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First Year- Chapter 26
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Chapter 26
Bette looked at me perplexed at my ‘I have to go’ outburst and asked, “What’s wrong?”
I explained, “I’m sorry I have an appointment to see a condo at noon. I thought we’d be done already. I need to get home so I can shower and change to make my appointment.”
“I’m sorry to keep you. I guess I should have asked what time you needed to be done.”
“Please, no. I should have kept track. Trust me. It’s really not a big deal. I was having such a good time, I forgot about my plans for the day.”
“We can take a quick run back to your place and you can get yourself ready. I’m sure they will understand if you call to say you will be late.”
“You are right. It’s really not a big deal. I’m sure I can push back until later today.”
She pulled her long sleeve running shirt over her sports bra and immediately took away my motning eye candy. I feigned disappointment that we had to leave and quickly pulled myself together to run back to my apartment. I should have known better than to give Bette a reason to run. I had just barely recovered from our run and hike earlier. Now we were returning to my place at a quicker pace because she felt some remorse at keeping me out so long. As it would have it, our route took us right by the condo building I was coming back to. As we were about to run by it, I pulled on her arm and said breathlessly, “Hey, this is where I’m supposed to be. I can just let them know I’ll need to push back my time. Is it okay if we stop for a minute?”
She nodded, followed me through the door and began to walk around the lobby while I went to the sales office. There was an attractive petite blond in the office on the phone when I entered. The call was apparently from an anxious seller who seemed to be giving her an earful. She waved me in, smiled politely and directed me to sit down. Although the chairs looked inviting, I dared not sit down for fear I might not be able to get back up. She ended her call and exhaled deeply. “Good morning, welcome to the Sierra Towers. How can I help you?"
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S, am I the first to post :-) Just got our of work and come to find your new chapter up, lucky I am. Now I really enjoyed how both women had a gret time and how Bettte ended up looking at the new condo that would most likely be Helena’s and even maybe Bette one day,,,,only time and love will tell for these women huh S? I like this Janet a very good salewoman and knows all the tricks in the book IMO. I too would like to know what Bette is thinking when she hides back within herself…..loved it S!
This story is just amazing. The narrative, the dialogue….all top drawer. Maybe Belena not right away but soon?
Well, Bette is rather more noble than most going into dermatology. She was right about the umbrella, for sure. I once sat outside in shorts to read my Western Civ chapter. Took about an hour and a half. Next morning, while every thing else was fine, my shins and the top of my feet were violet (not a color I’ve ever seen in human skin before or since). When I got out of bed to get ready for French class I screamed and fell back on the bed. Felt like daggers being thrust into my lower legs. Needless to say I do NOT sunbathe. You could not pay me to get on a tanning bed. Good news is people are genuinely surprised to hear my age. Is it going to be the Peabody Penthouse? It WOULD be a good investment. Seems Bette and Helena are getting very close. Send more soon.
OH GOODY, my day is complete now, thank heavens you posted Squirl it just wasn’t Saturday without you. So Ms Bette is hesitating on the marring Rick gig, well ain’t that a beautiful thing. I think that Hels has to meet a few more people in her rotations though. Looking forwarad to the next round. Hope all is well with you. Thank you, Md aka Oma
This is my favorite chapter so far. Excellent writing.
hello my passionate friend… all the way from the beach to say you are completely and utterly amazing… your words have accompanied me on this journey and I cannot think of a more beautiful and passionate story by a more beautiful and passionate soul to be with… love and hugs, always and forever, JC
Indeed that was a good day with excellent company…Bette is revealing more…Janet is relentless and the place sounds beautiful…with bamboo floors, beck and call five star service, and multiple shower heads to boot! Verrrry nice feel! PPS
Hola Squirl…why didn’t H just ask her…”a penny for your thought”? As usual loved the update…their dialogue was really good and genuine… Tres bien!!!
ahh I love this story annd your a kick ass writer :)
I think Hels dont really know her own mind…one minute its all Dylan then Carmen and both at the same time than came along Lara…Tina and Bette have always been a maybe…Jeez Helena slow your roll. I think that she needs to focus on her self more and not unavailable women. And its true for all she knows Bette could be into her man and their future.She needs to stop dreaming, having fantasies and come back to the real world where she needs to be.PPVS. I want to see whether Helena can maintain an actual friendship while theyre in a relationship. I do hold out for her and Bette. But not like this, for things to become simplier and both women free from entanglements. Gr8 work
Great post, Squirl. I wish Bette would be a little more forthcoming with Helena… I guess Helena won’t be asking more pointed questions – she already feels as though she is walking on eggshells around Bette and is fearful of losing her friendship. The salesperson was hysterical – I could so see that happening. I hope Helena gets the money together – maybe from her upcoming trust dispersement. I agree that the Peabody Penthouse has a nice ring to it. Oh, and since Bette already saw the place, she’ll know exactly where to go once things start to heat up…boy, do I hope its soon, too. :)
Helena needs to get attached to the condoa nd the company (“Bette” of course). There has to eb something deeper and Bette and Helena having this growing friendship that if we’re lucky enough will blossom into something more. Didn’t that condo have 2 master suites? I can see Bette and Rick having some major fallout and Bette needing a place to stay for a while… We all know what can happen duirng the late night hours when… I’ll stop now, but pps!
I’ve been lurking here 4ever but this is only my second time commenting. I’m loving the story and I wait with bated breath for each post. It seems Helena is falling for Bette. I’m hoping this is where she can do some learning and through Bette’s non-interest in her see the effect she has had on Carmen. I truly think she loves Carmen but at the moment is far too ill-equipped emotionally to admit it. After her breakup with Dylan, she needs to take time for herself and just be by herself. Definitely, she needs to have some dalliances to appease her libido, just NONE with her co-workers. But after that she needs to re-evaluate things and hopefully she comes to the realization that she is indeed in love with Carmen.
I’ve been lurking here 4ever but this is only my second time commenting. I’m loving the story and I wait with bated breath for each post. It seems Helena is falling for Bette. I’m hoping this is where she can do some learning and through Bette’s non-interest in her see the effect she has had on Carmen. I truly think she loves Carmen but at the moment is far too ill-equipped emotionally to admit it. After her breakup with Dylan, she needs to take time for herself and just be by herself. Definitely, she needs to have some dalliances to appease her libido, just NONE with her co-workers. But after that she needs to re-evaluate things and hopefully she comes to the realization that she is indeed in love with Carmen.