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Fire and Ice Chapter 43
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Though the excitement of this possibilty thrilled Bette to no end, she still felt slightly mirred down in the complexity of Tina’s situation.
While it was true that Tina was more than responsive to her…passionately responsive, how would she be when things went beyond what she had ever experienced? Really, what would come of the blonde once things went further…to places she was completely unfamiliar with…would she balk? Would she change her mind? Bette’s heart began to pick up a new speed, one of panic. Her mind was beginning to sabotage her heart without mercy.
Suddenly, Tina popped out fully clothed from behind the red velvet curtain, her presence instantly refreshing the brunette. She looked satisfied as she tossed her purse over her shoulder, the black dress draped across her left arm.
"Are you ready?" The blonde smiled sweetly, her gaze still holding the heat of their connection.
Bette’s wandering mind immediately came to a hault as she saw all she needed to see in those hazel eyes. Her jubilation poured out into her words, once again engaging the blonde in a playful back and forth.
"What…you’re not going to model for me…?" Bette smiled, raising her eyebrows in surprise.
"Nope…" Tina began, her tone teasing the willing brunette. "You’re just going to have to wait until tonight…"
"Oh…I don’t know if I can wait that long…" Bette pretended to pout, enjoying their sexy banter.
"Well…you don’t have much of a choice…" The blonde winked as she exited the dressing quarters, leaving the partially stunned brunette standing speechless. Bette could not get over the range Tina’s personality had. However, the brunette wasn’t so sure she was ready to relinquish the reins on this thing yet. She preferred to be the master of ceremonies, so to speak.
Bette straightened her posture, resolve in her stride.
She caught up to Tina who stood at the register, her purchase already being wrapped up.
"Why don’t let me get this for you…" Bette insisted tenderly.
"Bette…no. Absolutely not. You’ve already done too much…" Tina shook her head in wonderment, the brunette’s generosity knowing no end when Tina was concerned.
"I could never do enough for you, T…" The brunette began, the tenderness in Bette’s eyes causing the blonde to lose all sense of all time and space. She didn’t even notice as Bette casually handed over her American Express to the waiting saleslady.
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Ready, are you kidding me. YES||||
I am not a tibetter but I am reading this story, as it is well written. I do think though that it is a little ridiculous to be already on Chapter 43.. with no “resolution” yet.There is a difference between teasing and endless stalling. One thing I do really like about this chapter is that finally your Tina is acting like a real person, and insisting that she take care of herself, buy her own clothes, and reciprocate with Bette, instead of being some passive doll, allowing someone she barely knows to just pour expensive gifts over her and she just smiling and nodding. I do not believe that Bette ever wanted to control anything and everything, but Tina was so passive, and everyone always wanted her to do everything, she was forced to manage some things. I never have felt that she was as controlling as other people think she is, and I never thought she wanted to be. I think that the most romantic and exciting and hottest relationships are those with both women equal and loving and giving to each other. Just my two cents.
wow, i appreciate the honesty caeleigh. i really do. however, i would like to point out that posting anything original on here is hard to do, as the material is limited. please consider this next time before deeming someone eles’ work ‘ridiculous’. Thanks for reading anyway and leaving your thoughts.
You misunderstood me, I didn’t say your work was ridiculous, in fact it is the opposite. I just thought it was a little over the top to be up to 43 chapters already, with no resolution. As far as being original goes, all of your story is original, built off the premise of the two original scenes.I apologize if you misunderstood ne.
firestarter,I just wanted to let you know that I rather enjoy the teasing in this story because it fits. The journey to the finish line, so to speak is sometimes more fun than the ‘end’. i just want to urge you to write your story in your own way. It’s a wonderfully written story. The fact that they have yet to close the deal and I am still very much interested in what happens next, is a testament to your skills!
I am SOOOOOOO ready!!!
I like that you’re taking your time with this. Too much NC17 and no real story gets kind of boring. So write as you will, this is a great story. You’re doing a terrific job.
As much as I look forward to your next chapter, I have loved every sentence of your teasing and flirting. Really a fun read, firestarter!
Will Bette and Tina be able to make it to the event???? The ladies are so into one another it is breathtaking. I can’t wait for the next chapter.
I could care less if it’s 43 chappies or 143…I’ll read whatever u write! This story’s fantastic! But ummm, please don’t let us wait until chapter 143 for these gals to get some alone time…
OMG we are all ready ya big tease lol…..Tina…pleeeeeaseee take your woman to bed!!!!!!!!!
that was good!
And the unspoken question posed to readers following this update: Are you ready for the next chapter? And the synonymous answer is: “I am ready. I’m so ready…”
Oh yes ! We are sooooooo ready !!! ;-)PPS !!!
Yeah and I’m so ready to so plz no more teasing!!!! PPS
Fire, I, too, am so ready. If you drag this out much more, you will have to scrape me off the floor. PPS
I’m with Tina. I am SO ready! Thanks for the post. I love the little power struggle. It’s cute.
I’m with tina! So ready… :)PPS
“sigh” yeah we are all ready, I can’t take this anymore, how can they?? it’s been a wonderful journey, and I can’t wait for what’s coming, you are going to be wonderful at it, just write what comes from the heart. thank you so much. Love
yeah i’m so ready too…ooh la la
OMG so am I Tina so am I.
girl…we are so ready too. BUT..I’m sure they don’t have time before they have to get ready for their evening…it is firestarter writing for us. ; )
wow the hot hot hotel where they’ll be alne right with plenty of time to be with each other with no interruptions in closed quarters… I. Cannot. Wait. Let them love. Thanks and PPS. Fire, bring on the hot hot heat :)
We are so ready. Please
And I’m so ready too! lol I think that dress is going to be needed for another night…PPS
Fire, I like the way that you have written this story. It may be 43 chapters however, the story takes place over a very short period of time. I have always thought that having them jump into bed almost as soon as they met was more unrealistic. I like the slow burn that you have created and the anticpation that you have built not only for B&T, but for the reading audience. I’m so excited about your next post!