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Fée Marraine: A Fairy Tale in Four Parts (2)
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When she stood up, the man stopped and considered her, smiling lecherously. “Now ain’t you a fine beauty,” he heckled.
The tone of his voice jolted Tina out of her self-pity tantrum and she turned to him and glared. Quickly she followed the stranger and gathered what groceries she could and stuffed them into the torn bags and then hopped into the Ferrari while the woman held the door for her. In moments they had done a U-turn and were heading down another residential street.
“I’m going to stain your leather seats,” Tina said. Then she smiled and chuckled. “Not to mention your car will smell like a pizzeria for weeks.”
“Well it is an Italian car,” the woman joked back. She pulled into a lighted parking lot connected to a liquor store and put her car in park. “I’m Bette, by the way.”
“Bette from Beverley Hills,” Tina said and she wiped her hand on a clean area of her jeans and held it out. “Tina from Hollywood.”
“Nice to meet you, Tina, and again, I’m sorry for almost hitting you. Honestly, I only wanted to help when I saw you’d missed your bus. That’s why I was following. I guess I should have been driving slower. I didn’t expect you to step off the curb in front of me.”
“Following me, huh?” Tina eyed her and then smiled. Her sense of humor was returning now that the shock was wearing off and she’d cried out her pent up frustrations. “You aren’t one of those Beverly Hills madams out trolling for a new crop of girls to add to your escort service, are you?” She had said it with a serious face although she meant it as a joke.
Bette blanched with indignation, not catching her humor. “Do I look like a madam?”
Tina laughed then and pointed down to Bette’s feet. “Italian shoes from what I glimpsed of them, and a Ferrari.” She appraised the expensive jewelry and silk blouse the stranger wore. “And your jewelry isn’t cheap, and neither is that silk top you’re wearing. I’m just saying…a woman like you in a neighborhood like this. And you were following me.”
Bette assessed herself, glancing at her feet and expensive attire. She smiled. “Okay, you have a point. But you heard me in the market. I got off the freeway for gas and couldn’t find my way back on.”
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I haven’t finished part three and have part four only outlined. I will do my best to get the next installment up by the beginning of next week.
Hi BenMac, this is a great story. I’m enjoying it a lot. Didn’t think I would when I started reading the first page of the first chapter. This chapter was a sweet one so full of promise for their futures. We understand that you have a real life with real responsibilities, so post when you can. When you told us you had more classes, etc., then you have more to do than normal so take your time, we aren’t going anywhere we shall be here when you are able to post. Don’t hurt yourself. Thanks for taking the time to post.
I liked the story so much, I wish tub at the party fall in love with bette and helena is also in love with bette bette but fall in love with the beauty of bath tub at the party and be jealous of Helena.
Oh my God, you should have seen my face when I figured out who the fairy godmother is. Haha! I LOVE it. And my little T is so cute I could hug her for hours.
Thanks for another amazing story! Can’t wait to read more.
…put them together and what have you got….?!?!!
bibbidy bobbidy boo!
Love this story. Charming!
Well, if you are going to be run over and covered in spaghetti sauce who better than our lovely Bette to do it! She is the Godmother and Princess Charming rolled into one and what a package!
Love the story and look forward to Parts 3 and 4.
Amazing story! Looking forward for the next parts.
I have been looking forward to this chapter. I loved it.
I immediately recognized the previous chapter, the story of Tina script. because it is one of my favorite stories! :)
I look forward to the next chapter.
Kinda stirring it altogether are you? Keep on sister – love your creativity!
Loved it! I got the “ella” connection to our lovely JB. Post when you can BenMac, we’ll all still be here.
Benmac, worshiping their história.Você not only has a history,
His story brings wonderful messages of love, respect
and kindness, as when Bette tells Tina about her kindness
with the old lady at the supermarket, and difficult today to see acts
goodness, because most only think and himself, and that is very sad.
And in my opinion Ella is Stella …
All stars.
Waiting ever so (im)patiently for Chapter 3. I have one complaint though; 4 chapters will not be enough and you know this, ma’am!
Ps: I always describe myself as a cynical optimist. Good to see I’m not the only one.
…Unrealistic! There was a situationist graffiti in Paris , May 1968, reading :“Soyez réalistes, demandez l’impossible”, Be realistic, demand the impossible! Go Cindertina!
Stella warning is that Tina should not believe in Helena but choose BETTE. Gotta love Shane, Max and Gus.