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Family Dinner
I had already lost Katie to the streets, and all I could think of was I didn’t want the same fate for you. I had no idea how to prevent it except to force you into my image of what I expected in a child of mine. You were so much easier to control and more obedient than Katie that I had no idea how badly you were hurting. Not allowing you to talk about your mother, not grieving her loss I can only imagine the emotional damage I’ve caused. I thought I was protecting you from the evils of the outside world, and never searched my own soul to see the evil within.
I had no right to judge your lifestyle or who you love or how you bring your children into this world. I’m so sorry I rejected your family. Katie told me that you started doubting your ability to be a good parent because of the things I said to you. I was wrong about everything. You’re nothing like me Elizabeth. Your baby isn’t even born yet, and I can see you’re already a better parent than I could ever dream to be. Spending this time with you and Christina. Seeing how much love you have for one another and how hard you’re working to build a home; a family … you’ve shown me in just a few days that biology isn’t what prepares you for parenthood; it’s selfless unconditional love for someone outside of yourself.
I’m so ashamed of my behavior the night you and Christina told me I was going to be a grandfather. What I wouldn’t give to take back my cruel, ignorant hurtful words. I rejected my child and put my selfish pride before your feelings; there is no excuse for that.
It would be hypocritical for me to offer my blessings when I’m so unworthy, but if you and Christina will allow me and God willing, I’d love to try again. I mourn the loss of the grandson that I denied, but I will be here for my grand-daughter and her mothers. I know you don’t believe a leopard can change its spots but please don’t doubt my sincerity. I was weak. I let you down, but please give me a chance to learn. I’m an old man, and I’m set in my ways, but I love you Baby, and I truly only want to have my family back. Making things right between us and reuniting David with his mother is my only motivation for coming here.”
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Hi! Welcom back!
Yeah, i definitely interesting but i think i need re-read previous chapter before comment this.
Zhenya. Thank you for the welcome. It has been a long time since I have updated so appreciate you reading again. I look forward to your comments
Welcome back Bat2012,
It has been a long while, but i am very happy you came back!
Good for Melvin to make amends and admit he wasn’t a good father.
I am proud of Bette that she is so commited to Tina and her daughter and told Melvin not to mess up, because her prority is to her family.
Looking forward to the next chapter,!
Hi Bibi28 thank you for the warm welcome back. I really appreciate you sticking with the story. I’m working on the next chapter so the wait won’t be so long. Bette definitely has her priorities straight this time, and Melvin knows this is his last chance to do the right thing, so I think we will see more positive family dynamics going forward.
Welcome back BAT!
Nice Chapter, enjoyed it and look forward to another post soon!
SG
Hi SassyGran – thank you for the welcome and being such a loyal reader all these years. I am working on the next chapter, so will try to post next week.
Welcome back, Bat! I went back to catch up to the present post. Please continue to the completion of this story. You are one of my favorite authors on this site. I heartily welcome you home!
majicspider60 – Thank you. Really appreciate the kind words and welcome back. It’s been a couple of years since I started this story but I hope to finish it in the next few weeks. Thanks for reading it again.
For me main question – what would Melvin’s behavior was towards Tina if he didn’t dying?
Zhenya, that is a great question. I have been giving it a lot of thought, and hope I can answer it before the story ends. Thanks for reading and commenting.
So glad to see an update of this story.
I’ve re read the whole thing and although there is no drama at all I find it very endearing.
Thank you . Already waiting for next chapter !
Izzie, thank you for reading and commenting. True this is not about the drama. I just wanted to explore a relational story of change and forgiveness. Next chapter is in the works.
Hello Bat2012, have gone back to the beginning and have really enjoyed the story. It was great to read again. Melvin is a changed man and it is so lovely to see. Thank you. Welcome back with the new chapters, feels like a new story. I actually started with Ch. 12, then went back to the begining.