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Fire and Ice Chapter 29
Tina’s eyebrows arched, her own head now shaking from side to side. "Then what…."
"Tina…" Bette began, cupping Tina’s chin in her hand. "The only thing I want to do right now is kiss you…god, it’s amazing…it’s the only thing I’ve wanted to do since I first laid eyes on you…" Bette admitted, strangely open to the blonde.
Tina blushed, a weak grin now appearing across her swollen lips. "Me too."
"Really?" Bette lost track of her explanation, sidetracked by the blonde’s amazing admission.
"Yeah…I thought…I thought you we’re gorgeous…" Tina giggled lightly, slightly embarrassed with her confession. She dug her chin slightly into Bette’s palm as she looked down at the floor….but her eyes only meet the brunette’s heaving chest. She quickly returned her gaze to Bette’s eyes, weary of her returning passion.
Bette smiled an intensely satisfied smile that made Tina only want to taste her lips again. Instead of returning the smile, Tina instantly pouted, remembering that Bette was in the middle of explaining just why she had broken that kiss…
"Then why did you push me away…?" Tina looked deeply into Bette, causing Bette’s heart to ache.
"Tina…I had to. I was getting really caught up and…" Bette was stopped short.
"So was I…why is that wrong…?" Tina was confused by this so called ‘temptress’. Was Bette just all talk? Or had she made a terrible mistake…maybe Bette just felt sorry for her…maybe she was just being nice…
"Listen Tina. It’s not wrong…I just want to make sure it’s right…that everything’s right…." Bette was strongly searching Tina’s eyes, desperately trying to make her understand.
"What do you mean, Bette? I feel like your talking circles around this…if you’re not interested, just tell me." Tina demanded, succumbing again to the doubts in her own mind.
"Not interested? Not interested???!!!! Tina, I’ve never been so ‘interested’ in my life…" Bette’s tone was all at once flabergasted and aggressive.
Tina’s face beamed hotly…her heart fluttered, tickling the inside of her chest with pleasing strokes. She felt like her heart was sprouting wings…
"And that is why I want everything to be right…you’ve had an interesting 24 hours to say the least…and I don’t want to complicate that….I want to help alleviate some of the burden. I just want us to take this slow…because Tina…I…I want you to be sure. I don’t want to take advantage…"
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(43 votes, average: 3.53 out of 5)
read this at work last night… and loving the slow burn… PPS
I like it! One fighting to maintain control for the first time in her life and the other trying to gain control for the first time in her life. Hahaha this is soooo delicious! See you tomorrow.
wonderful, simply wonderful!
Sorry I haven’t been able to comment, I have been working like crazy the last couple of days and I just wanted to read through and catch up! Anyway glad I’m not Bette for I fear I would not be able to control myself! PPS
you don’t have that name for no reason at all… I guess a little control is OK but I can’t imagine they can hold out for long. You have the “tension” between them so strong…one of them has to break. I think Tina will push Bette over the edge…and I can’t wait. pps
Control? Bah! who needs it? :DLovely, fire…this story is just lovely!
Slow boil about to go full out…oh so delightful!
AAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGHHHHH!!!!!!! control??????? control sucks!!!!! lmao…you are even a bigger tease then before fire!!!!
That was great and Bette doing the right thing.
Well, in my opinion control is overrated
Oh yes… don’t let them have control too long ;-)
i think control is sweet, but the question is how much control can Bette & Tina practice?…
I agree with Jackiee 1. Control??!!! totally overrated. Great story. pps
very sweet of bette to buy her dinner 1st; Lol…pps
These ladies are not thinking of eating, they want each oher so badly that i will be hard all night on them.
well done! It’s sweet that Bette wants to wait and Tina seems to be even more turned on by this thoughtful Bette. can’t wait for THE moment. pps
“I want to help alleviate some of the burden. I just want us to take this slooow…” Just when things are starting to heat up, you pull out the fire extinguisher. *Sigh* But I understand, firestarter. They haven’t even had a formal first date yet. So at this stage of their “relationship” the hot kiss is actually several steps ahead of where they should be. Imagine that! And here I thought that they’re making such slooow progress, such tortuous build up. First date at the 30th chapter mark. Imagine that! Oh shucks, I am hooked, firestarter. Totally and utterly hooked. Thanks for stepping on the brakes and doling out a new round of punishment. *wink, wink* PPS! :)
Who is Bette trying to kid. When it comes to Tina she’s never had any control, and thank God for that. But you gotta love the struggle.
I SO loved the description T had of her heart feeling like it was sprouting wings….when someone is saying all the right words to you and you can tell they mean them, that is exactly what it feels like!! Ok, on to the next one & thx :)
Nice update lets see how long before these two lost control,lol :)PPS