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First, Last, & Forever? (Version 2.0 – Chapter 6)
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“Go on, Bette…” He encouraged with a slight nod.
“Well, I think tonight might be the night, and I’m nervous.” Bette clasped her palms together as she often does when trying to make a point. “No, I’m fucking terrified.”
“What are you afraid of, Bette?” Foxworthy always asked the obvious, and never subtly.
Bette paused again, searching for the reasons for her fear, and the right words to express them.
“I don’t know. It’s a lot of things, I guess. I mean, my god, do you remember what I told you about the last time Tina and I made love? It was fucking amazing…I was so overwhelmed from that I ended up here on your couch an hour later.” Bette rolled her eyes.
“So the last time you made love, it was amazing. You know that’s a good thing, don’t you, Bette?” Foxworthy raised his eyebrows as he continued to watch Bette, awaiting a response.
“Of course I know it’s a good thing. But what if we make love tonight and it pales by comparison. What if nothing ever comes close again to that one day.” Bette let out a heavy sigh. She hated telling Foxworthy her deepest insecurities, yet knew that she had to do it if she was going to continue growing into the person that Tina needed and deserved. “Tina has been through so much with the baby and the c-section, what if I don’t know how to take care of her anymore? Or if she just doesn’t want me?”
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Tina checked on dinner again. It would be ready in just about an hour, at eight o’clock, when Bette was due home. Tina wandered slowly towards the bathroom to shower and get ready for her wife. She turned on the water and let it run while she undressed. Tina absent-mindedly stepped into the shower, relaxing more and more as the hot water pounded over her entire body.
She thought about what she wanted to wear for Bette, what would make her unable to keep her hands off of her. Her mind strayed, trying to remember what Bette was wearing today. Tina felt herself starting to feel turned on just thinking about what Bette was wearing. “Jesus, Tina, get a grip.” She mused to herself. The hot water continued to pelt Tina’s skin as she thought of her mocha skinned lover, and she conjured an image of her wearing her grey pinstriped suit, with one of her hot white power shirts underneath. Tina loved it when Bette wore those white shirts with the cufflinks, and Bette knew it.
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That was an enlightening look into Bette’s head. However, I’m looking forward to tomorrows installment.
talking is good…this dan is not that bad LOL go home, bette ;)
Steph: this was a truly excellent chapter. Sensitively written and very, very real. Longterm relationships have sexual ebbs and flows for a myriad of reasons. What matters most is communication. Thanks for the way you handled this.
Steph, Great Chapter. Bette needs to let Tina know about her fears. Same goes for Tina. Thanks PPS
still keeping up with the posts. thanks.
great update…. tina is just as nervous as bette they need to talk first…
Awesome chapter. I love the analytical side of things, and I agree that communication is exactly what is needed. There will always be moments when one partner needs to be reassured, while the other may not. At moments they may both need that. I learned the hard way, that communication is essential to keeping things fresh, even, secure, and solid. I hope that Bette and Tina can find that same key so it will divert any potential issues in the future. Thanks Steph!
go home bette…go home…
I WANT MY FOUR COMPLETE PAGES, AND I WANT THEM NOW! …Okay, I know I’m getting irrational. I’m next on Foxworthless’ couch. Thanks!
How come your Foxworthlessness makes sense? How come your Bette and Tina are communicating and working together toward greater understanding in their relationship? The flat place on my forehead was almost back to normal. The paradox of better TLW writing on the fanfic site makes me butt my head against a wall. I had almost forgotten…
foxworthy was good but i wonder why they rarely had sex in ‘that’ 3 years.
Foxworthy finally made some sense. Bette needs to talk to Tina let her know that if anything feels uncomfortable to let her know so she can change how she is doing things. Communication is the key. Now let her stop second guessing herself and go home and take care of her woman, give her everything that is in her heart.
Wow–Bette is very caught up in her own insecurities! At least Foxworthy was able to help her look at things from a new perspective. She needs to let it go and keep the communication lines open between herself and Tina, which was indeed their problem back when we first met them. And they will have a sweet reunion with the love they still have for one another!
Makes sense. I figured that was what bothered Bette. She’s still scared Tina will leave her. So, let’s get Bette home safely and let the night begin!!! PPS
Just wanted to say I am so glad you are reposting this story. Looking forward to more.
Bette had a good talk with Foxworthy. Now she needs to talk to Tina. Let the lovin begin!
Good chapter and I like this dan foxworthy. Now let she go home and make love to Tina. Please post more, thanks!
Okay maybe Foxworthy wasn’t an ass this time. Bette and Tina are both stressing unnecessarily. I truly think they should be talking to each other. Is Bette home yet?