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Fate Chapter 22
“WHAT DOES SHE MEAN ‘WE’ KAITLIN?” Bette shouted
“YOU’RE THE SMART ONE, YOU WORK IT OUT. WAIT TILL I GET MY HANDS ON HER” Kaitlin shouted back
“What has you sister done now?” Tina asked handing a bottle of water to Ashley
“Oh, nothing, usual really ha” Ashley answered
“Shall I rephrase that? What have you both done?” Tina asked raising one eyebrow
“it’s funny story really, you will laugh your head off ha. I would love to sit here and tell it but Kaitlin has a more imaginative mind and can tell it so much better than I” Ashley said clutching her heart “I’m 10 years old and suffering from a heart attack, help me!! You’re the doctor!!”
“YOU ARE NOT GOING TO TOUCH HER KAITLIN IM WARNING YOU!” Bette screamed, Tina lowered her eyes towards Ashley who gave her a wry smile.
“WELL SHE LANDED ME IN IT. PLUS ITS ONLY A PUNISHMENT EXERCISE, THEY ARENT EVEN THAT IMPORTANT” Kaitlin screamed back
“ARE YOU THICK…”
“MUST BE. EVERY ONE ELSE IN THIS FAMILY IS SMART EXCEPT FROM ME AND YOU HATE IT”
“THE FIRST WORD GIVES IT AWAY, IT’S A PUNISHMENT! AND DON’T GIVE ME THAT” Bette laughed looking away
“ASHLEY…” Kaitlin shouted on her. The colour in Ashley’s face went from red to white in a matter of milliseconds.
“YOU LAY ONE HAND ON HER LADY” Bette warned
“YOU WILL DO WHAT? GROUND ME” Kaitlin looked at her
The house went silent. Tina had a hold of Ashley’s hand as they both stood opened mouthed in the doorway to the kitchen. Bette stood with her hands to her face tears welling up in her eyes and Kaitlin was sitting on the floor, her hand covering on side of her face as she stared at the rug. After realising what had just happened Kaitlin stood up and made her way to the door Bette tried to grab her arm but missed
“Kait, I’m so sorry I didn’t mean to do that” Bette cried
“Don’t you speak to me” Kaitlin hissed as she grabbed her jacket off the hook at the door and left.
“Tina what have I done?” Bette asked her looking up
Tina and Ashley hadn’t moved an inch and still stood with their mouths open.
“You just slapped our daughter to the ground. That’s what you done.” She answered.
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(16 votes, average: 3.94 out of 5)
I know hitting your child is not right, but I would have been tempted to have done it as well in this case. That girl has an attitude and a mouth that does not become her, let alone her age. I do however believe that Bette is a shook up about what she did as her daughter. Tina should have saved that last comement for a more private moment and should have not, I repeat, not have said it in front of their other daughter. She should support Bette all she can. She also knows Kaitlin and her behaviour. Post soon.
I’m not saying its right, but you know sometimes their is no other option. Tina so needs to stand behind Bette on this. Kaitlin is only 10, let her get away with too much now, and lord help you when she hits her teens.
ok i come from a fam where physical discpline sumtimes needs to take place…im not saying beat the shit out a kid…but sumtimes they need to know whos the boss!! little bad asses need tina to b more authoratative
Gosh, I hate to say it, but she did kind of deserve it! she’s been getting away with too much… there is nothing but trouble ahead if something isn’t done!! pps!
Obviously grounding doesn’t work anymore. Is 10 to young to be sent to Military school?
Bette tried to control herself but Kaitlin is just a smartass and knows the buttons to push to get Bette riled up. Bette tried to be reasonable but Kaitlin didn’t respond to that. She needed to be brought back to reality. Both Bette and Kaitlin are headstrong but Bette’s the adult here, Bette and Tina should have stopped the bf/gf thing with Kaitlin and Matt especially when they saw them kissing w/tongue. They are only 10. Nip it in the bud. Sometimes parents want to be their kids pal and be cool. Doesn’t work when they are so young. Kids need boundaries. If Bette had nipped it from the beginning she wouldn’t have smacked Kaitlin. Now, Kaitlin’s in control and Bette feels rotten.
Yea, she pretty much deserved it, and if a slap is all she gets, I think she should consider herself lucky!!! Okay Tina_Rules this is not the time for Bette to be pussy. She needs to lay down the LAW with K, and Tina needs to SUPPORT her!!!!!
She Knew that all she would get was being grounded for a few weeks. Smart mouth 10 yrs old. First her leaving the house after the slap was a NO-NO. She push Bette all the time. there will be trouble ahead unless they stop it now. They all need some kind of help. thanks
First of all B&T have let Kaitlin’s temper go un checked for far too long. You should not wait until a child is 10 years old to put your foot down. Having said that, as an adult you should try and NEVER discipline your child when you are angry yourself. It is an accident waiting to happen. Remove yourself from the situation and approach them later. I come from a family where physical discipline was the rule, but you should NEVER strike you child across the face or anywhere to the head, ESPECIALLY in anger. I think that Bette needs to appologize for slapping Kaitlin and she and Tina need to talk to her about her temper as well asget to the bottom of this particular incident.
She is lucky that she did not live in my household. My dad would have killed her long before now. It may be too late to curb some of Katilyn’s misbehavior. She needs to really put a stop to it and do it now.
First Kait just make me laugh so hard about her talk but now she is to much and Im 90% and let see more please, thanks!
dANG THAT GYRL IS TROUBLE AND i CAN UNDERSTAND THAT IN THE HEAT OF THE MO0MENT AFTER HER SMART MOUTH JUST SLAPPING HER DOWN…THESE MOMMIES BEST BE UNITED IN THEIR DEALINGS AND POOR ASHLEY REALLY NEEDS THEIR SUPPORT WHILE kATLIN TAKES UP ALL THEIR TIME…MORE SOON.