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Falling Fast ch. 1
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I walked into my one bedroom condo and I looked around. I sighed at the emptiness that was before me, it had been a week since Stacie left me. I tossed my keys on the table and dropped my briefcase on the floor and slowly walked in. Everyday since she left, I came home hoping she’d be there, sitting on the couch watching one of her shows. But alas, she wasn’t there. I’d been going over what went wrong in my head. How did I not see it coming?
”Bette, we’re just not on the same page.”
”But you said you wanted the same things as I. You wanted to build a future with me, marriage, a family. And now you’re saying it was all a lie?”
”No Bette, it’s not. I want a family, just not right now. You’re talking wedding songs, and houses and it’s overwhelming. I just need to focus on me. I need to get my licence back, register for classes and get financially stable. I hate that I’m always having to depend on you.”
”Stac, I am not hurting for money. I have my own successful art gallery and you wouldn’t have to work. You can go to school, and do what you need to to get your teaching degree.”
”That’s not fair to you.”
”You’re making up excuses. I’ve noticed you haven’t been in this a while.”
”If you’ve noticed, then why are you surprised?”
”I was blindsided, you left without saying anything.”
”I know, I’m a jerk for that but you deserve better.”
”I thought I found better.”
”I’m sorry, but we can still be friends.”
”No, I can’t just be friends with you. At least not right now.”
”Ok, well I’ll be here.”
”Ok.”
”On the bright side, at least we didn’t love each other.”
Those words stung me because I had fallen for her. I was ready to give myself to her completely, making her my wife had been my priority since we started seeing each other. My friends took me out for drinks. Telling me to move on and fuck that bitch. Maybe it was time, maybe I should just move on. I bet she’s not missing me at all.
I sat at my desk with my sushi and fired up my computer. I activated my dating site account and browsed around. This seemed like the easiest way to find someone. The screening process was less personal that if i didn’t like someone, rejecting her was easy. I clicked on profile after profile, sending message after message. I didn’t realize what time it was until my sister sent her usual ”Goodnight little sis” text.
”I can’t believe it’s eleven,” I whispered to myself, ”ok, one more look.”
Then a pair of hazel eyes caught me, wow, then her beautiful smile and blonde hair. I read her profile. Dare I say I was intrigued. She worked in Hollywood, seemed to have her head on straight. She loves art and photography. She has a four year old daughter. Fuck, she’s only twenty-four. That’s a total bummer, twenty-four and thirty-two is quite the age gap, but I messaged her anyway.
I was at a loss for words. Just seeing her picture, it made me weak in the knees. What would I say to such a beauty queen? I just went with something cool, not making me seem overzealous.
porter32: Hey, how are you?
Oh my God, I probably sound like a dumb ass. But it’s sent, I can’t take it back. I’ll just have to wait and see if she responds..
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Welcome back…… like this story, please cont. Pps
Good start. Different, Bette getting dumped.
Welcome back .. We missed you so much .. continue with this story is interesting ^ _ ^ I hope someone has the strength and the courage to take a story Chicago tails … Teresa and Tina UMMM .. VERY INTERESTING. I look forward to chapter two.
“porter32: Hey, how are you?” Thats what I call a start. Not as good as “Me lay you lay” but hopefully it will work.. Please write more.
“Me lay, you lay” — that is a hilarious comment.–I think I heard that refrain in a Reggae song from the last decade back when every once in awhile a hint of English came through long enough as something that could be sung.
Long time no see… Welcome back =] I’ve missed your stories. This is a great start can’t wait to see where it leads. Any chance of you updating your other stories aswell?
AH thanks!
Which story in particular? ^-^
Welcome back.
I love your stories and i am already hooked about this one, so please continu.
Welcome back, love this story
Nice to see you back. :)
Ok I highly doubt bette needs to find someone online I mean she can just walk in a room and get any woman she wants, bette are you blind have you seen yourself lol..and “hey, how are you” is a nice way to start so don’t feel bad…love the start of this story so far I’m ready to read more OliviaKelly never disappoint!
Welcome back ! Please post soon…
Good to have you back! You’ve missed this site.
I’ve always loved your stories.
I liked the beginning, this is different than the usual Bette and Tina beginning, so I like it.
I liked that Bette is not only went to a bar and picking up a girl (ie Tina)
I can not wait for the sequel, please posting soon. :)
there is a chance that you continue your old story?
I have missed this site! I thought it would be nice if Bette met a girl the way most of us (me lol) do nowadays. This closely resembles how I met my lady.
Which story pray tell? ^_^
I love most of your story.
but that is really missing and I would like to know how it goes: “Fall into You”, and “Universe & U”,
and if you still want: “Love in blue” :)
ditto on love in blue.
Great beginning. Love to read more.
Well, well! Thanks for coming back! Please post again soon! Loved the beginning!
seems like this is going to be a great story, pps
Hey OliviaKelly
It has been a while. Welcome back. Nice start. Looking forward to reading more. Thanks for reading and commenting on my challenge fic. I always appreciate your encouragement.
This is interesting and nice start, like it. Please post more, thanks
Welcome back.Good start,PPS
Good to read you again ! PPS I’d like to know more :-)
This seems promising can we have an update please. Oh and can we please have more ‘Love in Blue’?