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Family Woman (Chapter 8)
It was like nothing she had ever experienced before. Laying before her, Tina was beckoning her over, and totally available to her. And finally, it wasn’t wrong. It felt so very right.
With somewhat impatient hands, Bette leaned over Tina on the bed, easing her dress up her thighs with deep, ragged breaths. She didn’t know if she could control herself when Tina was naked before her, but she wanted this to be something Tina would never forget. She already knew the same would be true for her. Very slowly, she moved her hands up Tina’s legs, closing her eyes at how smooth they were, and how she so desperately needed to feel more of her.
“Bette … I can’t stand it … please … don’t make me wait like this … oh god …” Tina was squirming beneath her, telling Bette how similarly she needed it. “Please, baby … touch me …”
Tina didn’t usually feel that way, so cherished and adored. She could see in Bette’s eyes that it would last for a long time, and that nothing would be dull or eventful; every kiss would have meaning.
“I need you … so badly,” Bette whispered, getting onto her knees so that Tina would have to spread her legs for her. It was thrilling so watch as Tina’s dress shifted up to her hips. There was only one barrier now, and Bette didn’t know if she could move with the excitement tensing her entire body. She forced herself to relax and to look over all of Tina’s body once again, to take it all in. “Look at you.”
“Touch me …” Tina pleaded quietly, closing her eyes as she felt Bette’s hands smooth up her legs. It was a familiar touch, but it set fire to her need, and she was immediately weak.
“You want me to touch your naked body?” Bette whispered softly, leaning closer to her with a smile that told Tina this wasn’t dirty talk, but a question.
“Yes,” Tina whispered back with a smile of her own, still tormented with all she wanted, and what she couldn’t have as easily as she had become accustomed to. This was new, and it was great! She immediately wondered why she had been skipping this with Bette lately. She found herself enjoying the lust it gave to her. “Please …” she urged, lifting her hips to grind onto Bette. “I want your fingers.”
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(53 votes, average: 3.62 out of 5)
Thank you for my favourite Christmas present so far!!! OK, no, obviously Father Christmas hasn’t delivered the others as yet, BUT I know this is still going to be up there amongst my top pressies! That was another beautiful chapter – moving and sweet and funny and HOT! Reading akshay’s comment makes me glad I haven’t seen the movie as I think I’d be worrying more…….. instead I’m going to trust you to take good care of this Bette and Tina. You seem like a trust-worthy sort! Merry Christmas to you and yours.
Merry Christmas They are so cute and extremely sassy tonight. Love their time together.
Just the motivation I needed to finish wrapping Xmas gifts. Thx for the great update. Merry Xmas!!!
thanks for the present, b !
You legend! Your NC-17s are the best! Thank you for this wonderful Christmas pressie. Were you saving this chappy for Christmas?A merry christmas to you and your significant other.
I have no words for you right now, you’ve left me speechless.
How lovely for them, so pleased that they were able to have this time to themselves for some serious talking and loving. Thanks for posting this chapter today and have it be like a Christmas mircle for them. Merry Christmas to you and yours.
Okay I found the words. I had to take every printed word in a few times first. But here they are–The most well written and beautiful story I have read on this site.
Wow! Merry Christmas to you too. Very Goooooodddd.
I love these two together. I really want this Bette to stay with Tina….
Merry X-MAS my FRIEND!!!! That was so HOT and Loving!!! Thank you I hope the next part to your story goes better than the movie. Thank you PPVS LOVE IT!!!!
That was really wonderful! Your characters are so well-defined and the dialogue hums. Great job. Thanks!
Ok, now it really feels like Xmas! Thank you B, your love scenes are always worth it! Merry Christmas to you!
loved this, i was also having computer problems, had to get a new lap top, and still trying to figure it out… love this story… i still wonder why they had to make love before 12… what else does alice has up her sleeve… Have a MERRY CHRISTMAS…
I just love these moment between them. Thank you for a great story. Merry Xmas.
i concur, you are the master of love scenes and it was well worth the wait! god how i’ve missed this story though please don’t be as long next time…dont think i could cope ;) – loving the sweetness between them now. Merry Christmas bi :)
Hotnest to the max!..But,will Bette come clean to Tina?.Would she admit ro her that she didn’t know anything about this life with her?.. And if she does? ..Would Tina make a big deal out of it?..And would make their relatioship gone bad to the worse.Cuz, that’s what i’m getting when Candace is flirting to Bette?… MAN HOPE NOT?…Bette?.. DON’T SAY A DAMN THING OK?!!… Hey, Merry X-mas dude!
Amazing as always.Marry Christmas.
Amazing as always.Marry Christmas.
Hey Biissexi, That was awesome. I am so glad that Bette was finally able to fully connect and commit to Tina. Suddenly everything fell into place and both gals completely let go and be in and enjoy the moment. It was the little things that made this so special. I hope you have a wonderful festive season full of joy, happiness and much laughter. I will catch up with this tale in the new year. Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
I LOVE this story. I thought that Bette would be thrust back into her reality at the stroke of 12 but that seems to have passed unless that will happen after she falls asleep.How will Bette handle the fact that it was all just a glimpse of what she could have had? I know that she knows it’s not her real life but it’s seems like she is forgetting that it is just a glimpse.My heart is breaking for her already. Will Tina(In Bette’s real life,can’t figure out the word to use) be the same as Tea Leoni’s was in the movie? It’s been what 11 or 13 years since they last saw each other.UGH!! I’m so anxious for youe next chapter.
How do you do it, B? Not only was it HOTTTTTT…but you captured the intimacy between 2 people in love. That was really special…you are special! Merry X’mas…enjoy your holidays…laugh-have fun-feel gratitude!
OMG I LOVE THIS STORY! I know I was supposed to wait until Xmas morning before opening the post but I couldn’t help it. Thank you bi!!!! Merry Xmas to you and your family :)
Damn that was hot and awesome, love it. Please post more, thanks! Merry Christmas my friend!
OMG :-) magical christmas is here! ;-)Thanks for sharing your story, it’s so heart warming and beautifully written!Looking forward for the next chapter… And I hope no sad dramatic story after this as I still enjoyibg this warm and fuzzy feeling after reading your story :-DPS: Merry Christmas from the tropic!
An amazing chapter so very well written. Thank you loved it. Merry Christmas