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Fire and Ice Chapter 16
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April 1999
Being the ever so diligent voyeur Alice prided herself as being, she knew it would be futile, if not irresponsible, to try and peel her eyes away from watching Bette and Tina dissolve into one another. Afterall, they really did need a lookout.
Alice stood observing the two women who shone out like a beacon in the thick crowd. The heat these two women were producing was unmistakable…
Alice felt her head lower in concentration as she allowed herself the pleasure of viewing this erotically subtle encounter.
Almost as if on cue, Alice caught Eric Slate slowly making his way into the main gallery, eyes absently peering about the sorted faces of the looming crowd. She closed her mouth, which, until now, Alice had been unaware was hanging open. Swallowing hard to pacify the dessert that now conquered her tongue, Alice sprung into action and dove with abandon into the crowd.
Bette and Tina had not noticed Alice’s quick approach; they were lost in each others essence completely…
Tina lightly bent her neck back to rest her hair on Bette’s forehead. She felt like any minute she might lose control of her knees and come tumbling down.
Bette sensed the need for steadiness and slowly brought her hands to glide softly over Tina’s elbows, gently cupping the delicate skin. Bette was thankful that the crowd was so compact…she felt like she may crash to the floor at any moment…
It was on the third time that Alice called Bette’s name when Bette finally came out of her haze.
"BETTE" Alice called again, hastily grabbing her shoulder.
Tina still hadn’t noticed Alice’s presence until she felt the brunette tense up behind her, dropping Tina’s elbows in the process. She turned around immediately, her eyes huge with alarm.
If looks could kill, Alice would surely be dead in mere seconds. Bette narrowed her eyes into daggers. Tightening her lips, Bette released a low toned dismissal.
Alice ignored the visibly frustrated brunette and pressed on.
"No. You don’t understand…mayday, mayday…" Alice was almost breathless as she tried to recover after contending with the ominous crowd.
"Fuck this is worse than a Coldplay concert, Bette. How many damn people do you really know…" Alice breathed, suddenly off subject.
Bette’s glare became more brutal and Alice quickly snapped back into her position as lookout captain.
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Getting used to the cliffhangers…I’ve discovered it makes you want the next chapter to be here sooner, so with that siad it’s ok as long as you don’t keep us waiting too long:)
I so just caught up. I see you left us wanting more again. That is OK, but we need another chapter real soon. Hope Alice will get Eric out of the picture for now until Tina can do it for good. Thanks PPVS
Yep..it is time for Eric to go bye-bye. And time for Bette to go claim her woman. You take this as slow as you want…pps
Crazy cliffhangers! :) Sexual tension rising too the top levels.
“I will find you…” yeah, go bette!!!!! I really love your story. great post.
I couldn’t get enough of this, its so addicting.
Yes you did it again. that is is like being in the middle of a ship wreak and having a hole in the life raft. you left us hanging again. Look B&t in this, Bette will find her I very sure of that. thanks
you rated this a R… what a tease… ok slow is good… and they just hit a speed bump in eric… now lets get alice to take care of eric.. PPS
I WILL FIND U; GREAT LINE…LOVING IT PPS.
Great post even though you left us hanging again. I’m glad they got all the nonsence out of the way concerning Al and Tina let Bette know she is indeed interested. hopefully they will get a few more uninterupted moments before the night is over especially with Al running interference for them. PPS
ok we need to really get rid of eric soon,lol… awesome:)
Ooooh boy, loved the “I’ll find you” thing, it’s soooo “I’ll be back”. Brilliant. And for Alice, that was so cute. She can be like the devil but surely she stands for her friends. I always wanted to read someone’s POV on Bette and Alice’s relationship as friends. Anyway I felt for Bette when Eric kissed Tina, boy I can relate to that feeling. And pooooor Eric. Keep the good job, dear. *dying to see Alice distracting Eric, as I have a feeling it’ll happen at some point* :)
I just love how you like to tease us with this story, anticipation must be your favorite aphrodisiac, lol. PPS.
O.K., while it is another little cliff hanger you delivered some real action between their sultry looks. Great post and two of them…no complaints here!
I’m okay with cliffhangers as long as you post everyday (ha-ha).. wonderful chapter, firestarter.. just keep those fire alive.
You did it again, your cliff hangers are such a torturer, but this chapter is amazing and brilliantly written, I like their passion for each other already, thank you Hun, you are going a great job with the slow burning story.Thank you so muchPost soon
That was great and love it!