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English Bay – chapter 1
minutes later she heard a knock on her door.
smiled timidly.
Bette smiled. I thought you werent going to make it?
debating between sitting at home and driving my roommate crazy vs. coming here
and hanging out with you. Tina replied.
I know the answer to that.
smiled. So, are we going to stand here all night?
Welcome to my humble abode. Here, let me get your coat. You can just put your
umbrella in that bucket.
followed Bette inside. She looked around and noticed the artistic dcor of
Bettes place. There was a shelf filled with books and pictures right by the
door. To her left, the room was closed. Entering the living room, she found a large
dark brown L shaped couch that seemed so comfy, across it, there was the
entertainment unit. Beside the couch, there was a piano and guitar.
up to this everyday? Tina shouted as she opened the glass doors to the balcony
that overlooks the
do. Its beautiful. Sometimes I could see eagles flying around. I plan on
buying a pair of binoculars in a few months so I could see them up close.
Bette showed up with two cups of peppermint tea and handing one over to Tina.
peppermint right? Bette asked as she is standing leaning to the railings,
facing the
Wow, you have a good memory. Tina replied.
attention to what I care the most
sure about that? Tina quietly asked.
Paying attention or what I care the most? Bette tried to lighten the intensity
of the question.
care the most… Tina turned to Bette, searching for the truth in her eyes.
turned to meet Tinas eyes. Yes, Im sure. Bette answered just above a
whisper. She took the cup from Tinas hand and placed it on the table nearby.
She then walked back and hugged Tina. She hugged Bette back, placing her arms
around her waist.
smells so good Bette is content to stay there for a few minutes, even longer.
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(23 votes, average: 3.52 out of 5)
I love english bay and coal harbour, I vist vancouver once a year.
Your story is starting off very good I love how to switch back to the meeting and where they are now. I look forward to reading more from you.
Okay I know I should been here a long time ago… am a mess with time this days, but I am really glad u desided to come back and give us more, u know u have the talent, I really like the way this story is going so, find the time and write and write more… :) KUDOS “s”
I’m glad you’re back :-) I hope you continue with this and the other story.
Yeah, Your back … Thanks I love this begining and just the fact you have something else brewing. Thanks
Yes, I will. I plan on it, I just have to get back in the writing zone. See you guys around. Thanks for reading again. Sure is nice to read your comments.
I’m so glad you came back!! All that talk of rain is making me miss the Northwest! Thanks for coming back to us, and I looking forward to more!!
K
I like it, can’t wait for more.
This beginning already has me wanting more! You have a unique approach to this story that is really interesting! I hope you add another chapter real soon. THanks!