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First Year- Chapter 28
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I felt bad for her but I enjoyed every part of her visit and wanted to at least be grateful. “Well, if it’s any consolation. I really loved my cupcake, every bit of it. And I loved you being here, every bit of that.”
She stayed across the room and stared at me. I felt such a strong connection to her and probably should have gotten up, kissed her and forced the issue but I didn’t. I sat on my call bed and stared back. After a little bit, she looked away and nervously said, “I’d better go. I need to go home and make it up to Rick. He is so pissed at me right now.”
I honestly didn’t care about Rick and how he felt but I nodded my agreement and said softly. “Yea, you should do that.”
We stared at each other again. I knew she felt what I was feeling. But there was the issue of the angry Rick standing between us. Before she left, she stood at the open door and informed me. “If you want any more, I left the rest at the nurse’s station. But they won’t have the little strawberry numbers on them. Those were just for you. For your 25th.” She stepped again to leave then stopped and turned back, “I really regret we’ll miss your party but I’m sure you’ll have a good time.”
I stood up and stepped towards to door. I put a hand on her hand that remained on the door and answered back, “Not as good as we could if you were there.”
She looked at my hand on hers and pulled away. She spoke very softly as she turned to leave, “I have to go. Goodnight.”
My mind was sent in to a tailspin at that moment. But it wouldn’t be the last time it did with her. That time spent and the connection we had was so special and so intense. From that moment on, all I could think about in my alone time, was Bette Porter. She almost became a mini-obsession. The signs of trouble and rocky road ahead, were all there but I threw caution out the window and continued forward in my pursuit to have her. I wanted her badly and that was all I thought about. All logical thought were lost at that moment. All I thought about was having her.
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I agree with Eastmorn! More please! Oh one more thing can you get Rick transfered or something, please. PPS!
S sorry I am commenting this late, but I read it early in the morning before I went to work. And now I have been answering the questions over at the FanFicReaders…I see that Helena was looking forward to her birthday and made sure that all would be clean if Dana would make it to her party. But for her she wanted Bette and it seems that Bette was falling for Helena but IMO scared. But does Helena want Bette cause she is hard to get or cause she has fallen for Bette Porter. I do hope cause she has fallen for her and not just want her and then throw her away like many of the women that have passed thru her life. Great chapter S!
I’ve been waiting for another post of this story! Thank you once again for a great chapter. Damn Rick for interrupting my girls, wtf mate! Love this story, look forward the upcoming chapters.
How could you tell the Belena fans not to drool and then dangle a bone wrapped in a promise of more to come like that? lol! For shame! lol! Great update! Oui vey and now there’s Papi. By any chance, will Shane be getting a little competition in her pursuit of Carmen? PPS
Bad phone lol – You are whats commonly known as a tease lol – cant wait to read more x
Simply awesome, need I say more…okay well more please!!!!
Helena might be setting herself up for a fall. Is Bette really into her or is she just getting caught up in the attention and kindness Helena is giving her. Rick seems to be kinda anal and maybe Bette is findig solace in Helena. IMO Helena needs to not go there with Bette because she’s in a relationship. I’m getting the impression that Helena has no respect for relationships and other peoples space. She seems to think she’s entitled to what ever she wants and not thinking about others involved.
