front of her. “Did you hear that, Joe? Funny! Ms. um…Ms.? What was your name?”
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(40 votes, average: 3.98 out of 5)
Yeah, go for it.
Okay Why is Tina in trouble? She didnt short the drink. This is a good beginning, love TiBete beginning Good Luck thanks
read like a good beginning to a story, im hooked when is the next chappy??
Next chapter please. Very captivating
Damn, that is not a good way for Bette and Tina to meet. So Tina is under arrest, that is very interesting. Please Post soon.
My God, what is wrong with Bette arresting Tina. Well, let’s see for what.My goodness bring on another chapter, you’ve got me hooked. Always love B & T beginnings.
My God, what is wrong with Bette arresting Tina. Well, let’s see for what.My goodness bring on another chapter, you’ve got me hooked. Always love B & T beginnings.
Wow. I like this. It’s different. Haha. Bette’s an undercover cop? Very sexy. Laughs. (: The writing style is lovely as well. PPS! (: I can’t wait to see why Tina’s in trouble. ((:
nice start… and i am also wondering why tina is in trouble… and anything to do with a casino… i am there… go for it…PPS
looks like an interesting story…waiting for the next chapter…thanks
Love this – more soon please
i like it – very interesting – i want to read more please! PPS
Oh…this is good and I can’t wait for more. pps
oOOH, EXCITING. nice, im liking it.., more?!!
WOW what a writingstyle, I’m amazed! Is Bette a member of the vice squad? Please PPS.
Definitely got my attention …….please continue …..