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Fate Chapter 1
“Not so fast baby” As she catches the young boy just in time. She holds out her hand and Malaci takes it. He loves the beach and is rather impatient so he starts to pull Tina towards the beach.
They both walk down and find a spot and Tina lets go of her son. “Ok rules…first one being stay where I can see you”
“Ok mommy anymore”
“I’ll let you know if I think of any” She sits down and takes out her book, Malaci grabs his bucket and starts to dig.
A few meters away Bette is sitting with her laptop as Miley is building a sandcastle.
“Mama Can you come down to the sea so I can get some water please” Miley asks.
“Sure sweetheart give me two seconds” Bette puts her laptop back in the case then takes Miley’s hand and they go down to get some water.
A few minutes later Tina looks up from her book and doesn’t see Malaci. She panics and jumps up.
“Malaci!”
Bette is walking back up with Miley and notices Tina shouting. She walks over.
“Hi you look scared are you ok” Bette asks concerned.
“My son he’s disappeared” Looking all around the beach.
“Ok don’t worry, what does he look like” Bette asks
“He is six with brown spikey hair and he has on blue shorts and a power rangers t-shirt”
Bette and Tina both look around; Miley is tugging Bette’s hand.
“Mama look at that huge hole” Miley says pointing.
“Mommy” Screams the little boy’s voice.
Tina recognizes it straight away and senses the little boys panic.
“Malaci where are you” She says looking about frantically.
“Im down here” He shouts.
Bette looks down the hole.
“Found him” She reply’s
Tina looks down and see’s her son look up.
“I got stuck. I think I dug too far” He says looking up at Tina
“No kidding” Tina says shaking her head.
“Let me help you get him out” Bette says, she lies down on her tummy and puts her hands down the hole.
“Grip on to my hands sweetie and ill pull you up” The little boy does as he is told and Bette pulls him up. He instantly goes over to Tina who lifts him up.
“Thanks… emm” Tina looks at Bette.
“Bette” She holds her hand out and Tina shakes it.
“Im Tina and this little devil is Malaci”
“Hi its nice to meet you, this little one is Miley” Bette says as she lifts up Miley who lays her head on Bette’s shoulder and puts her thumb in her mouth.
“Nice to meet you too” Tina says smiling.
“So you from around here. Its just we come here a lot and I have to say a woman as beautiful as you I would remember” Bette asks as Tina blushes.
“Not really we just moved here yesterday, we found a nice house on town head crescent”
“Wow this is a small world that’s where we stay number 412” Bette says smiling.
“Ok it is a small world we seem to be next door neighbours” Tina says.
They both decide to sit and chat and the kids begin to build a sand castle together.
Bette is thinking that she possibly just met the most beautiful woman she has ever seen. Little does she know Tina is thinking the exact same.
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(59 votes, average: 3.58 out of 5)
What a lovely start… Pls do continue soon!
oh yeah!!! oh yeah!!! oh yeah!!! and yes children of all ages like to be carried, nursed, including the children in us which needs to be nurtured inside our adult relationships…love the concept, please keep going…
I’m 27 and would love it if I wasn’t too fat to be carried around. LOL So Malaci is the extrovert and Miley is the introvert. Cute. =)
Yes, I like it!!! PPS.
love it…keep it going please.
so i guess b,t will get together move in with each other get married and have a child together, i hope the plan goes that way but with a little drama along the way.
this is so cute. so are miley and malaci going to be sweethearts as well as their moms? pps
ooo do continue. Yep I have a six year old nephew, who I carry from time to time, try carryin a ten yr old lmao, nearly broke my back.
Wow, next door neighbors. They are the most beautiful woman that either one has met. Hopefully neither one is attached to someone else.
please continue..pps
Good start and want to see more!
Bring it on!
I like this beginning, it’s a little different from the norm.
Good start, post again soon.But six years old and needs to be carried? well, maybe they’re small for their age. post soon
I couldn’t even remember I was still being carried around at the age of 3. Anyway, nice start… please post soon :)
Now this is different. And I like. PPS
Very Good Start. Thanks PPS