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Flicker Chapter 15: Burns
Previously:
With that Bette hesitantly stepped out of the broken automobile and followed Tina across the restaurant’s vast, moonlit exterior. She patiently watched as Tina unlocked her car doors, finally granting entrance to the vehicle’s sleek, well-kept interior. Both of them were quiet as they buckled up… and as cozy as it was inside, both women were trying their best to ignore the fact that there was a blanket of tension steadily looming around them. Silence served as the perfect backdrop to the endless discussions Bette was having inside her head, thinking that only just a few moments ago the night was nearly over… Little did she know that the night has just begun.
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“It’s that one over there.” Bette said pointing to her house as Tina pulled up by the curb. The attractive blonde stole a glance over by the passenger’s side as the olive toned woman deftly tried to unbuckle her seatbelt and reconfigure her blouse. Then suddenly Bette’s deep brown eyes came to meet hers.
“Tina… do you wanna come in?”
Tina stared at Bette for a while, a little taken aback by the request all Tina could manage was:
“Uhm, okay…”
She watchfully walked behind Bette, and as she did so, she couldn’t help but notice how beautiful Bette’s home truly was.
“Do you want anything to drink?” Bette asked right after she turned the key and pushed the door aside, leading Tina into the house.
“Sure.” Tina said, still a little bit in awe of her surroundings.
“Okay let me check what I have in the fridge.”
2 minutes later Bette was already crouched in front of the refrigerator scanning its contents when Tina joined her in the kitchen. “Let’s see… I have cola, juice, water and milk…” Bette enumerated, looking thoughtfully over her shoulder at Tina, the fridge’s yellow light brilliantly illuminating her caramel colored skin… emphasizing every inch of her delicate features, before suggesting:
“…But I could also make some coffee.”
“No… Bette you don’t have to”” Tina responded, thinking it would be much too bothersome a task to perform. But she knew that upon hearing her refusal, Bette wouldn’t take no for an answer.
“Coffee it is.” Bette uttered obstinately as she got up and took two mugs from one of the kitchen cabinets, setting them down by the small table at the side of the room where she and Tina would be sitting. They passed the time with a little exchange of random ideas and points of views as they waited for the water come to a boil. Minutes passed until Bette finally heard the silver kettle whistle stove by the stove. She got up turned the fire off then reached for the hot water filled container… “Oww!” Bette cried out, immediately pulling her hand away from the teapot’s hot, reflective surface. Within moments Tina was by her side trying to comfort her.
“Oh… Come here, let me see.” Tina tenderly instructed. Bette silently obeyed unaware of the watery state that fell upon her eyes. Tina cradled Bette’s injured hand in hers, hearing the determined brunette stifle sobs in between her breathing. At that moment Tina would have done anything to take the pain away, so she did the only thing she could think of at the time. She focused her eyes on Bette’s face slowly moving closer to her, temporarily taking Bette’s mind off what had just happened.
Then like an involuntary spark the moment ignited… and in a split fraction of a second everything fell into place. On the part of both women the moment was somewhere in between being done in the spur of the moment and being meticulously pre-meditated. Tina let her lips crush into Bette’s, grazing her tongue against the beautiful woman’s full lower lip, impatiently asking for permission to enter. Bette happily obliged though she wasn’t quite sure what had gotten over her. Tina was delighted to see that Bette’s lips still tasted like the berry infused sweetness of the dessert they just had at dinner. The kiss deepened and Tina let her hand move along the nape of Bette’s neck.
“Tina what are you…” Bette questioned in between the kiss.
Tina merely smiled as she softly pressed a finger onto Bette’s lips, gracing them with the soft feel of her touch. For a minute they just stood there listening pounding beats steadily coming from their hearts, their breaths were getting heavy, almost chaotic… and their bodies were rapidly responding, impatiently aching for more…
“I want this.” Tina confessed, whispering every single word into Bette’s ear…. her voice unintentionally triggering a series of chills to run up and down Bette’s spine.
