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First Year- Chapter 16
She smiled and leaned into my hand that was playing in her hair, “I can’t believe I am here with you. You might need to pinch me.”
I pulled her to the bed and teased, “I’d like to more than just pinch you.”
I began to unbutton the white tuxedo blouse that covered her slender frame. She was already thin but when I took off her blouse, I was surprised at how much more her ribs showed, “My God Dylan, are you not eating? You look like you’ve lost some weight.”
She looked at her body and responded, “Sometimes I am so busy, I forget. Then I get home there is nothing in the refrigerator, so I grab whatever is in the cupboards, that might be a protein bar.”
I ran my fingers over her chest and abdomen, “Sweetheart, let me pay to have someone maintain some food for you. You know, someone to shop and cook for you. Please let me do that.”
“Is it that bad?”
“How much weight have you lost?”
“I don’t know. I haven’t weighed myself.”
She took my hand that was examining her body and kissed it. “Honey, I will be fine. I promise you I’ll do better with eating. You don’t have to pay for a cook. I’ll do better. You know, I guess I’m just used to eating with you and since you are not there, it hasn’t been a priority.”
I could appreciate what she meant. So much my eating over the past couple of months was socially with Carmen, or with other friends. I asked, “So you haven’t met anyone to hang out with, you know, to go to dinner or get something to eat.”
“Yes, I’ve become friends with a couple of the residents and nurses. It’s one of the nurse’s family that owns this villa. They own a couple of others here too. They bought in early before the property values soared. They rent them out and the resort manages them. Karen says this is one of the smaller of the three they owned. I was thrilled when she offered it to us.”
“Wow, what does it cost? I’ll split it with you.”
“Don’t worry. The cost is pretty minimal. Just some resort fees. I want to treat you to this. “
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(31 votes, average: 3.52 out of 5)
Warm indeed…just chalk me right on up to smokin’! (although just for the record the heat problem lies elsewhere — I know you will understand that Squirl) Everything with the chapter was traveling so smoothly until the ending…geez. Talk about putting out the fire. Somehow I knew that Dylan was up to something in Cleveland. Helena sounds devasted so it must have been rather tramatic. I know you know what I’m gonna say next and I can’t resist — it’s a good thing that Bette is going to be her new best friend!!!! (with benefits please!). Hope the return to work goes well. Can’t wait for more updates but I know we have all been spoiled!
Now that’s what I’m talking about! Except that last bit. I mean, geez, the vacation just got started. Couldn’t we have gotten just a little more fucking, eating, drinking, swimming, sleeping, fucking before BETRAYAL? Well, I am curious about what Skinny got up to that was so awful. I’m sure living in Cleveland drove Dylan to some kind of desperation.
And how was the first day back at work? Not too tired, I hope.
S this chapter was sexy but sad cause Helena was feeling guilty over being with Carmen and then at the end, when Dylan did something to her that she could not forget. Don’t think cheating was the thing being she too had done it, so it had to be something else and worse not to forgive her. I enjoyed this especially feeling Helena’s pain!
Dam it Squirl that was just plain mean. I am so worked up I lost this comment twice. Here is poor Helena reinvesting herself into a relationship that she thought went down hill and that that that well that Dylan again did, well what the hell did she do now, Please come back and tell us SOOOOOOOOOONNNN. Thank you, Md aka Oma
Hey Squirl,I’m convinced that this is a BeLena story & I know that you don’t want to disappoint… PPS!
Wow…look at what I’ve been missin’! Well, I thought Helena’s lust induced personal mental promise to refrain from straying was a “famous last word”, little did I know that Dylan has had her own clandestine activities. Hmmm…what is it? Give up the goods, Squirl! What is it?! We hope you are doing well and nicely settling back into work! PPS
Oh the drama! Anxiously waiting to see what’s next. Good one chica, keep ’em coming.
Ok So Slim D has been upto something as well…Gosh where does the drama end with these 2? So where does this leave the interns? I mean its the beginning of the vacation so they havent really even had a chance to reaccquaint with one another as of yet.PPVS
Very HOT chapter! Now, what did Dylan do that was so terrible? Dying to know.
I’m pretty sure Helena will end up with Bette. There were hints just from the start. So I’m waiting to see how it will happen.