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Fire and Ice Chapter 51
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"Ok, ok." Bette tried to hide her frustration as she peeled herself from the comforter, only realizing mid-way to the door that she was still completely naked.
"Um, T?" Bette called back to the bedroom, her hands smoothing her bare abdomen.
When she didn’t receive a response, she turned around to see the blonde staring a blazing hole straight through her.
"Why didn’t you tell me I was still naked? I could have given our un-invited guest a heart attack…." Bette teased as she made her way to the bathroom.
Tina laughed a little, slightly embarrassed by her unhibited gaze towards the brunette as her naked body glided across the room.
"Sorry…guess I was concentrating on other things…" Tina mused as the brunette re-emerged clad in a hotel robe.
Bette winked and flashed a blinding smile as she bent down to kiss the blonde who was now sitting naked on the bed.
"T…you’re still naked too you know…" Bette whispered before she raised herself up and began walking towards the door. "And I’d like you to stay that way…I’ll be right back."
Bette’s low whisper immediately sent a river through Tina’s core, her body already shaking with anticipation.
Bette opened the door to the hotel room, placing one hand on her hip as she held the door with her other.
A pensive young man stood before her, his hands clasped neatly before him.
"I’m so sorry to disturb you Ms….but, your baggage…" The man began, obviously taken aback by the beauty before him.
"Oh!" Bette exclaimed, returning reluctantly to the goings-ons of the real world. "I’m sorry…how long have you been standing out here?" Bette asked before she realized she might not want to know the answer.
The bellhop looked down at the floor, his cheeks shaded with red. "Uh, the better part of a half-hour I suppose…not long really…" He stammered, recalling the sounds he had heard coming from behind the door earlier. His face grew redder as he stood before the beautiful woman who had undoubtedly been the voice of those sounds.
Bette watched as the bellhop shook his head, lifting his composed gaze only to have his eyes practically bug out of his head.
"What’s the matter…." Bette began, confused by the bellhops unnatural expression.
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That poor bell hop, He will have so wild dreams tonight. Bette and Tina are so cute. Glad your lap top is in order again now for some more Post. thanks
Thank god, I was about to suggest we buy you a new computer just to get the next chapter of this story! These two are so sexy in love…it’s so sweet. That poor bellhop, I don’t think he’ll ever be the same…but $50.00 for 30 minutes of his time (and probably time well spent I might add), was a pretty good deal! Can’t wait for your next installment.
YAAAAAYY!!!!!! welcome back ! You were missed terribly…so how’s bout a few more posts to make sure the computer can handle pressure…and B&T in a hotel room…:D
WHOO-HOO, glad to see your back! I LOVED this chapter! So much fun to see Bette and Tina carefree and in love. What a lucky duck that bellboy was!
that was funny!
yay happy dance u r back…very sexy, very sultry, very hot, poor boy…pps
Yay you’re back! Glad to hear the computer woes are over…now you can leave the compromising positions to our girls ;) That was a lovely intermission, now a quick snack and back to the
Darn, now my computer is acting up, didn’t let me finish my comment – grrrr…..where was I? Oh yeah, back to the bedroom please…..well it is a suite, right? So, I s’pose any room will do…it is B&T so they can make any room hot! ;)
welcome back!!! i bet typing does not feel like playing twister anymore!!!;) i agree with aqueous, Bette and Tina can make an old bare wall look good! pps
Yay it’s back! they’re so cute together!!!! PPS
Wonderful work, as always ! Your story is such a powerful tribute to True Love, I’m totally hooked – and my hopelessly romantic heart is delighted ! *** Poor guy, I really felt sorry for him – and I was also deeply reacting like him ! *wink* *** I’m so happy to know your computer is ok now and I couldn’t thank you more for having bravely shared your endearing talent with us all along this pc problem. And so I also hope that you’ll get my old PM message ! *grin* I wish you all the best. Warmest regards from your faithful and delighted reader ! ^_^
Yay, so happy your your computer is well again and you don’t have to torture your poor body any longer. Thanks so much for posting. I felt so sorry for the young man, those two are so beautiful and hot together I can imagine what he was feeling. They are every man and woman’s wet dream come to life. As Rau said, so sexy and sultry, I’m sure he let his little imagination run completely wild. Poor baby. Thanks again for posting. PPS
loved it, loved it, looooved it! great chapter…PPS I beg you LOL
I am so happy that you are back and writing again WELCOME, I am sorry about your computer and I hope you didn’t lose anything on it. You did such a great job writing this one, what an image!! You know every time I read a new chapter of this story my heart fulls with hope, love, and apromise, your talent has a deeper effect that you think it does. Thank you Hun and you are absolutely a Firestarter. But it is a fire that you have to put down. Hugs
welcome back! glad ur computer is fixed. that poor bellhop,lol…awesome update! :)PPS
thanks for the update. that poor bellhop! lol. these two deserve to be nestled in their own world for a few days with no distractions. I wonder if you will continue with this story beyond this trip to new york. I vote yes if you’re asking…wink wink
How happy are we..VERY!! Maybe they will order some some fruit with room service. pps
welcome back, who cares about reality when dreamland is so fulfilling. LOL
Since your computer woes seem to be over does this mean we get more regular posts?? Now let’s get Tina some food and then how about Bette for desert! PPS:)
that poor bell hop… but i bet he goes and tell all the others… but first stopping at the nearest men’s room… (Cough cough)… hmmmmmm i also bet the room service person will also get a ear and eye full… love this story… glad your back and computer problems fixed… PPS