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Fate – Chapter 15 ((Final))
"I don’t know what he’s told you but a man who’s in love with a woman does not do those things to another woman. He’s also not as over his ex as he led you to believe"
Monica spun around and looked Bette in the eye, her own glassy as tears were trying to fight their way through, "What do you mean his ex? You mean . . . that’s his ex girlfriend? The one you stole?"
Bette clenched her jaw, "I didn’t steal anyone. Tina wanted to be with me willingly. To be honest I didn’t even know Eric was her ex until tonight"
Monica’s lip started to tremble, "B-but . . why would he make me help him break you two up?"
Bette raised an eyebrow at the redhead but said nothing more. Monica looked as if she wanted to crawl somewhere and die. She didn’t say anything further to Bette but she walked away. Bette in a way felt sorry for her, she really did. No one should have to feel the pain of losing someone they love. With that thought in mind, she looked over to Shane and Alice who were looking her way and nodded her head over to them, a signal that everything was back in motion. The two women and Dana walked over towards Eric and Tina but on the way there, Alice stuck out her leg and tripped Dana causing her to crash to the floor with a loud skid. She grumbled really loud against the cold tile floor, clearly not expecting Alice to do such a thing.
"OW! What the FUCK Al-"
Alice quickly ran up to Dana, covering her mouth with one hand and stroking Dana’s hair with the other.
"Oh my God Dana, are you okay?! How did you slip?"
Dana flashed Alice a death glare just as Jackie saw the commotion and immediately ran over to check on the girls. Shane was standing in the back, waiting for Eric to leave Tina’s side as they rushed over too. Jackie got down on her knees and tried to help Dana to her feet. Alice held out her hand while keeping the other on Dana’s mouth.
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(35 votes, average: 4.37 out of 5)
Epilogue?!!!!!!!!
Thanks for the story. Interesting twists and turns to keep us all on our toes!
wow…great ending…is there any rewrite on the works??hahahhaha…..
Thank you for the story and please continue writing.
Hey, ended up at the original place where they were supposed to meet. You really can’t change fate. I’m majorly happy to read that “shadow man” changed his tune at the last word. Or else I would’ve strongly advocated my “Time Cop” idea for the next episode of “Binky and The Brain try to take over Tibette World!” Awesome Liah, I can’t wait to read what else you have in store for us. You are da bomb diggity.
That was a wonderful ending and just excellent writing. thank you for this story.
Ahh now that’s an ending I look forward to more of your work I thoroughly enJoyed this story, thank you for posting it :)
Wow! Thanks for this amazing story Liah.. :-) I just so glad that someone punch Eric square in the face and just so thrilled when knowing that Monica is the one who did that!! .. Finally! Well maybe its necessary for him to received it so the old him realized that they can’t change fate ;-p hmmm.. don’t know what it takes to make him well behave huh!? ;-) lol
Wonderful ending! Can’t wait for more of your work!
thank you for the story
Thank you for this story, I’ve really enjoyed it and the ending was perfect!
Wonderful ending, loved it. Thanks for the great story.
Thats awesome and wdonderful, love the happy ending. Thanks for sharing this with us, love the story!
This really an amazing story, I love it so much, thank u for sharing it with us ;D
I waited until you were done writting this so I could read the last few chapters with having to stop and wait, this story is so Amazing and very loving. Thank you Hope we get your new story soon.
That was a very satisfying ending, in more ways than one. ;) Thanks for the story! :)
Enjoyed this story. Looking forward to reading your next story. Thanks so much for sharing your talent with us. You rock.
Great story…our girls always get together no matter what…thank you..very clever plot