“Do you want to go upstairs?” Bette asked still in a slightly breathless tone, trying her best to subdue the lust that threatened to overthrow her voice. Tina merely nodded and step after step they journeyed the short distance towards Bette’s bedroom. When they got there Tina watched as the tall, dark-haired beauty briefly left her side to turn on the lights, its glow illuminating the whole room, achieving almost the same effect as those that could have been created by slow-burning candles. Bette was now standing by the bed looking expectantly at her. Her arms were practically begging for Tina’s return. In their efforts to reach each other they actually met halfway, and Bette didn’t waste any time trying to get Tina’s clothes undone. Tina couldn’t help but smile at Bette’s eagerness, as she carefully tried to unclasp what she was wearing. Bette gently nudged Tina onto the bed, propping herself on top of her. She planted small kisses in strategic areas, first by starting just below Tina’s jaw, and gradually moving her way down to Tina’s neck, before savoring the supple flesh of Tina’s breast. Next she focused on the sensitive spot right behind Tina’s earlobe… eliciting another small moan to come forth from her girlfriend’s mouth, before finally turning her attention back towards Tina’s mouth. At this point Tina moved to unbutton Bette’s crisp white shirt, slowly sliding the light material off her tone and sun-kissed shoulders, completely stripping it off Bette’s luscious body. Tina ran her fingers all the way down towards Bette’s abdomen, feeling her lover’s muscles tense underneath her fingertips. She smoothed her palm across Bette’s stomach, experiencing the sense of having the lovely brunette’s warm mocha skin glide across hers.
By now their bodies were fully pressed onto each other, molding as if they were one. Tina felt their legs casually intertwine as she ran her fingers through Bette’s dark burgundy-brown tresses, fascinated with every curl her head possessed. She moved Bette’s hair to the side, clearing an imaginary path that she set out for herself across Bette’s smooth skin, beginning from Bette’s long and elegant neck, leading further down until it ultimately ended at the center of her collarbone. Tina wasn’t quite sure that what she was doing was right at first, but the soft whimpers she was able to obtain from Bette was more than enough encouragement. In the haziness that the moment brought on Tina just let her instincts direct her actions, and considering the kinds of responses she had managed to draw out from Bette, it was safe to assume that these instincts were “killer”. Bette playfully tugged at the elastic of Tina’s soft silk underwear, Tina couldn’t exactly recall what happened afterward… the next thing she knew was that Bette was inside of her, pleasuring her, like no other person had done before… she heard the bed move underneath her, as she felt herself uncontrollably thrash under Bette’s masterful touch… until finally reaching what one could call ecstasy…
Bette rolled onto her back beside Tina, quietly waiting for the exhausted blonde’s breath to even out… Suddenly she felt Tina’s hands grab her wrists, as she straddled herself on top of Bette assaulting her with a powerful torrent of kisses. It was at this point that Bette just let her emotions gush out, every fear… every insecurity was totally gone and out of sight. She laid there enjoying Tina’s touch, thinking every moment was unbelievable as Tina showed her the range of expertise she was actually capable of providing. Bette’s cries could be heard in various places of the house as Tina gave her what she had been yearning for all night. Bette kissed Tina one more time as both of them collapsed onto bed happy and exhausted.
Good night Bette…
Night Tina.
TBC soon if you want…
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(68 votes, average: 4.19 out of 5)
Please continue. Wonderful as always.
I’ve been avidly following this story, i really love it, and your wrting is superb. Though I am ashamed to say that I have been motivated to leave a comment because i will be first…yay me!
God, I’m a loser.
-lowers head in shame-
AND after all that, someone left a comment while i read the last chapter. Bugger.
If this is how you write whith a writers block then you sell yourself short. This is GOOD.
Yes again soon magic it was
Both these chapters were awesome. The words “I want this” said it all! They have much exploring to do ;) hurry back..
Ofcourse we want more and as soon as you can…. girl this is just great thanks
Great story please continue.
loved it!!! please continue!
I loved it! please continue!?
Just started reading it but this is good.
Your story is quite beautifully written. looking forward to next post.
Loved every word… Maybe she’s(callmecrazy’s) gonna get more into the gritty details of what was inside the girl’s minds the morning after, when both girls have enough time to think last night through… well here’s hoping you do… post soon…
This chapter was great. I think if you had gone into detail about their lovemaking, you would have taken away from how hastily this happened for them. I think the details would be great in their thoughts the morning after. The tempo of the story shows how eager they were to have each other and how it just…happened. Please continue.
WoW Very Hot and Sexy story you and Chicki are good written sotry keep it good thank you I love it funny and Sexy story.
Good Job with the sex scene.
Great sex scene…great story!
Good story….your descriptive expression is just right.
Wow that was awesome and beautiful, love it. Please post soon, thank you!
Love every single thing about this. Everything seemed so spontaneous, so unplanned. That’s the way things should be– natural. Don’t change a thing… except post more soon!
Do continue soon, your story is great and the block didn’t show at all.