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Fighting Back — Part One
Tina lay back, letting her hair spill over the pillows. She reflected back on all her feelings over the past 24 hours. The feeling of being with Bette, of feeling Bette, of smelling her, of touching her, of being touched by her. The feeling of being loved again, proper love, not the fake love from Helena that was showered on her in a continual rain. Tina finally felt happy, she felt free.
Helena knocked on the bedroom door.
“Tina, its me, Helena, are you ok?” Helena said, opening the door gently, thinking Tina might be asleep. She edged into the room slowly, wanting to check on Tina, ask how everything went.
As soon as she entered the room, she could tell something was different, something was not quite right. Maybe it was Tina with her “let me bask” expression on, maybe it was the photo of Bette she could see under the pillow, maybe it was the whole atmosphere.
“Tina, what the ***** happened?” Helena demanded, her eyes flashing. She pulled Tina up from the bed, even thought Tina was obviously pregnant. Due to her weight, Tina was unbalanced, falling heavily into Helena, who immediatly pushed her back.
She noticed something on Tina’s left hand.
A ring
Bette’s ring
“You…you slept with her” Helena spat. Tina shrunk back, worried. She’d never seen this anger, in anyone. She’d sensed it in herself the night she realised about Candace, but this was different, this was her fault.
“YOU FUCKED HER YOU *****” Helenas fist came out of nowhere, striking Tina in the nose. Tina cried out, as blood began to flood from it. She grabbed for something to stop the flow of blood, finding a shirt on the floor.
Helena began to hit her again and again, pinning her on the bed as she screamed obscenities. Tina was crying, fighting her.
Helena finally regained control of herself, as she stood up, spitting on Tina.
“Worthless *****” She muttered, storming out. Tina was left bloodied and bruised, trying to regain control of her breathing, her nose still bleeding.
“*****” was all she could say.
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OH HELL NO!!! Yo you have to make it longer next time. Bring on Bette, bring on Helena’s beat down. Good start, fuck her up!!!
I know here in Texas its against the law to hit a pregnant woman. Jail time. No matter if she had a ring on her finger amillion picture of Bette or smell like sex shouldn’t hit. She is married to Bette and Bette would say thing to hurt her but never hit. To the police I would go.
I’m not buying this, verbal and physical abuse from Helena, leaving marks that could prove she’d assaulted Tina; Tina putting her ring back on and still being in Helena’s bed or a place that Helena could just walk in on her, nude? I know its fiction, but I’m not buying this one, sorry.
Interesting…..looks like a good start. am waiting to see where you go with this…so post soon.
Whoa! Hey this is really intense and it’s really sad OMG! but keep going Please.
Ok wait…isn’t Tina pregnant?…what is this shit…1) Tina isn’t stupid, since when do you leave the scene of the crime looking & smelling like sex..2)Helena a woman of social justice..a chik that feedz starving children…a woman who adoures her own children & takes care of a pregnant Tina….would not kick her ass..
WTF?!? if ur gonna write something like that u should make it longer and mayb warn us a bit in the authors note, u no im a big tina fan and u nearly gave me a heart attck with that geez. besides the fact that i almost died it was very good and u should continue. hopefully helenas gone and next time u do something like this mayb u know warn us the helenas gonna be in it.
ohhh Bette will kill Helena for hit her wife and pregnant??? what kind of monster hit a pregnant woman????..better Tina call Bette..i like it post soon
This is a really good story, please continue in this line of thinking… I appreciate…
damn she just beat the shit out of a pregnant Tina wonder how Bette gonna take this ………..good post
Wow..this got serious. While I am not inclined to believe that Helena would resort to physical violence,I still would like to see where this is going. Sometimes things arene’t always what they seem. Please continue!!
I love Helena but her ass is about to get whopped severely