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Flower Power: Chapter 6
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The vibration of Bette’s cell whisked her back to reality. She smiled into the phone.
“Well, aren’t you full of pleasant surprises?”
“Yes I am.” Alice calmly admitted. The next second, she was hyper with frantic words racing to some unknown finish line. “I was thinking about you and at first I thought that flowers would be cheesy because you sent me some recently….then I said, nope, not cheesy. You wanna know why?”
“Yes, I’d like to know why.”
“You’ve brought so much color to my life Bette. So, the flowers are bright and cheery because that’s how I feel when I’m with you.”
“Thank you, Sweetie. They’re incredible.“ Bette said before draining the last of her bottled water.
“You’re welcome Curly. So, how’s it going? I haven’t spoken to you since this morning.
Did you have a productive afternoon?”
“Not really and I’m not being very productive right now either.” That was indeed true. To be perfectly honest, Bette was so spent that she could hardly see straight.
The couple normally didn’t see each other on Mondays, so Alice was quite surprised at Bette’s next question.
“Do you feel like company Al? I’ve gotta get out of here before I go crazy.”
“Ahhh Curly Whirly, I wish you would have mentioned that earlier so I would have known. I have to prepare my lesson plan for next week and it has to be done by tomorrow,” Alice continued speaking in a firm tone. “Being distracted by you won’t help me.”
“So, I’m a distraction now?”
Alice paused. She couldn’t believe they were heading down this road for the umpteenth time. The tired teacher was not in the mood to stroke Bette’s ego. “This isn’t new information Bette, so don’t act like it is. You’ve always been a distraction and you know it. I can’t understand why you can’t remember that. Your selective memory really irks me Bette. You’re unbelievable. So fucking unbelievable.”
“You don’t have to be so mean about it Al.”
Alice’s voice escalated alongside her temper. She didn’t want to yell, but ended up doing just that. “I’m sorry Bette but I’m confused. You’re the one who proclaimed Mondays were off limits, so I usually find something to occupy my time. Now all of a sudden you’re available and you want me to suddenly be available too? Did I miss something?”
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your writing is so delicious, you just want to eat it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!
That was fantastic. You had me hanging on to the end of every sentence to see what was coming next.
I have to agree with annieb69! While your writing is great I just can’t get on the Alice and Bette thing. Don’t get me wrong there are some moments but it’s not enough to say I want them to be togther. Psot soon!
That whole flashback was just hot. And then I got to the end and felt bad for liking the flashback so much. lol
“No ‘mommy-body’ here. But it was without a doubt, a mother of a body.” You know I love the way you write greens. I also love the sound of JB’s voice, it is indeed yummy.
ah angel what you do to us mere mortals with your words. this was just fucking fantastic. hmmm…. a choice between al and tina. well slap me silly. i know my choice. love the descriptions cutie. thanks.
Oh dear. I see A Choice a-coming… and someone’s going to be mightily hurt after it. Great stuff, greentea.
I have to admit Bette and Tina are hot. But I still don’t like that Bette cheats on Alice and Tina cheats on her husband. May be Alice needs her own Monday distraction. Get more balance in her relationship with Bette.
hey greentea, thanks for the post. Bette is totally going to hurt poor Alice. It is also great to read that Tina has a life outside of her relationship with Bette. I think part of their downfall had to do with Tina losing herself in her partner. I like how she can stand on her on two feet in your stories. thanks for sharing your wonderful talent. I think you know by now that I love everything you write!!
alice has to go now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hot flashbacksssssssssss
hey what a bomb of a story..gette needs to dump alice and have tina full time everyone can still be freinds and all. or is tina still married to beaverhead..p.p.s.
Yes greentea, I am still laughing at the exchange between Alice and Jenny , referring to Monet. LOL! Loved the flashback of when Bette met Tina. These two are so sexy together add your writing talents and voila…Smokin’ HOT! I am always excited to read when you post a story. You never dissapoint. Post soon. Oh by the way…Tina as a florist= Flower Power. Clever!
to paraphrase you: “You sound so yummy when you write. I just want to pull the words out of your pen and swallow them. Does that sound perverted?” LOL….such a wonderful delightful story…i think though that time is coming when Bette will have to make her choice…i hope it’s Tina, they seem to have deeper connection
forgot to mention: The Monet conversation was my favorite…do you know it was improvised?
Greenie your writing is amazing, you know I think that :o)) I’m intrigued and captivated, but it’s also tough to read – this story is a mystery to me because of how it makes me feel!!! BTW it’s not only Bette’s voice that is YUMMY!!! LOL. Post soon…
Whoa! Tina Kennard? I missed a chapter!!! I have to go back and come back again. Ha!
Bette is the playa’s playa – she has perfect balance. How does she do two women in a day? “Bette seized this moment as she did most others.” I love your writing. I love your Bette.
Good chapter and love it!
Wow greentea! you certainly have an awesomely yummy way with words! Super writing, although Bette and Tina cheating is not so great. Pls post soon …
Hey Green Tea, This is an extraordinary tale as both Bette and Tina are in committed realtionships with Alice and a husband however are drawn together as the moth is to the flame. They need and want the heat of their dalliances but know that is may cconsummed and destroy them. IT is possible to love two people at the same time however if you have to hide it and have weekly getaways to continue it then I do think that everyone will get hurt in the end. There will be tears. That siad it is a brilliant story with the charcters fleshed out and real. More please as soon as you can. Much gratitude from Your Loyal Fan.
hello there my friend. i have been pretty MIA from the site due to work/baby and am just now catching up on some of my favorites, which you of course, are a leader in that pack.i hope alls well and please know that i am loving your story.
Oh yeah, I’m still laughing about the Alice/Jenny fight club. I’m still laughing about the basketball game and Jenny drinking coffee on the court!
I love this story…I can’t wait to see what happens next. Please keep posting.
Your writing always put a smile on peoples face :O) – it is amazing so keep posting