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Flames of Passion Chapter 55
A thought occurred to Tina, turning her attention to Alice, (perplexingly grinning) Alice how in the ***** did you see Sarahs body, what did you walk in on her in the shower or something? the mere mention of a shower had Tina thinking back to her and Bettes earlier escapade, and turning a light shade of red, she looked suggestively at Bette.
Bette saw the look and run her hand up and down Tinas thigh, whispering for her ears only, Later baby!
Tina just nodded, grabbing Bettes wandering hand and cast her attention back to Alice.
Alice couldnt help herself; she proceeded to inform the captive audience about Sarahs little show and tell for the neighbors earlier that day and her subsequent endeavor to go after Shane!
Upon completion of the story the whole table just looked at Alice and giggled amusedly.
Tina: (in fits of laughter) Wait until I see that sister of mine!
Bette: (smiling profusely) MmmmHmmmm. me too! She is never going to live this down Alice, you know that right!
Alice: Ah. ha, I certainly do!
Tina: (thinking) Seriously though, I hope she and Shane work things out! They are good togethergood for each other!!
Alice: Yeah I thought that too!..Anyway you guys, I need to discuss something with you! I know you only announced your engagement last night
Bette and Tina looked happily, but somewhat wearily at each other. Bette: Yeah Al, and
Alice continued, looking hesitantly over at Dana, (blurting out) and.well Dana and I we have organized your hens night, bachelorette party whatever the ***** its called!!!
Bette: (surprised) What..Alice we havent even set a date yet! Let alone done any preparations! How could you ***** organize that in just one day?
Alice: (smirking at Dana) Well Dana and I got talking and we came up with some really fun, *****, cool ideasAnyway guys next Saturday ok! Call it whatever you want, but we are taking you two out on the town. Ill call you with the details when they are confirmed. This is not a request you know!
Bette and Tina looked a little hesitantly at each other. Knowing Alice as they did they had no idea what to expect the following Saturday night, but by the adamant look on Alices face, their friend was not going to take no for an answer either
Bette nodded her head gently, staring intently at Tina, wanting a sign or some form of response. Tina leaned in and whispered softly in Bettes ear, Yeah, why notlets do it baby! Could be fun shrugging her shoulders.
Bette: (intriguingly) Ok Al, next Saturday!
Alice was beaming with pride, Great ok! quietly whispering for no one to hear, This is going to be so great!! so great! a huge grin enveloping her face as her mind drifted off to her plans.
Tbc..
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Ok Mates – even though I am not finished with all of your chapters on this story – I cannot keep quiet any more (big smile on my face)….this story is on fire baby. You do have a way with words I must say. I belive we all need a shower. Great update and I will try to finished your wonderfull story wery shortly. Post soon
Babe THANK YOU I NEED THAT after ep 5. I love Alice totally love her. Sarah and Shane have to fix this too babe!! They are hot together. Please post soon and if you need something good to watch after the next one babe let me know ok.
Ok Mates…just finished all your chapters on this story – I know I have already commentet ones….but help me god this is HOT story. Every time I read a new chapter my smile was getting bigger and bigger. I belive we all had several showers to cleen enough to read another update from you. God this is a wonderfull and very emotional story. Can´t wait for more. Post soon.
These shower scenes are killing. First thing in the morning. Wow. What a way to wake up. Keeping going!
Hello! WoW this is really nice right now I’m not sleep yet I just check if anybody write the story and you did thank you for this good awesome story WOW it’s really Hot good job Mates keep up the good story we also love the gang and we love B&T have a good EASTER.
Let us have some more!!!! Soon hopefully…
WOW, another excellent chapter, wonder what Alice has in store for the girls,please post soon.
I love a good bachelorette party! Great chapter today. We sure do need some happy Bette and Tina moments to make us last through this season, don’t we? I know you won’t let us down… one way or another. I still can’t help but blush when I read scenes like yours up there, though! Excellent job and keep it up.
Thanks Mates, for another great chapter. I hope to see a few more before Sunday’s episode, as I am right there with you wondering how we are on going to feel afterwards.
Wow hun, you never cease to amaze me and either have me hopping in a freezing cold shower…. or just going outside as it’s bloody cold here lol…. or holding my breath till the next update. Sadly like Kat, I aint got no one to take it out on!!!! lol I love this story, both your stories, and you know I’ll follow ya where ever you take us on this wonderful journey.
Happy Easter!!!! mwaah
Sorry for the delay in reading. I am catching up now tho. Yes shower scenes=good. However I still hav no one to take out all my horniness on :(