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Every Glance Speaks – Chapter 8
I open my mouth to confirm but my voice sticks again. I merely nod, offer a smile and hope she knows that I do.
There’s a door I didn’t notice before and she opens it onto a corridor off from the gallery, our hands still joined. Her skin is silk and as we stop for her to lock it behind us, I absentmindedly stroke a thumb over her index finger and she stops before turning the key.
She looks down at our hands and I follow her gaze; they look perfect. Truly beautiful together – mocha and milk – complimenting each other’s skin tones, radiating an angelic glow.
We both look up at the same time, straight into each other’s eyes and I feel like kissing her again. “Feel” is an understatement. Everything in my consciousness and beyond was forcing me towards her. Kissing her wasn’t just a whim; it was an overpowering command, emulating from the innermost corners of my soul.
It seems we’re on the same wavelength as she lowers her face to mine again. I brace myself for my body’s overwhelming response but our lips don’t meet.
I hear for myself why she’s pulling back; there’s noises coming from behind the door.
“Tina?” There’s a smash. “Where the fuck-?”
Eric. And he’s mad.
I’m looking apologetically at Bette, not making a noise, but she’s turning back to the door and silently turning the key in the lock. I suddenly comprehend why she brought us out of the room. She hadn’t forgotten who was waiting for me. I’m so thankful to this amazing stranger but there’s a niggling thought in the back of my mind warning me I’ll have to go back to him at some point.
She turns back to me and whispers slowly.
“The lock is going to click when I turn it. No doubt he’ll presume it’s where you are and head us off up there. Um.. I-“ She faltered slightly and she looked slightly insecure. “Um.. I don’t want you to go yet.” She said, even quieter.
My heart swells as I hear her admission and I squeeze her hand to assure her it’s alright. She smiles and continues more confidently.
“If he sees you, no doubt he’ll take you home. So, if you go ahead then he’ll merely head me off and I can say you left already.”
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(22 votes, average: 4.32 out of 5)
Sweet! I glad Bette could get Tina away from Eric without having to resorting to violence. I love the conection these two are having and I hope they can figure out a way to get rid of the creep for good. Financial ruin sounds good to me if it can be done without hurting Bette’ galery.
Loved it. You’ve written them to be very intense and its working. Glad you chose to continue it.
Love how your bringing these two together, any B&T begining is alright with me. Eric on the other hand so needs to go. I have every faith in Bette that she’ll take care of him.
Bette will kick Eric`s ass la la la! This time i´m not late!xD No I will not forget! Im gonna send it now! :DGreat chapter and please post more soon! :D
I’m loving the history, is one of the best Bette and Tina begginings. Please keep posting and be mercyful with us and write more than one or two pages!
I’m delighted you’ve found a way to advance the story. Tina’s desire for Bette was beautifully expressed in this installment. The beast named Eric has got to go!
So good!! I hope Tina can get rid of Eric soon so she can spend all of her time with Bette. PPS!!
you have to post another tonight…..please please please…i love this fic…..
I am so loving this!!!!! Glad Tina could get away. Thanks PPS
So happy to see you continue with this one! Love the way you write the connection between the two of them. Great chapter.
Fantastic update.
First, thanks for keeping this story alive. I can now breathe easy! LOL. And second, your muse has definitely returned because the update was awesome. I love the idea of sneaky passage ways!! PPS
This story is happy and sad at the same time. I can not explain why I feel that way. Tina seems this meek and lovely woman who Eric runs all over. When she is in the presence of Bette her whole demeanor changes. She becomes stronger.
This was the first fic I read when I got home today! This is a fabulous B&T beginning you are developing. As for Eric….GRRRRRR. Keep up the fantastic job. PPS!
Bette is awesome!
Yey! I´m so glad you decided to continue with this story. I absolutely love the way you write, it´s so strong you can feel what they are feeling. And as to the beast, I´m with OneStorm1 here, financial ruin sunds great… thanks for this great chapter and for continuing the story. Have a great day..
sweet….my hero Bette…shoot ERIC….put the mad dog down….oops did pacifist me really say that?? yup…pps