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First (Kiss) – Chapter 3
Tina was fascinated by the transformation. Bette had been an idol and unreal. But now she was clearly a woman. Tina smiled a tiny smile, realizing she could make this real woman glow again.
Tina placed two soft quick kisses on Bette’s mouth and lingered on the third. She grew lightheaded on the warm, spicy scent of Bette’s perfume, the silkiness of a woman’s skin so close to her own. She breathed deep, and on the exhale, the tip of her tongue brushed against Bette’s top lip.
Bette had been still until now, trying to give Tina room to explore, but the fluttering touch of Tina’s tongue excited her to action. She had to taste more, immediately.
Bette moved her right hand to Tina’s waist, drawing her closer. She took control, sliding her tongue against Tina’s, reveling in the taste, pressing her mouth, her body, her self, hard against Tina, the fire of desire igniting to a blaze as the heat of their bodies mingled, thighs sliding against each other like it had always been this way.
Tina had lost any semblance of control. Her arms went around Bette’s neck, a hand burying itself in Bette’s silky hair, keeping the brunette’s gorgeous, delicious mouth pressed to hers.
Bette stroked the roof of Tina’s mouth with her tongue, and the smooth persistent rhythm that resonated throughout Tina’s body. She was wet already, but now she was groaning for Bette, whispering “Fuck me.” against her mouth.
Bette’s blood surged, pounding in her ears. She lost her balance. She tilted, and found herself sitting on the edge of the desk for support. She pulled Tina over to stand in front of her, never breaking contact, kissing Tina’s mouth, chin, neck, running her hands over Tina’s hips, waist, ribcage. Tina arched into Bette’s touch, pressing a hard nipple into her palm, moaning with pleasure at the contact.
Bette moved her fingers to the top button of Tina’s shirt. She looked up at Tina for approval, and saw the very beginning of nod.
Time was suspended. The only sound was their quick, heavy breathing.
Until a crash ripped through the veil of their idyll, resonating through the large gallery space, an echo like a mocking laugh.
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(61 votes, average: 3.95 out of 5)
It’s so well written ! Please post as soon as you can…
That was great! Can’t wait to see what’s next!
Love this…please continue
Wow, I loved the ending of this chapter. I just read all three chapters, and now I want more. And I agree with everyone that said you’re writing is awesome. loving your style.
Wow! That was some first kiss! More please.
WOW! Just finished reading your (Kiss) chapters and I’m looking forward to your (Date) and (Love) ones!! Awesome beginning… so often written about yet you made it brand new with feeling!! PPS
that earing will be the death of them,lol..very well written.. :)
WOW!!!! That was Great!!!! I so love the way you write. Now bring on the next chapter please!!!! Can not wait until B&T meet again. Thanks PPS
I am so looking forward to the next chapters. What a wonderful job.
So very well written, as always. Tina’s “fuck me” was unexpected but oh so hot. Can’t wait to see what happens next.
wat a cliffhanger, I can barely wait like a kid wtg for Santa. PLZ dont make us wait 2 long.
I just read all 3 chapters and I have to say that you have hooked me!your descriptions are so convincing……I think I held my breath for this whole chapter…..I love it!
Love it! Can’t wait for the date! That was a great kiss… ahhhh James, I love you, but never ever interrupt Tibette again!
THIS is how it really was. The scene in the show was just a synopsis of this real Rey thing. I was totally transported. This is how it had to be.
Thank you, lady. Great, great job!
That was so beautifully written. So sweet and gentle. That was awasome thanks
Can’t wait for more! PPS
I really need to get a pair of Tina’s earrings. She seems to have all kinds of luck with that one pair.
Brilliant chapter rey. Tina’s earring is turning out to be quite the matchmaker. I guess Bette should return it to her immediately, right? PS.
not love but that danged ‘earring’ will bring u back to me, T…time and time again…Lol…nice chapter, post soon.
rey..I sure hope you get to post more. your words are as beautiful as the women you are writing about. thank you.
Ah, yes. Exquisite stuff, rey. Do post soon. thanks
“The first instant Tina knew Bette’s mouth, she missed it.” Awesome writing. I can’t wait for the Date and Love phases!
Amazing, brilliant, phenomenal!!! I look forward to all phases of Bette and Tina that you bring us.