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Festivities part 5 – Final
“Lay down,” Bette whispered, her husky tone sweeping over Carmen. She swallowed hard and then laid back with her chest heaving.
Shane smirked at the way Carmen reacted, calmly running her fingers up and down Tina’s arm.
Bette helped Carmen move over so they could lie down properly on the bed, and she laid between Carmen’s legs. After pressing their lips together, Tina exhaled with her eyes transfixed on the couple ahead. The two women on the bed were so beautiful, so rhythmical, and so splendid, that just the sight of them together was sending tingles through her body.
As soon as Bette traced her tongue along Carmen’s lips, she felt the allowance, and their tongues met. With this new level accomplished, they became involved in a make out session. Bette’s hands ran over Carmen’s body, down her stomach and under her shirt. The caramel skin felt so hot under her fingers. Bette knew the power she had over Carmen, and began to tease the woman by tracing her fingers under the waist of her shorts.
Carmen’s writhing body was grinding up against Bette – her clit rubbing hard against the material of her shorts from the contact of Bette’s stomach and pelvis. That contact made her even more desperate, pushing up on her feet to grind harder.
Tina watched the scene with fascination, completely enthralled. Shane was equally entranced, trying to keep her strong control and appear calm. She was always laid back and in control of her emotions – well, almost always.
Bette pulled back for a moment and took her hands away to move back onto her knees, pulling her own shirt up over her head.
Carmen’s eyes scanned over Bette’s torso, and up to her gorgeous breasts, only covered by a purple bra. The bold seductress on top of her was making her crazy, magnified by the fact that her lover was watching every second of their play. She squirmed eagerly as Bette smirked and lowered back on top of her. The energy and suspense was hanging in the air, and it was almost tangible by all four women. They were all getting off on it.
“Do you want me to touch you?” Bette asked with her smooth voice, breathing onto Carmen’s lips.
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(64 votes, average: 3.38 out of 5)
yes it was
Oh it definitely was! That was way too hot! :)
DEFINITELY YESSSSSSS!!!
You may think this is the final installment, but if Alice and Dana ever find out what they missed, the quadruple will never hear the end of it.
That was some major hotness, I enjoyed every minute of it. I some how suspect that it would not have been as ok if it were anyone but B&T and S&C. I hope to read more from you in the near future.
Thank you!
Jeesuz…get me a cigarette! LOL. I can’t wait to see what you come up with next.
it was hot!too bad it was the final.^^ Perhaps, Bette and Tina should invite Dana and Alice to come over…then Helena and Dylan…then…lolthank you for this hot story.
guess there’s no holds barred in the fanfic universe. I’m desperately old fashioned coz i like my bette and tina a little less adventurous like in the show. But i have to admit, tina + shane = hot.
Absolutely positively yes!!!
Okay, so I’m a greeeeedy Sharmener who is immediately piqued at the mere thought of sharing either Shane or Carmen. It doesn’t sit well with me. But reading this entire story. . . day-um!! *fans self* The way you wrote it builds a natural progression with the characters and their comfort levels, and, well, it just works. They’re all hot together, yet both couples are still very loyal and loving in their own relationship. I think that’s what makes the biggest difference. And I think that’s why the first and last chapters were my favorite. *wink* Very well done. Awesome, awesome.
i think you are over due for some more festivities