Hey Squirl, So sorry Ive missed out on a few chapters but Im back now…How sweet of Bette with those cupcakes, I cant wait for more of Bette. I think that her fella overreacted you know what I cant even remember his name? LOL. As for Helena I knew she would pursue Bette I mean who wouldnt but will Bette fall for her charms it seems she already is though… Great work Squirl can’t wait for more PPVS
Hello My Passionate Friend… I have so missed commenting on your story… I completely love the subtleties that you bring out within each and everyone scene you illustrate with your masterful palliate of words… they are never wasted they only bring out the rawness of the emotions… it seems that our Miss Bette Porter might be finding herself playing tug a war with her feelings coming from a family environment like she did she never really had a lot of female companionships that would allow her to properly understand that nuances of how ‘their’ minds worked… she was raised by a very hard and driven ‘father’ and a lot of those characteristics tend to rub off but her she is in an environment that ‘he’ has no control over and in a way she has found her freedom at last… she still has the morals to understand her ‘choices’ but now she in in a place where it is hers to choose… her tenderness towards Helena is so very cute and so very fitting of her character… baking cakes and such is something she would have missed out on in her childhood so its like she is developing those childhood bonds within the context of her adult relationships… up to and unto the possibilities of ‘falling’ in love with her ‘best’ friend… I cannot wait to see just how far you take us… and I stand by my 60-80 plus chapter thingie… oh and I have a story to tell you about my vacation… its rather surreal in the sense that you were there with me on paper if not in flesh lol… love and hugs my passionate friend, your loyal subject and recipient of the honors of Squirlology PhD :D… JC (Latin Nephew to those Salsa Angels, Cuzzie to the ever inspiring Eunichick, Cuzzie to the ever amazing Patty, Proud Cuzzie to my Muse TCuz and personal fanner to the ever incredible Deean)
Well, well, well…Squirl you tease you! Damn that cell phone for ringing…ugh. Bette and Helena were so close. bette’s going to be so suprised when she finds out that Helena did gget that great condo. Do I see Helena making Bette a special dinner in her new digs to say thank you for the cupcakes and sorry that it got Bette in trouble with Rick? Yes, yes the Belena fans are salivating, but it’s all your fault you know (LOL). PPS!
Helena and Bette are driving me nuts. That was so sweet of Bette. And it looks like she ahs fallen for Ms. Peabody already.
Great story and great writing. If Bette is not with Tina, then she just HAS to be with Helena.
Wow, well worth the extra days wait, I just hate it when my favorite authors have a real life and can’t post for me, LOL. Can someone send Dr. Porter a memo saying: Tell Rick to clean the kitchen up and Bette will be home latter, see then she could have stayed and “chatted” for a while longer. Yea, Yea, Hels is going to have to make up for that condo story because Bette felt bad for her, geeze how big of a hat do you think it will take to collect millions of $$? Loved the spin off of the basketball sceen, to funny. What’d ya say in those A/N’s, you’ll be back early in the week? Yippie. Oh and the restaurant comment came right out of the chapter, sorry, sometimes I don’t compleat a whole thought. One more thing, the song mentioned an the begining of your A/N’s, oh never mind. Thank you, Md aka Oma
Great chapter. I can’t wait for them to get together. At least, I hope they do.
Ahem! Well. We didn’t get Bette’s point of view, but it sounds like she may have a few things of her own to think about. So I finally snagged a scanning job! Echos AND vascular. Have to move to Dayton, which makes me sad for my mother’s sake, but c’est la vie. Paychecks, here I come!
I missed this story soooooo much. GOD I love this Belena, hope they will be together. bye Rick,thank you for keeping company to Bette for Helena hehehe. PPVS
I cannot control myself… ::DROOL:: ::DROOL:: ::DROOL:: Ahhhhhh… It was my precious Belena… if only for a moment; and then that blasted phone had to ring. ::CURSES:: Bestill my heart. The marvelous kiss that almost was. From now on Squirl all Belena moments must include no pagers, no cell phones, locked doors, and no overhead pages. Geezzz… talk about the ultimate tease. I was virtually on the edge of my seat waiting for their precious lips to meet. Bette certainly became rattled when she found out she had disappointed Rick. I wonder if Helena suspects what I do about the old Rickster??? I loved that Helena hid her penthouse purchase from Bette – I hope that means you intend to tantalize us with a personal housewarming party for two (I’m starting the begging process now). The cupcakes were perfect – particularly given that they were from Bette’s personal kitchen. I wonder what next month’s rotations will bring? Dare I plead for more Belena???