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Fall in Vermont Chapter 1
One night at the Inn at Lake George then off to Vermont and Spring Hollow, Bette only wanted to stay a day or so but Kit had a feeling this trip might take much longer than her baby sis had ever dreamed. After a big late breakfast it was off to Vermont. The drive up I-95 had so many memories for them both. The few family trips that had been good with their father, He loved Vermont and all the apples and bakeries and small shops. It was the only time they could recall Melvin wearing jeans. Bette and Kit laughed and chatted during the drive. They took a smaller road once they got near the Lake. It was such stunning countryside. Finally the sign said welcome to The Village of Spring Hollow. They had decided to check into the Inn and then take a nice afternoon walk around town and stretch after the drive. Alice had told Kit where the store was so Kit knew exactly where to take Bette. It was a Sunday afternoon and the little town was buzzing with visitors all there to soak up the clean air and colors of fall. They walked across a bridge and Kit pointed out another store. "That looks cute.. Tiny Country Store". "And look at the fresh bread sign in the window".
Bette thought about Tina’s homemade bread and how much the smell and taste of it. Whenever she was having a bad day – the bread would appear. They stepped into the little store and the rich smell of bread filled the air. From the back of storeroom Tina could here the belles on the door ring. Sammy and Rachel can handle it for a few minutes I need to finish this inventory so I can do an order on Monday. Tina thought to herself. "Welcome" said Sammy "Oh thank you sweetheart" Kit replied. Bette was deep in thought like having the strangest dejavu. It smelled like heaven and everything looked really familiar without Bette knowing why. But one thing she did know is that she had to get some of the bread she smelled. At the bakery counter everything in case looked wonderful and inviting. And then she saw them.. with a little sign "B Bars" How could that be? They were exactly what Tina use to make for her; brownies with raspberry filling and dark chocolate chunks and powdered sugar on top. Bette looked up at the young man smiling "I’ll have a B-bar" "these are my favorite too" said Sammy handing Bette the yummy treat. One bite told Bette everything. "Kit, we need talk.." "Baby girl isn’t this the sweetest little store" Tina heard voices and wanted to go greet her customers.
Tina loved Sunday afternoon’s in the store all the out of town people with news and gossip from outside the Hollow. Tina put on her apron and swung through the door. "Rachel" As she turned to the center aisle and middle of the store a woman at the bakery counter turned and life as Tina knew it changed forever..
tbc..
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(129 votes, average: 3.34 out of 5)
ChakaSB U are certainly off to an excellent start!!!! I was so excited I started clapping…..now I gotta wait till a week b4 another post….maybe u’ll surprise us all and make a post sooner and also on the dat u promised????!!!!! HUH????? HUH?????
this is good! can’t wait until friday.
Amazing start. Totally involved now so please continue on.
Hey, this is a great start. Fate always has a way of intervening, doesn’t it. Oh, can I get a B-bar too?
Hey…nice beginning. Looking forward to your next update. Oh, I’ll take a B bar, as well. They sound great.
Great beginning – a whole new twist with the 4 years apart – looking forward to where you take this.
great start. lets see where you take us. please put breaks between sentences. its hard to read in one long paragraph. other than that great. thanks.
Great start! will be looking for your post every friday. Thanks a bunch.
Hey Chaka – what a wonderfull and promising beginning. I love the way you write and I’m already addicted to this story, so please keep going.This is maybe a silly question…but is this a happe B&T story – my heart cant take a no… :o))
I meant HAPPY and not happe…sorry :o))
Wow, great start! I don’t know if I can wait till next Friday for another update. Please hurry.
Nice start, Chaka!
Really nice start! Looking forward to the rest of your story.
chaka continue soon!
Keep it up. Great start. Can’t wait to hear their words to each other. Alice and Kit are pretty devious. I like that in them. lol
Like this so far. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Great start, please continue
hey this is really good – you are doing great for your first attempt. please post chapter two
you left me hanging!!!!!!!!!!!! nice start! post like now make them longer!!!!!!!!!!
Whoa! another Beautiful Story nice start great Chaka I Love it Please continue post soon Thanks!!!
fantastic start…pls continue!
i can never take B&T separated, please get them back together
Great start, but you are soooo wrong for ending it there. Hope we hear from you soon.
Chaka..thank you for giving us another great story. I am hoping you get to post before next friday.
This is awesome start and interesting and please post soon, thanks!
Alice and Kit…don’t you just love them? Nice start! Please continue!!
I know I just found this story almost six years later, but I so love the start.