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Flower Power: Chapter 1
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“I’d like to rub you another way, and I guarantee you’ll enjoy it.”
Alice whispered her reply as a deep throb resounded between her legs. “I bet you would. Pun intended.” Her words were bathed in fruity flavors that tickled Bette’s nose.
Nimble fingers slid a small card from the envelope previously attached to the breathtaking arrangement. Anxious eyes danced from word to word. A normally loud & clear voice became feather-light as she read the unmistakable script. ‘Meet me under a dome of white jasmine. Details to follow…” A school-girl smile crept onto Alice’s face as she realized Bette was referring to a song in her favorite opera. The Lakme fanatic had only mentioned The Flower Duet to Bette once. But with Bette Porter, once was all it took. She was a walking sponge…absorbing everything in her path.
“You never cease to amaze me Bette. I’ll meet you anywhere you want.” Alice smiled into Bette’s mouth and spoke softly. “You say the word and I’m there. The flowers are fabulous…just like you.”
In Bette’s opinion, Alice was remarkably easy. Easy in the sense of being carefree and flexible. She could navigate her way through a landmine of ambiguity and not freak out. Bette would have gone ballistic if someone had given her a card with a nebulous command scribbled on it. She was a certified control freak and proud of it. Most times.
It was no secret that Alice Piecieski was witty, intelligent and fun. And not to mention, attractive. She was the always the same person, yet embodied so many variations of herself. Her style of dress reflected her mood on any given day. It didn’t matter if she was clad in a baseball hat and rectangular glasses, cute pigtails & bandana, tousled hair & studded tee-shirt or a conservative business suit, Alice made Bette smile. Brightly.
There was no pause between Alice’s last whispered word into her girlfriend’s mouth and the passionate kiss that immediately followed. They spoke to each other in a language all their own. And just as their words varied in context and meaning, so did their affectionate expressions. Lips joined slowly while tongues met and blended. Deep kisses followed as competitive, territorial tongues nearly exchanged places. Chins, ears, necks, eyes, noses all fell victim to the A & B kissing game.
“You..” Alice panted and attempted to collect herself before continuing. “…are the absolute best kisser on the face of the earth Bette Porter.”
A broad trademark smile brightened an already sunny classroom. The sunlight outside was a pale comparison to the light coming from within.
“I think you’re biased Al,” Bette whispered as her warm tongue slowly darted in and out of her girlfriend’s ear. “So, what did your kids write about this week?”
“Bette can you call back later? I can’t think right now,” Alice teased. “Um…the theme was, ‘I Am Happy When…’ Each kid had to write a paragraph about what makes them happy.”
Bette raised her eyebrows disapprovingly. “Can 1st graders write a paragraph? That sounds pretty advanced if you ask me.”
“Well first of all, no one asked you Hot Stuff.” Alice retorted softly while nibbling on a soft, sleek neck causing Bette to giggle and flinch slightly. “And yes, my kids can most certainly write a paragraph. Nothing huge, just a few short sentences related to the same topic. The words are already there. The trick is getting my munchkins to put their thoughts on paper. Yeah, the spelling may be phonetic, but as long as they relay their feelings, they’ve achieved success.”
“Do I achieve success when I relay my feelings too?” Bette smiled.
“You most certainly do my Curly Whirly.”
“Okay…well.” Bette bit her bottom lip before allowing her thoughts to manifest. “I am happy when….I’m with you.”
“And I’m the luckiest girl in the world Bette.”
TBC
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OMGOMGOMG *runs off to read*
OMG! G-Star has entered the motherfucking building, holla! lol It’s so good to see you back! I was just re-reading some of your chapters and one in particular: the tree one…so hot! As much as I can no way see A Alice/Bette relationship(They just do nothing for me) this was pretty hot! Can’t wait to see how this unfolds! Post soon!
One more thing: Can we have Bette eating unhealthy junk food? that was too cute!
I’m with smiley on this one. Normally I’m like, “Alice and Bette…ewww.” But this was hot. I’m assuming you wrote the whole story in accordance to the challenge so I already feel a little sad for Alice.
OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG your back going to read it now
ok i am soooooooooooooo happy your back, you have scared me for life bette& alice lol it was hot though tina hurry up and get here.. 5 pages is good, longer
GT omg where have u been??? missed u love…well this was overwhelmingly cute and sexy!! plz bless us more with ur writing..toodles
Good to see you back.
Absolutely fantabulous! Welcome back…I missed you!
Oh my goodness. You do not understand how giddy I was to see your name on a story. And the story did not disappoint! Thank you and I am anxiously awaiting your next post. Peace /.
