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Fire and Ice Chapter 34
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"Yes?" Bette was instantly juiced, her heart pumping with the intonation in Tina’s voice.
"What’s going to happen tonight?" Tina asked genuinely, yet her tone still mystifyingly hot.
"Um…what do you want to happen tonight, Tina?" Bette asked lowly, her anticipation building but preparing simultaneously for dismissal.
"I don’t know…I just…" Tina shook her head, her confliction driving her mad.
"Tina, we don’t have to go back to your hotel bar…we can go someplace totally different..neutral." Bette tried to hide her disappointment, commiting herself to giving the blonde all the space she needed. Afterall, Bette knew once things got going, neither woman would be able to stop themselves in the privacy of a hotel room…
"No. No. It’s fine." Tina resolved to fight her own demons and pushed for her hearts request.
"I mean, we can just have a drink, and I’ll be on my way…" Bette offered half heartedly.
"Don’t be silly. There’s no time restriction…I don’t have to be in bed early or anything…" Tina stopped short, sensing the brunette gazing hotly towards her.
Yeah, you don’t have to be…but do you want to be? The brunette could filter what came out of her mouth, but she was always at the mercy of her thoughts.
"Okay…we’ll just play it by ear then." Bette nodded semi-convincingly.
"Go with the flow…" Tina encouraged, relaxing a bit into her seat.
"Precisely…" Bette nodded once retisently, gently tapping her fingers on the steering wheel. She was about to combust with her desire for Tina, but she knew she had to remain calm, if not down right submissive.
The women pulled up to the Four Seasons, once again being greeted by a valet and this time, a doorman.
"Hello, Sawyer." Tina waved as the older gentleman opened the gold plated doors of the hotel.
"Ms. Kennard, how are you this evening…and who’s this beautuiful lady?" The old man chuckled as he patted Tina’s shoulder.
"This Bette Porter…my guest for tonight." Tina glanced quickly at Bette to catch her reaction. She wasn’t disappointed. Bette’s mouth opened quickly to suck in air.
Is she implying that I am staying here…with her? In her room…??!!! Bette stuck her slim hand out confidently to receive the doormans handshake though her mind tumbled wild with thoughts.
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Thanks for this story, I too am looking forward to more, sooner rather than later, please
I love reading your story…
Umm how could Bette possibly refuse that invitation? Can’t wait to see what happens next! PPS:)
can you think of a better build up than a dance?! everything fell into line… keep it up, fire! the flow of the story is so beautiful… thanks
Wow if Bette says No, know a lot of people that are in line to take Bettes place/ thanks
The problem with Bette and Tina getting together is that the story will most likely come to a natural conclusion. Therefore, I say…don’t do it. I mean, go upstairs with her, flirt, play mindgame and do a lot of kissing, but I am hoping this goes on for many more chapters!!!
Fire, I think you should write this story the way you always intended to write it and never mind what we say. Put Bette and Tina together when you feel it is right for your story. Either way I’m in love with it and will follow it regardless. Great update!!!!
I am so accustumed to your teasing ways by now that I will be expecting both of them to be teased beyond reason and still be put to bed, needs unmet, having redefined the concept of make out sessions:-)you are doing so well PPS
How could Bette say no to that heartfelt plea? Stay with her, Bette! It could turn out to be just a wholesome, harmless sleep over spiced up by more conversations, more teasing and good, old-fashioned making out. Yeah, stay with Tina, Bette! Things are moving forward, firestarter, and I’m really enjoying it. *THANK YOU!* PPS :>
Bette beta say ‘Yes’ to that!!!! Bring it on.
I am really enjoying this, they are getting closer and closer to the point of no return. They both seem willing so I say go for it. PPS
I can’t wait to read your next chapter ! This is so well writen, thx, you rock!
What a place to leave the chapter… PPS
oh lord… if bette won’t stay i sure as hell will…
yup, they will definitely explode! lol great chapter as always. Bette is so funny. Tina really has her second guessing everything huh? Yeah, I am with the rest of the readers Bette should stay. stay and play Bette!
Stay Bette!!!
I really love the build up of this story. SAY YES BETTE
you are killing me here.please pleaaaasseeeeeeeee post soon.
Bette and Tina are HOT! I love that Bette is trying so hard to be patient and give Tina time to ease into these new feelings. Tina asking Bette to stay is a big move and I hope she does even if they just end up cuddling this time.
firestarter..you tease…I’m sure you will continue to play with us. Bette will stay and they will have one hell of a makeout session and fall asleep in one anothers arm’s..which is perfectly fine with me. ; ) pps
this early morning needs to stop,lol.. love the slow dance even if they just “sleep” i will still be tickled. now if bette says no. i will be in awe of allowing tina time to process the whole evening and allow her to lead the way…. either way works for me. just keep going :)PPS
fire baby I love your story and your teasing and the draw out I love it all and I am fully engaged fully waking up every morning thrilled to know I will have the joy of another chapter from you to start my day. With days started like this I don’t need a work out or any such nonsense your story, well you really are so luscious, such a turn on, I can’t wait for your next and please don’t change a thing. Just be sure Bette stays with T, really who could resist? PPS :)
of course i knew Tina was in the Hotel!! but i never expected her to invite Bette back for a night cap..lol..now for those three little words:”stay with me”…fire i am so use to your teasing that i expect Bette will be the perfect Gentlewoman tonight…so ha ha…lmao!!! can’t wait for next post!!!!
What a chapter! “Stay with me,” three little words with so much meaning, almost refers to I love you. Hope that Bette stays with Tina, one look in those eyes of Tina’s and that will be all the encouragement Bette needs. PPS
Ooohhh hope Bette say yes!!!!!!!