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    Echoes in Darkness, Chapter 10: Darkness Closing

    At the turnoff to Maple Street, Alice threw up a militant “STOP”
    gesture with her hand. She took stock of the hardscaped entrance…a
    pair of low-to-the-ground curved stone walls and plantings of
    well-trimmed hedges, squat and boxy and clearly groomed on a regular
    basis.  Some 50 yards beyond, however, the road turned left and
    vanished beneath a canopy of trees arching from both sides of the
    road.  There, the darkness thickened and waited.  Whatever
    houses had found a way to fend off the darkness, whether by lantern or
    candlelight, would not be visible from the road, no stars or moon would
    light their way.  The beams of their flashlights seemed nothing
    more than feeble jabs against the pitch blackness that had nearly taken
    on substance and form.

    “Helena?” Alice said in a voice that was close to cracking.  “Are you sure this is the best way?”

    Helena ticked her head to the side.  “I don’t know that it’s the
    best,” she said in her impeccable accent, “but it’s the quickest.”

    Alice sighed in resignation, and motioned the group forward, inching
    slowly past the hedgerows and into the nearly impenetrable darkness
    beneath the trees.  A warm wind began to sigh from behind, and a
    clutch of fallen leaves rasped dryly across the road.  As the wind
    picked up, whistling through the maples, Alice imagined furtive
    creatures shaking their leathery wings, ready to launch themselves at
    any moment.  

    Then a pale mist began to rise out of the drainage swales, oozing
    across the grass and onto the gravel berms like some malevolent living
    thing.  This was the point where in every horror movie she’d ever
    seen, the spooky music would kick in, as if to say “don’t go there”
    while the victims-to-be walked blithely to their deaths.

    She shuddered and Dana wrapped one arm around her.  “Are you all right?”

    “Hmmm?”  Alice muttered, caught up in the prospect of impending
    doom for all of them.  “Yeah,” she finally grinned gamely and
    edged onto the roadway, preferring death by SUV than by whatever might
    be lurking in the brush and fog, just biding its time. She swept her
    flashlight right to left and back again, trying to anticipate the next
    turn in the road.  “How much farther?” she called over her
    shoulder, past Marina and Jenny who was clinging to her lover’s arm.

    “Fifteen minutes by car,” Helena joked weakly, more focused on keeping
    a respectable distance between herself and Tina when all she truly
    wanted was to pull her into the safety of her arms and reassure her
    that all would be well.  But her confidence had faded as the trees
    loomed closer to the road, and the fog seemed to be tracking them every
    step of the way.

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