Wow it must be the holiday season, what a nice surprise. Greens it’s good to see you posting once again, you were missed.
Is this their relationship before Tina? There HAS to be a Tina…cause Alice & Bette (whereas this was kinda hot…ummm can’t see them together for long) Please bring on a Tina…NO HELENA PLEASE! Post soon.
I am so excited…going to go read now….don’t even care what it is about…just glad to see you.
You are amazing….you may have me wanting a Bette and Alice reunion…welcome back!
Greentea is back! Best news of the day, it’s been a long drought since Sun salutations.
heaven sent us back there angel.THANK GOD!i was sooo happy when i log on and saw your name that i fell out of my chair.anyway welcome!
Greentea is back!!!! hey babe, glad to see you back with a new tale. I missed you writing while you were gone. about the story, poor alice really can’t handle how freaking charming Bette is huh? can’t wait to see how this one goes down. again welcome back!
Greenie, glad that you will bless us wth another plot from the fertile ground that is your mind. I will be following along this journey as I did the last. I know that we will have fun.
OMG! OMG! It’s GREENTEA…what a day, what a day! Chicki, Ally, Gumby and GREENTEA!!!***doing a happy dance*** I absolutely LOVE your writing and I am soooo happy **HUGE GRIN***that you are back! Alice and Bette….not my favorite, but I don’t care…it will be hot with Greenie at the wheel!!! okay….I’m going to re-read this and breathe..**deep, yoga breathing***LOL!PPS.
Yeah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thank goodness your back…I can barely breathe I’m so excited…Oh, and so excited about this beginning…something new something different, and something happy, happy, happy…well hopefully. Pls Pls post again soon as I know your sitting on a bunch of completed chapters already…oh, did I say pls…This is how I pictured Bette and Alice
*yelling* Hey….everybody….yeah you…Green Tea is back. You know the author of Sun Salutations. Awesome right? As with those whose comments have preceded me, I was absolutely ecstatic to see that your name. I love the way you melodically compose phrases. Really, it can be nearly hypnotic. So B and A have been dating more than the 6 weeks we have been led to believe. All I have to say is that anyway, you decide to go with this, I know I will love it. Thank you for sharing.
Welcome back! This was a nice discovery after a long break from fanfic land. I look forward to seeing where this story leads.
Good to see you again Greantea and this is good start and can’t wait to see more. OK post soon please, thanks!
O.M.F.G…..greenie, is it really you? you can’t imagene how many times a day i would drink green tea and think about you, after awhile i had to switch to coffee because it became too painful LOL…..i’m so happy you’re back with a new story, i’m happy you’re still writing, i’m just happy
you are back! is so good! let us see how you will handle this.
Greenie…You’re back! Yea!! Excellent work. You’ve captured their personalities perfectly. Is Alice going to meet w/Heartache? PPS.
HEY GREEN!!! It made my night to see you back! Will enjoy following this story as i have with everything you have written. Looking so forward to your next post.
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!OMG!!!!! Its YOUUUUUU!!! Ok i gotta go and read the whole thing now but i dont care one bit who it is about…! You are baaaack…that totally made my day, my week and possibly a few more as well! :-D Ok..off to read now!!
Uh…excuse me while I write a memo to myself: Clarity, there are certain things in this life that are proven facts. For example, Michael Richards is nuts, Britney Spears has way too much money to not be wearing underwear, and Greentea’s fantastic writing style. With that said, now that Greentea has started a new story, you will no longer question the existence of God, Britney’s underwear…or Madonna’s love for Malawian babies. Welcome back like Kotter Greentea! Please raise your hand for a virtual high-5. Looking forward to your next installment of greatness…no pressure!
well well well, looked who popped up! very happy to see you baby girl. have sorely missed you. have lot to catch you up on. would love to hear bout your goings on. email me sometime sweetie. oh and about the story. loved it as always. ya know what your writing does for me. it still does. your great and im glad to see your still creating. thanks.
The Yoga Goddess is back, what a surprise, welcome back. Looking forward to reading what you have in store for us. Thank you.
WELCOME BACK yoga-girl, you’ve truly been missed and what an amazing comeback!!!! That was the hottest PG-13 post I’ve read in a while. There is just one thing I don’t understand – it sounds like Bette is in love with Alice, but how can that be…..when we all know she loves her soulmate Tina LOL :o)). I’m really looking forward to where this story is going, you’ve me hooked already :o))
Wow, green tea, where have you being. So glad to see you back, and I must say this story rocks! :)
I am presuming, before indulging in the next chapter, that this is going to result in the opera visit during which, Bette uses her fingers to, erm, ‘make Alice happy’ – And after which she finishes it for Tina?