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Fate – Chapter 6
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"I doubt you’ll have any problem in that department, Bette. You have a charm and a grace to you that no woman can resist"
Bette nodded, "I’m just afraid . . ."
Alice laughed, "Afraid? Bette Porter afraid? Thought I’d never see the day"
When Bette didn’t say anything Alice apologized.
"I’m sorry. Afraid of what?"
". . . I’m afraid that I won’t be able to shake my past"
"Bette, its called the past for a reason. I’ve never seen you this worked up over anyone before. That has to say something. Don’t let fear stop you from getting close to her. She may be what you’re looking for"
"I just . . . I don’t want to hurt her Al"
"Then don’t Bette. That night we broke it off I told you that one day you would find the one that would make you change your ways. Maybe it finally happened. Don’t run from it, see it through"
Bette nodded and smiled, "You’re right . . . thanks Alice"
"No problem Porter"
Bette stood silent for a few seconds, "Al?"
"Yeah?"
"I never really apologized for hurting you. I was selfish and stupid and . ."
Alice cut her off, "Don’t even worry about it. Water under the bridge. Some people just aren’t right for each other you know?"
Bette nodded but didn’t say anything.
"You still there Porter?"
"Yeah, I’m here"
"Jeez are you serious? I thought you ran off to get ready. What are you waiting for?"
Bette laughed at her friend. Despite everything that went on between them, Bette was glad Alice stuck around.
"Thanks again Al. I’ll call you tomorrow"
*****
The bell rang and Tina ran out of her room over to the intercom. She had her head tilted to the side as she put on one of her earrings before pressing the button to open the door downstairs. She held it for several seconds, unlocked her door, then ran back to her room to finish getting ready. As she was putting on her lipstick, she heard her door open. Her heart started to beat faster as she called out.
"Make yourself at home, Bette. I just need five more minutes"
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Just…Wow…!
weally amazing!!
Girl I love this story eric is history I love the twist with the purse keep it up!
Sometimes Alice is usefull
That was an awesome update. Thank you. Love this story.
“Okay, let’s go”…I mean REALLY! Let’s get going here! Get to the good stuff!
again… loved it… goodbye eric… pps
Awesome, loved it.
Nice post. Please continue.
awesome, really!
That was great and Alice is good. Please post more, thanks!
Wow! Forehead to forehead is so sexy to me! Bring on the rest of their date quickly!
Love your Alice in this story. More mature. Love the way this story progress. Very smooth. Thank you.
Love your story,thank you for the update.Alice is a good friend,good for Bette.
Okay here’s a scenario to get rid of Capt. Obsessive; have you ever seen Time Cop with Jean Claude Van Damme? We can use that time space law/Hollywood theory. Eric can go back to the bum who gave him the stuff and try to punch and voila, poof-be-gone!!! The bum is really him in loser-limbo. What do you think? Too much?! Oh well, great first date. Bette is the perfect lady and Tina is just superb in not holding back. You’re still kicking names and taking ass, thank you ; )