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First, Last, & Forever? (Version 2.0 – Chapter 7)
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Tina finished dressing, and looked at herself in the mirror. ‘Not [i]too[/i] bad,’ she thought. She stopped as she reached the hallway, feeling like she had forgotten something. Her right hand had unconsciously moved to her left ring finger, rubbing over the spot where she had worn her commitment ring for all those years.
When she finally told Bette she wanted to come home three months ago, neither she nor Bette brought up the rings. Even though they were back together, Tina knew they had a long road ahead, and hadn’t been ready to wear the ring again. She assumed Bette felt the same, or that she was waiting for Tina to decide when the time was right to put hers back on, since Tina had been the first to take hers off. As much as Tina tried, she couldn’t remember when Bette stopped wearing her ring. At the time, she hadn’t cared.
Tina had taken hers off on that awful night almost a year ago. Well, ten months. She had seen Bette touch Candace’s hand during the Provocations opening, and knew everything she needed to know in that instant. The things that happened between Bette and Tina that night were awful. Tina shuddered at the thought, yet couldn’t stop the memory from playing in her head.
After they got home, Tina had confronted Bette. When Bette tried to hug her, Tina had shoved her away. She had shoved her hard, almost knocking Bette to the ground. Bette had wrestled Tina to the bed, pleading for her to listen, telling her she loved her. Tina couldn’t deal. Tina still didn’t know how to describe what happened. It was more than a fuck, but they certainly didn’t make love that night. Bette had retreated to the bathroom like a wounded animal. Tina knew she didn’t have the courage or strength to allow Bette to leave her. So she left Bette instead. A preemptory strike, so to speak. Tina was immensely ashamed of her violent acts towards Bette that night. The only thing she had ever done in her life that made her more ashamed was leaving Bette.
Tina forced herself back into the present and away from the memories of that night. Still rubbing her finger, and fully feeling the ring’s absence, Tina decided it was time. She and Bette had come a long way together, and she knew that she could never leave Bette again.
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this brought tears to my eyes
Hey thanks for the update, and Tina should not be worried, after all some women love the taste of breast milk, I know I do, it tastes kinda like cantaloupe juice. And I just got a quick question here, why is it that so many people look at the night after provocations as rape. Has no one been in a relationship where you fought and fought so badly that connecting in that raw animalistic way was the only way you thought you could convince some one that you love them. And Tina was not a victim as some believe she is, didn’t she take Bette’s hand and put it between her legs, she enjoyed it, and even though she said no she eventually said yes, so it wasn’t rape either. And being in a relationship at times there are occasions that being ‘raped’ does take place. just my thoughts here. no offense to others.
Hope there is another portion out tonight? Too close to the edge on this one.
Not nice to leave us like that my friend. That was great and love it. Please post more, thanks!
lets bring them 2 gether now…i miss them even in the same room…
Aww, man. While I totally get from a storyline perspective why they need to think back on the seperation.. I totally was hoping for a happy chapter because I had a bad day. Guess that one must be coming up somewhere. PPS.
Oh no you didn’t stop there, mean
I love this story n since I couldn’t wait for ur daily posts I went to ur page to read the whole story. It is not there so I was wondering whether it was me making a mistake or u have removed this story. PPS:)
awww, Steph, you little tease! Not that I consider myself one of the horndogs, but some lovin’ wouldn’t be a bad thing. B&T aren’t the only ones you’re torturing! Loved this chapter though. Such sweet emotion when Tina found the rings. Always look forward to your posts, NC-17 or not.
There were a few threads where that scene was discussed, and most people saw it as rough break-up sex. I know it was one of the most intense scenes, so full of every possible emotion. I think they both have to understand that everything that has happened to date has brought them to this place, and our teasing author will eventually allow us to see the sweet reunion that is coming. They both are so vulnerable, but they each know what the other wants, but more importantly needs! Ah. that e-mail…
I want mooooooore!
Everything about B&T after “Let’s Do It” in S1 was a lie. S2 was a bigger lie, and S3 was the biggest lie of all. Bette and Tina loved each other. Here is that love. Thank you.
*trying to catch breath, phew* Sorry, very sorry I missed my post on the last chapter… I did read but didn’t have a chance to comment! *looks down sheepishly*Anyway, let me just say that you are indeed a big tease… I was starting to get all excited and happy about their night when BAM, I see the TBC. I mean don’t get me wrong, sometimes it’s a good thing because it also means the story continues but… do you really have to stop like that and make our little hearts stop too? =)Post soon pretty please!
They really are moving in the right direction. It was so tender to see Tina realize that Bette had been wearing her ring around her neck and now Tina wears Bette’s around hers. I appreciate you developing thier emotions and thier characters but we are overdue for an NC-17 and Id appreciate it soon.
continuing to be beautifully written. thanks.
I’m with you superdaddy, sometimes the words get in the way, sometimes the indoctrination and we react because we’ve been conditioned to react that way, eventually Tina and Bette cut thru the words and got down to basics…so I never saw that as a rape, they were both desperate to reconnect…the bloody sex therapy didn’t work did it???Very sad yet poignantly sweet scenario here.Not to be a ‘horndog’ as you put it but it is about time for another sweeter reconnection in this couple’s life methinks.
You could change,the fact that you are a tease. Love this as much now as when you first wrote it.
That was an emotional chapter Steph. And you are such a tease! ;-)
Steph, that was so wonderfully writen. Thank you But still you are very good at being a Tease. PPVS