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Festivities part 3
Shane tried to keep her smile from appearing, but she couldn’t. Carmen went red. "You saw us?"
Shane nodded.
"We did," Bette smiled, enjoying the blush on Carmen’s cheeks too. "Why don’t you two … kiss again?" The grin on her face sent chills down Tina’s spine. She loved this side of her lover.
Carmen looked over to Shane with wonder in her eyes, as if to ask permission. Shane nodded with a smile, watching as Carmen leaned over her to meet Tina’s lips again. Bette gently laid her hand on Tina’s back, to let her know she was right there.
When Carmen pressed against her lips harder, Tina let out a moan, so soft it shot a tingle through Shane who had these two beautiful women kissing over her lap. She had been with two other women before, but this was different. It was the love of her life and her hot friend.
Bette smiled at everything she had done. She let her hand caress down Tina’s back, watching Shane’s reaction to her lover. She was getting off on how much Shane wanted the blond. She could see it in her eyes. She moved her glance over to Carmen, adoring her deep V neck. She let her eyes linger on her chest, imagining her own lips kissing all over the young woman’s body. She smiled to herself again.
Shane felt her arousal climbing, raising her hand and nearly touching the blond’s side. She looked up to Bette with confusion in her eyes, and the brunette nodded with a smile. Shane let herself move again, smoothing her hand up Tina’s side and over her shoulder.
Tina loved that the two dominant figures of the four of them were watching her, enjoying the show. Both had their hands on her. After feeling Shane’s touch, she pulled back from the kiss, her eyes moving from Carmen to Shane as she leaned in even further and laid a gentle kiss on the woman’s lips. Shane quivered at the naughty situation and tried to be soft with her ever-growing desire to throw Tina up against a wall.
Carmen watched their kiss with intrigue, her wonderment quickly turning into a lustrous smile. She was so happy Shane was okay with this.
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(82 votes, average: 3.49 out of 5)
your writing should be outlawed. Is there a rating hotter than NC-17?
I just had a F*ckn Heartattack!… Shower time!
I was once told that I was “HOTTER THAN A FIRECRACKER ON THE 4TH OF JULY” by this very old lady at a family reunion. I think that definitely applies to this post. Good Lord please tell me there will be more posts, because this is AWESOME! You are very adept at describing everything that’s happening. I feel like I am there sitting on the couch watching everything. Dayummmmmmm that’s erotic!
THAT WAS FREAKING AMAZING!!!!!!
Wowsa…how could Bette see and participate in all that sexiness and not get off herself. Tell me that we will see that in your next posting. Great story!
Whoohoohoo that was sooo HOT! Post more soon.
Did Bette say next time? A girl can dream.. Thanks for the warning, I almost read this at work. And probably would’ve short circuited my pc if I did(lol) PPS!
Holy f***!!!! I’m completely speechless…*THUD*
that was beyond hot, damn woman, but I couldn’t help but feel bad for bette, would have luved to see her get hers!!
I think my computer melted. Wow! No more words just WOW!
Well Shane it is way out there not a little out there
And Be naked too please
I thought it would’ve been fine reading this in the library- before my big presentation in class… Oh, boy was I wrong!
HHHHHHHOOOOOOOOOTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!
My heart started to pound just by reading your warning and you did not disappoint. Next time Carmen naked…. please.
I share the same sentiments as sgtmags . And btw, who the FUCK rated this 4 STARS???????? Thank goodness for toys.
verrrrryyyy enjoyable…please post more!
That was so HOT, that I had to let natural take it’s course.