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She sat like this for she didn’t even know how long, water lapping at her and soaking the hem of her dress and the sun beating down on the bare portions of her back exposed by the dress. When Dana heard a small splash beside her and heard slight panting, she realized she was no longer alone. “Go away, Shane,” she mumbled, not looking up.
“It’s not Shane,” said a voice.
Dana’s head shot up, and she looked up to see a visibly upset Alice standing before her. “Al?” she said weakly, not believing her eyes.
Alice sat down in the sand beside her, her foot accidentally flinging a chunk of wet sand across Dana’s bare feet.
“Alice, you’re ruining your dress!” Dana scolded, not sure of what to say and feeling stupid for choosing to utter those words.
“I don’t care,” Alice replied, her voice ragged.
“Get back there,” Dana told her. “You can’t just leave your wedding. It was still salvageable.”
Alice opened her mouth to reply, but Dana cut her off. “And I’m sorry for what Shane did. I swear I had nothing to do with it, and I didn’t know she was going to do that.”
Squishing her own toes in the sand, Alice looked out across the water, her eyes focused on a spot somewhere on the horizon. “I didn’t really want to get married to him anyway,” she whispered.
“What?” Dana gasped. “Of course you did. Why else would you have been going through with the wedding?”
Alice sighed. “Let me ask you this. With Tonya, did you plan to go through with the wedding only because you loved her and wanted to spend the rest of your life with her?”
Dana shook her head. “Of course not. You know I only planned to marry Tonya because she made me feel taken care of and because I didn’t think I could find anyone else. But thenyou showed me differently.”
“Yes, I did, didn’t I?” Alice agreed softly. “You just needed a push from a friend,” she murmured, biting her lip.
“I had been hurt and given up on love. I just wanted to feel happy, whether it was real or not,” Dana said slowly, remembering that Shane had said nearly the same things about Alice earlier.
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Ah, i loved that so so happy with a danish reconciliation. Im sat with a huge smile on my face. Great story.
I loved it…it was soo sweet. Always love to see Shane help these two and soo happy they “ran away” together
Great Danish post. Thought the Shane and Dana bickering was hysterical. Does this mean wedding bells for the happy couple?
Today is Danish bonus day, everyone posting back to back. *happy Happy* Even happier after I read this fic :) There’s something about wedding, the 3rd party, undying love that makes go weak at the knees. Oooh I love this!
this is great and I just hope that there is more to come from this like a wedding and maybe children please post soon just an idea
Yay danish bonus day! I love that and I love this, thanks.
sitting here with a huge happy grin on my face. i loved it. i loved your song choice, and i loved the interpretation. and i love reconciling Danish. — p.s. Shane was great!
I love your sories! When you became romantic you do it so well!LOL. I love Shane here and Jenny was weired and funny just like ever. Love it and maybe you’ll find something more to write on this story.
Extremely estatic after reading this! Brought tears, laughter, and snot to my face. I haven’t heard the song yet, but are you sure EZ girl had nothing to do with it? The last verse of the song “Let go, let go, let go”? No? Maybe it’s just me then. Good job, absolutely loved it!
Oh… My… God… That was so romantic! Wow I feel like such a chick right now but I don’t care because this was incredible. I love it! Seriously! Man I sound like an idiot but this fic was just… wow. WOW!!!