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Final Chapter
Brom got on a call to Mike immediately, to explain what had just happened.
Charlotte, NC
8:20 am
“Alright, I’ll tell your man to move them to the master-bedroom, and stand guard outside,” Mike answered. “We haven’t seen …”
He broke off suddenly and cursed. The radio came alive with shouts from Tom and Harry simultaneously.
“In pursuit of an unknown subject wearing a ski mask two floors down!” Mike shouted into the microphone clipped on the collar of his bullet proof vest as he yanked the door of the security center of the building open violently, holstering the phone onto a strap on his shoulder, keeping the call with Brom connected.
He yelled at the guard in the security center as he unclipped his holster and sprinted down the hall, heading towards the stairwell, and instructed the guard, “Lock that door behind me and don’t let anyone in unless I say so! And I’ll need updates about this guy I’m going after!”
Unfuckingbelievable! He said to himself. I thought we’d checked that stairwell and locked that door! And why is he heading down? Paul’s penthouse is ten floors up!
Meanwhile, in one of the screens of the lobby desk area Tom had seen another figure in another stairwell one floor up from the lobby rapidly climbing the steps. He shouted into his microphone as he vaulted over the top of the lobby desk, “I’ve got another one ascending the east stairwell from one floor above me!” He landed awkwardly but balanced himself and began sprinting towards the east stairwell – doing it all so swiftly, the guard in the lobby thought, as he observed Tom, it had to have been an exercise that he’d practiced.
What the fuck is going on? Where did these guys come from? Tom thought as he ran for the door to the east stairwell.
Soon after, Mike and Tom heard Harry also shout into their earpieces, “In pursuit of a third unknown subject. Masked, and heading down the south stairwell!”
Harry holstered the binoculars to his hip, and in the same motion slung his rifle to his back, as he took off on a deadsprint for the south stairwell.
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Weehawken, New Jersey
8:25 am
“It’s a good thing we bumped up Tina’s meeting with her parents even earlier than 9, “ Bette said, leaning forward, about to tap Brom’s shoulder. They’d discussed quickly that they should proceed to the airport as planned, until Tina was safe, and they could ascertain how to ensure the man would not be able to track them down again.
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Wow! That was awesome but I hate cliffhangers. Can’t wait for the explanation and who was that women?
Did i really see this is the final chapter? !
But we Need to know that Bette& Tina will survive the attack.
Please
I’m confused. …but patiently waiting, hoping this isn’t really the final chapter.
YES PLEASE THERE MUST BE MORE….. THX
OH NO YOU DIDN”T? You have just dropped this chapter on us and ran. Was the woman carrying the attackers in her heavy roller bags? Etienne is a traitor to Bette? How did Paul get in this mess? Nazi coverup because of papers Raoul left Bette? Tina is ok? Bette is hurt? Is George tied upon this strike? Have Mike and Brom failed to keep their promise? What a mess you have to resolve! Get busy and post again soon.
Haha, I think that magicspider covered pretty much everything.
Very exciting stuff, and enjoyable too. I hope the next book is coming soon.
Thank you!
You are a bit evil, lol!!! Nice cliff hanger…I’ll be stalking around and waiting for a sequel!! Great job!!
ladies: thanks for all your support and comments throughout. Epilogue coming soon.
Sky,
Great chapter with action and intrigue. Can’t wait to see this mystery unraveled.
“But this isn’t over.”
Dun-dun-dunnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
And now for the conclusion to our story…….? No good person would leave all of us hanging ……of course someone else described you as evil! I will not be able to sleep tonight worried about what is happening to the girls….
ahhhh…epilogue on the way! That’s good – or else we send Jimmy two toes over to see you! Very exciting – but confusing to say the least! Who….what?! Wow!
Wow, all I can really say is wow. And who the heck is Carousel.
Damn dramas